Date: 03/09/09 03:15 am Title: Prologue
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I really like it.
Date: 03/09/09 02:05 am Title: Chapter 7
aww,,update VERY VERY SOON plz thx=]
Author's Response: yesh! :D
Date: 03/09/09 01:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Cute chapter. ;D
Author's Response: Thankee!! I love cute scenes of them together :D
Date: 03/09/09 01:10 am Title: Chapter 7
Awwwwww nothing like a heart to heart after meaningless sex :) I'm glad they made up or whatever you want to call that... This chapter was cute... It makes me wonder even more about Bill though.. I love how you slip in more hints every chapter... makes it a great read so keep it up XD
Author's Response: Thanks! I try lol
Date: 03/07/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hehe. I liked how Tom tripped them. Poor Bill and his jokes getting out of hand on him. Love it. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Bill didn't expect that reaction at all.
Date: 03/07/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
aww lz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: Just did :)
Date: 03/07/09 10:52 am Title: Chapter 6
Awwie, is little Tom a bis messed up? Has a crush on...Biiiiilll? *teases Tomi* Just wait, just you wait, you can't stay away from him, you lurvvvv him *giggle*
Okay, enough with the teasing. xD I adore this story, I hope you'll be able to give us more of it soon ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! I like teasing readers too. XD
Date: 03/06/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwwww poor Bill.. The mental struggle Tom is feeling is fabulously and elaborately written. I love reading every last detail in this fic. It's getting amazing... I really love you for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's a very nice comment. Thanks for reading and hope you keep enjoying.
Date: 03/06/09 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
God...Bill, it's hard, N't it? To hold back from what you want so much just because he doesn't KNOW! And Tom...Tomi, Tomi, can't you feel it? It happens every time you're near him. Your heart knows who it is and is calling to him, please don't ignore it!
Author's Response: :) I feel like you wrote this with me.
Date: 03/06/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really, truly love this story like my own child, so I can imagine how much you're proud of it.:) Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: wow, thanks. Such a great comment. I feel really flattered. Ahh...I'm afraid to continue lol
Date: 03/06/09 05:34 pm Title: Prologue
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!! *is still needy*
Date: 03/04/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is a really fantastic story. We're so used to seeing Bill in all his glory, that it's hard to imagine him anything but beautiful. This really shows how humans can be so harsh against people, no matter what sets them apart be it race, religion, or looks.
Great Job.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad to know. Yeah, it's pretty sad how rude people can be even if it's not their intention. :/
Date: 03/04/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really liked this. Gotta love that technology, saving peoples asses XD
Author's Response: Thank you. I can't imagine not living in this era of technology. I don't know how my grandmother carried on without cell-phones, laptops and such. *shudder*
Date: 03/04/09 06:51 am Title: Chapter 5
OHOHOH!!! Be still my heart! What iz dis? Tomi has needles in his heart? He takes pills for it? Mom knows something he doesn't?
Bill obviously doing his thing and going back to 'normal' before he faces Tom? Crying over the Notebook in what seems to be the story of THEIR life?
AHHHHHHH, YOU'RE KILLING ME!!
Author's Response: Dang, you're good! Reading between lines, eh? I'm glad it's killing you....in a good way XD
Date: 03/04/09 06:03 am Title: Prologue
Crushing is one step closer, so, yesh! ^__^
Date: 03/04/09 02:29 am Title: Chapter 5
oh wow, i have a very slight inkling as to where this is heading, but i really cannot wait for you to elaborate more.
and omg, TT_TT the note book, i've only ever been able to watch that movie twice, it made me cry so hard both times TT_TT
please do update darling!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah notebook is so sad! I've only cried with the Notebook and Forrest Gump :'(
Date: 03/04/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 5
This is really different; I'm intrigued.
But I can't quite wrap my head around Bill being ugly. XDD
Author's Response: lol, I know! But wait for the upcoming chapters, when Bill's true form comes out. :D
Date: 03/04/09 01:23 am Title: Chapter 5
O.O I wasn't expecting that. Tom on anti-depressant pills? Wow.
I have to say, after this chapter I can really picture how Bill is, you know? I mean I always had a basic idea but now I really see him. Visually. The way he would act, they way he would talk. I can't really explain it. But I see Bill sort of being very...sort of...gah! this is really hard to explain and I'm probably confusing the hell outta you. ^ ^;
Basically, I really see the character you've created in him and I love it. xD
Very surprising chapter with Tom and the pills. Adds more of a story to Tom. I like.
okay, I'll stop rambling ^ ^;
great work~
can't wait for the update =D
Date: 03/04/09 12:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Ooh real Bill almost f*d up in the dark room! That whole Tom having seperation depression was interesting... I love it and can't wait to figure out exactly how they're connected and why tom doesn't recognize/cant remember him. This is really interesting and you've totally got me hooked! XD
Author's Response: So glad you're liking it. I give subtle hints in every chapter. XD
Date: 03/03/09 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh! So Bill was in his normal form and Tom almost caught him! I can't wait to find out Bill's story. What a mystery.
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah! He almost got caught. Bill's story will be revealed in future chapters (about three or four) which will be pretty sci-fish but I do want to explain everything, and then it gets on to the good kinkier parts. lol