Date: 07/02/09 02:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty One
Wow, I feel for Bill.
So, I'm thinking his sickness has something to do with the makeup he was wearing, although it didn't seem to affect the other women. Maybe their bodies had become accustomed to it?
Loved the update and I look forward to more.
Author's Response: It actually does affect the others, but the thing is, there was like three or four different ways to make makeup. Hannah, for example, wears the egg based one. Bill just happens to like the look of the lead based one. I don't think he realizes what exactly is in it though.
Date: 07/02/09 02:12 am Title: Prologue One: Modern Day Berlin
oooh! good glad to know that bill won't be all alone in the furutre....alone, thsats what you meant right? lol that geo and Tomi are coming with him?
Date: 07/02/09 02:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty One
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Date: 07/02/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty One
Amazing! Simply AMAZING! I love how you made Bill react after such a loss. He's seriously depressed but I hope he can get through this! You have to give me more, master!
I want it! I need it!
*sighs*
*squeals* Scandinavia! I'm going near there soon! *dances*
Author's Response: I will give you more if you bring back something for me from Scandinavia . . .
Date: 07/02/09 12:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty One
OMG I really hope bill is okay and they dont have to separate for too long because that would make me terribly sad and I don't do well with sad... I'm still so emo about them losing the baby and oooh i just hope everything gets better for them!!!
Author's Response: They are striking out left, right and center lately, but in the end, all will work out more than fine.
Date: 07/02/09 12:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty One
what the hell is wrong with bill! please DON'T send him back to the future.
Author's Response: He is going back. But hey, Tom and Geo are going too XD
Date: 07/01/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty One
omg! synnie!! lead poisoning isn't it???? as well as the depression, omg omg, poor tom! althoug i also feel for Bill, this chapter was mroe aimed at Tom. and and, omg oyur not gonna send Bill away tot he future are you???? omg
Author's Response: Actually, yes XD But Tomi and Geo are going on the trip too XD
Date: 06/28/09 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I loved the story you came up with for toms dreads.
Author's Response: XD Danke!
Date: 06/26/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
yeah i cried. you know your SO mean :(. make it better or i wont share my cookies LOL :D
Author's Response: I will definately make it better. I want cookies XD
Date: 06/26/09 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
thanks, but plpease don't give me false hoe. i really wanted them to have a cild. and it should be a boy as beautifull as billa but as courageous and fierce as tom.
Author's Response: I hope what I have planned will live up to what you're looking for.
Date: 06/26/09 08:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I didn't cry, but I did choke up. I know well the pain and anguish of a miscarriage, and I can identify with what Bill is going thorough. I trust, however, that he will mend, as I did. He has people who love and care for him, and now he just needs to take the time required to heal. I hope Tom is able to help him.
I believe we should hold a moment of silence for the little one who will never grace this story with little footstpes and laughter...
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*is silent*
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Beautiful chapter, full of everything it needed to be.
Author's Response: *Smiles softly* This review really touched me. I really can't say anything more. It just really did. Thank you.
Date: 06/25/09 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I almost cried, i couldn't! i am supposed to study and the worst is that my mom is by my side. The good part is that she doesn;t know english. Why did you do that? i wanted bill to be a father
Author's Response: I did that because, well, that's how Bill's body works.
Date: 06/25/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Me. I cried. Evil, you are evil. Now, make Bill pregnant again, and don't let him lose it.
Author's Response: You know, I've been called evil alot lately . . .
Date: 06/25/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
That was evil.
But it was expected, I am sure the lead poisoning wasn't helping him and the child any.
Author's Response: Nein, it really didn't help at all.
Date: 06/25/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
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Date: 06/25/09 02:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I cried, dammit! ;____;
Author's Response: *huggles* Aww
Date: 06/25/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I liked both manips but #2 is my favorite=D
*gasps* THE BABY DIED....Oh my lord!
I don't even know how i feel about what happened, but no, i didn't cried..so i guess that's good right?
I'm kinda mad though, but i won't say anything else 'cause i'm a little ignorant when it comes to this topic. Therefore, i don't know how the whole baby thing goes for intersex people and shouln't really give my opinion.
But i CAN give my opinion about the miscarriage.
I think that it doesn't matter if you're intersex or not, a baby is a baby, and loosing your child like that must be the one of the worst things that could ever happen to a mother.
I hope this doesn't affect their relationship though, i know they must be devasted with the news, but they have to be strong and take care of each other!But i still think that their relationship as a couple is going to change...
What i don't like is that they just overcame a big obstacle in their lives, yet here comes another problem to make them suffer even more...can't they be happy for a single second?!*sighs*
Tom burnt the baby? If i was Bill, i would've freaked out big time man!! I get it has to do with their royalty but THATS MY BABY YOU'RE BURNING!!
Sorry if i'm overreacting but that's what i think...
Author's Response: *goes back to see which one number two is* Intersexed people CAN carrying kids...if they have the right combination. There are like 4 different types and like 7 branches of each type. It's crazy hard to keep track of. Miscarrying IS one of the hardest things ever. Though I think having your child die in your arms is much worse *feels bad for my sister all over again*. It will affect them to an extent. The next handful of chapters are going to be rough. But don't worry. You know me, I make it all work out. And yes, Tom did burn the baby. It's really not as cruel as it may seem. Even though the child didn't really live, it was still given the funeral of kings. I don't know that I'd react much different than Bill did. I think there'd be too much shock .
Date: 06/25/09 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I did, I wasn't supprised though, I knew it was coming. You said before Bill couldn't keep a baby to term. He'd have to go back to the future to manage that. Or have a divine intervention. Poor Tom, is this gonna hurt their relationship badly?
Author's Response: *Nods* I tried warning earlier, but people like Bill) got so caught up, many of them forgot. This are definately gonna get rocky in the next handful of chapters.
Date: 06/25/09 11:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I cried! My best friend got pregnant and she lost her baby, too, so it reminded me of that.
Can't Bill keep just one baby? Pleeeeease? It's absolutely the WORST thing ever to miscarry.
Author's Response: I have to disagree. The things worse than miscarrying it so give birth...and about twenty minutes later, have the child take it's last breath as you hold it and can't do anything to help it. That happened to my sister. And I'm sorry for your and your friends loss (I say you because you would've had a part in it's life too, I'm sure.) And don't worry. I PROMISE there will be a child, and it will all end happy.
Date: 06/25/09 11:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty
They lost the baby!! They lost the baaaaaabbyy..!!!! *sob*
I want them so much to have a baby!!TT^TT It hurts so much to lose a child.. - although I haven't really experienced that. But I know it hurts..T^T
Author's Response: *Nods* Losing a child is one of the worse things in the world. But things WILL get happier for them.