Date: 03/11/09 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is absolutely wonderful. Consider me officially enthralled.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad to know. Thanks.
Date: 03/11/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well that was unexpected. I mean, I figured Bill'd show up, but the hair thing...
Author's Response: hehe. I have a blast reading your reactions.
Date: 03/11/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gods, I can't even begin to tell you how...enthralling this really is. The story is so wonderful, so real but unreal at the same time. It really makes you want to come back for more.Great job! Update quicker to satisfy our desperate needs please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! I hope to keep you all entertained. I know when I look for a fic I tend to look for the slash fics lol but yeah I will include that here. Gotta please everyone, but mostly myself *evil grin*
Date: 03/11/09 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Amazing, as always.
I think this story deserves way more reviews than it's getting.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm just pleased to know people are reading.
Date: 03/11/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story! You've done a great job with the mystery of it all. I can't figure out what's going on and it's making me nuts. But that's a credit to you. :D
Author's Response: Thanks! Won't be long before I "unveil" all secrets. And then some!
Date: 03/11/09 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ooh yet another doubly interesting twist :) This plot is so sooo well thought out! I just love it. and the whole Tom doing green day was so sweet! I can't wait to read more. Thank you THANK YOU For the speedy updates!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it. Well, the thing is, when I write my stories I usually have them all thought out before I start posting. I had written many chapters of this fic before I started posting so that's why you get speedy updates. I hope I can keep it that way. But even if it's not fully written yet, I just have to develop all the ideas that I annotated to continue the story. :)
Date: 03/11/09 09:01 am Title: Chapter 8
The proloque was so interesting that I had to read the rest. It's very interesting, can't wait to see where it's going :)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you like it.
Date: 03/11/09 08:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh I love all the secrets!
Author's Response: :) Thanks.
Date: 03/11/09 06:53 am Title: Chapter 8
*_*
Author's Response: LOL
Date: 03/11/09 05:32 am Title: Chapter 8
Ooooh ^^ A bug? *snort* Could it have beeeeeen...Bill's almighty, black hair xP
This is getting really exciting. And I mean, REALLY. I can't WAIT to read more *_* !
Author's Response: lol yeah Tsk, Silly Bill! Forgot to tie it :P (But well, he did not expect to meet Tom outside the gym, afterall)
Date: 03/11/09 03:43 am Title: Chapter 8
So... you pretty much kick ass at this story telling thing. I'm hooked, keep it coming. :)
Author's Response: Ahhh thanks! Inspiring review :) love it. I can't wait to find out how you all react to what's coming..
Date: 03/11/09 02:19 am Title: Chapter 8
omg..plzplz update soon thx so much=-]=]
Author's Response: trying!! *Kicks RL in the butt and goes to type*
Date: 03/09/09 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww, well, I wish Bill would just go. I love those weird twinges and feelings that keep popping up at Tom...I wonder what those mean XD
Author's Response: Oops, too late to respond but I guess you did notice he did go :)
Date: 03/09/09 08:18 pm Title: Prologue
I swear I'm not cheating! ~_^
Date: 03/09/09 02:02 pm Title: Prologue
I adore Tom<3
Author's Response: Yeah, he can be really cute :D
Date: 03/09/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww, Tomi is SO deep in it ^^ So far gone. Ah, lovely. :)
Author's Response: Yup XD One thing we writers have in common is we like to torture poor Tomi.
Date: 03/09/09 06:40 am Title: Chapter 7
This story is so freakishly amazing and I can't wait to read more. I am riveted. *_* And I think more people need to read this, so I will work on that... :D
Author's Response: wow gosh thanks! When I'm in the middle of writing a fic, I try not to read too much others work cause wow does it kill my muse lol I feel self conscious about my writing afteward -_-
Date: 03/09/09 05:52 am Title: Chapter 7
I don't know why more people haven't reviewed this. I guess they're put off by the idea of ugly but personally I find your story fascinating and very original. Just one comment though. "It is I who shouldn’t have embarrassed you in front of your friends,” Bill said. I think It is I sounds a bit dated to me maybe "I was the one who ..." That's just my opinion though. Loving the story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, it happens all the time. I'm guilty too. I've read some great stories that I ignored in the beginning because I did not like the categories or the warnings or genre :/ Sometimes the summary didn't seem too appealing.rnrnThanks for pointing that out. Bill is blaming himself for what happened, that's why I wrote it like that. My first language is not English but Spanish so I know I make loads of mistakes. I can't post anything without it having revised by the beta first.
Date: 03/09/09 04:58 am Title: Chapter 7
This is one of those stories where you re-read every chapter more than once just because you're afraid you might have missed something.
I like your style and pacing, leaving us crumbs in each chapter and so, slowly revealing more and more....
And it's nice that we're only seeing this from Tom's pov, making us feeling confused together with him.
Poor Tom, though... He's in for quite a ride!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! Yeah, everything is from Tom's POV and it's hard trying to maintain it while also trying to let people know of Bill's feelings by the way he interacts with Tom. :)
Date: 03/09/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 7
GAH, he almost did it, even if he didn't know what! *flails* Bill sensed he was there first omg! I am loving this soooo much. God, it's gonna kill me when we go back to the point where Bill is shown in his true self and Tom was breathless at his beauty, but it's gonna mean even more when Tom still went to him looking like he did. The heart is still the same and he could be disgused as a girl even and their hearts would still find and beat for each other.
Tomi, you need him more than you think you do.
Author's Response: *nods* A+ for you.