Date: 07/27/09 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
eww scalp cutting. What is the deal with the makeup? Is it going to affect the baby??
Author's Response: The scalp cutting scene was probably one of my favourites to write.
Date: 07/27/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I hope Tom gets to billa in time!
the lord josef manip is hilarious BTW
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so too! I cracked up making it
Date: 07/27/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
yaah tom has help.
Date: 07/27/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
OMG. Is Tom's brother bushido.....oh LE GASP is right!
Date: 07/27/09 02:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
yaaaa. I love sappy tom
Date: 07/27/09 02:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Booo Tom brother. Dirt bag
Date: 07/27/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Haha bill and tom are suffering from separation axniety
Date: 07/27/09 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I have a strong feeling that something bad is going to happen while bill goes out trading.
BTW doesn't Bill know pulling out doesn't help anything. ;)
Author's Response: It was a good attempt at least! XD
Date: 07/27/09 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Poor tom.
I'm glad he and bill have come to an understanding. Hopefully they start a real relationship.
Author's Response: I'm a sap . . .of COURSE they start a real relationship XD
Date: 07/27/09 12:39 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Bill is going to get pregnant isn't he?
Author's Response: You know it XD
Date: 07/27/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter Nine
omg. That was hot! up until tom punched him the nose XD
Author's Response: *laughs* Well, it can't be ALL hot
Date: 07/27/09 11:51 am Title: Chapter Eight
haha Bill you idiot! that kind of stuff is meant for late nights.LOL
Author's Response: Some people just can't wait! XD
Date: 07/27/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter Seven
Tom didn't ask about the tongue ring? and what about the eyebrow piercing, assuming he still has it.
Author's Response: Well, tattoos and piercings have existed forever, especially among more heathen cultures.
Date: 07/27/09 11:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four
So, after thinking about this chapter while i was at work last night (shame on me! i know) i decided i have more to say. first off, i still dont hate hannah. however, i dont want bill to beg for forgiveness or anything. i think that he can tell them he understands, but that he is still. because while that may have been the best option Tom had for getting an heir (since bill can't and I still think that's unfair), but it still sucks, and it still must hurt bill a lot. plus, its like a constant reminder of what he lost, and what he can't give tom. so i think tom needs to treat billa extra special for a while.
my second comment is on the things bill bought (boughten is not a word, oh lord please fix it!). it still makes me laugh, i think its great and sooo bill. :) but i was thinking. why were condoms or something not on his list. what are they going to do to prevent bill from getting pregnant? because it would be so horrible and traumatic for him to get pregnant again, and then lose another baby. unless he gets to carry one to term, but it seems unlikely at this point, that would make the hannah thing suck even more. ok, thats my 10 cents i guess. still love the story and can't wait for the rest. you are one of the authors where i am tracking multiple stories. and hey--you already beat your goal of 400 reviews. :)
Author's Response: *laughs* Nice. I thought about stories all the time at work. I'm glad you came back to tell me more! Yay for still not hating Hannah. I agree with you, it's not going to be easy for Billa at all and he will need extra TLC. I totally forgot about condoms. Pfft. Way for me to promote safe sex. I suck. As for my 'boughten' moment. . .well. . . I generally do my writing at 1-3am . . . come that time, I usually stop when I go either cross eyed and they won't uncross, or I just faceplant. So in some of my unbeta'd stuff, you'll see horrific things like that when my brain stops working. I thought I fixed that, but I guess not. anyways, thanks for your extra feedback, and I can't believe I hit over 400!
Date: 07/27/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter Five
I like the fact that bill is trying. I would have given up as soon as i realized what had happened.
Author's Response: Most people would've, but not our Billa.
Date: 07/27/09 10:43 am Title: Chapter Four
eww scalps..oops correction. SCALP.
I hope bill knows how to make dresses of this era and not some slinky slutty dress. LOL
Author's Response: I have a thing for scalps in this story XD It wouldn't be too hard. Just look at what everyone else is wearing and make it. . .sparkly XD
Date: 07/26/09 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
no need to ask twice :D! i love this story so much I'd write all the reviews myself ^_^
Author's Response: YAY! thanks so much
Date: 07/26/09 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Four
oh good, i forgive hannah. lol, i love billa's shopping list. he is so funny but so smart. :) keep up the great work, i was so excited to see so many chapters!
Author's Response: Yay! Hannah's forgiven. Alot of people are pissed at her right now XD
Date: 07/25/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty Four
the only thing that i would like to ask is at least to make tom suffer before he gets with bill again...at least that`s what it looks like...i`m pretty sure that would make a lot of your readers happy (to make him suffer i mean)luv your story and please don`t make us wait for too long i`m pretty sure I`m not the only one waiting.
Author's Response: It'll be up on wednesday and I hope no one's disappointed