Date: 03/14/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Gripping chapter! It's been a while since I've found something to read that had me on the edge of my seat like this. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm flattered :)
Date: 03/14/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow
Okay, so this story is way cool, and I am completely in love with it. And I feel really dumb for not having seen it before.
I really, really like the way you ordered of the chapters. At first it was confusing, the jump from prologue to 1, but in the end it was genius to give us a glimpse of the middle of the story at first.
It is the middle right? Jw
I feel like this is one of those stories where you think you know the twist in the end, and then find out you were very, very wrong. So, although I feel like you have given a few hints here and there, this story has enough twists to keep me from guessing anything.
I am sooooo excited for the next update!
DCB
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review!! I thought it'd be a good idea to put the scene in the prologue first sort of like a hook. I figure many already have the right idea about what's happening, and others are way off LOL, but it is good to see the different speculations.
Date: 03/13/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMFG...PLPLPLPLZZZZ update soon y goodness hurry hehe=]
Date: 03/13/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh God! I'm so addicted bby. Thanks for updating so soon :D
Date: 03/13/09 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well, that fits with chapter one quite wel. I was wondering when you were going to explain that. I was so confused, but I kept reading cos the rest of the chappies were good. And of COURSE you got featured! This is bloody freaking amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I somehow can't believe the fic being feature. It's like "They're talking about me??" lol XD
Date: 03/13/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
So mysterious O_O
I'm totally hooked :D
Author's Response: Excellent. I know I'm doing my job.
Date: 03/13/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
I just read all of the chapters of this story today. I'm addicted. Such an orginal plot and the characters are so unique. I'm very much looking forward to Tom seeing the real Bill. I can feel like there's something we're missing, I can feel it like Tom is supposed to know Bill, that he should know him but can't remember. That's just the feeling I get, I'm sure I'm not the only one. Your style of writing is incredible and I'm never bored for a single moment. You have an incredible imagination for thinking up this entire scenerio. I'm very excited and interested to see what happens next. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the inspiring review! XD
Date: 03/13/09 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
That's all there is? But I was really getting into this story. I must read Moar! :)
I like this a lot, it's so different to what I normally read, It's really good, I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! :) There's more coming!
Date: 03/13/09 07:12 pm Title: Prologue
GASP! NO MORE! *sob*
omg this is so awesome! i started it this morning when i saw it on the feature page, the reviews on it got me interested so i clicked ... and OMMIGOD i actually screamed no! when i saw there wasn't any more chapters.
and you know, almost the every time someone calls bill ugly or his name and ugly is in the same sentence, in the back of my mind, a hundred tiny versions of myself are running around screaming, "BLASPHEMY BLASPHEMY, BLASPHEMY!!!" but hey that's just my mind that's accustomed too hot,drool-all-over!Bill.
so.. anyways, I commend you, this story is just .... god i can't even describe it! it's actually a story, not just bill and tom thrown together in some unrealistic circumstance... and the best bit? I have absolutely no idea where this is going, normally with other fan fics i can guess and pretty much be right but hey, i keep getting all the wrongs answers on this one! damnit, you've stumped me... nice pen name btw :)
Author's Response: Hi!! LOL I know what you mean!! This story came to me as an idea when I noticed just how much I love Bill. You'll see how I see him in future chapters. I sorta worship him so yeah :)
Date: 03/13/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
i absolutly LOVE this story, its the first one i look for when i log in, plz update soon!
Author's Response: aww really? thank you!!
Date: 03/13/09 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Fantabulous!! Update soon?!
Author's Response: Thanks. Ok, working on it. ^^
Date: 03/13/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
Urgh, I just started reading this today but I feel like I need more already. I love this story bby, it's so unique, you've done a great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 03/13/09 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
man,this is strange
in the 1st chapter was Tom dreaming? cuz in the 2nd one he doesn't remember a thing...
Author's Response: Hi! No he's not dreaming. That was the prologue. It's a scene that happens later in the story as it progresses.
Date: 03/13/09 08:53 am Title: Chapter 8
haha!is it a bug? XD
I finally read the last posted chapter *sigh*
I wish i discovered this story when it was already finished.But following great stories and see their evolution is a great experience too so...I hope you're writing like a mad woman now,hehe...I love your fic,and thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for all your reviews! I'm glad to know you're enjoying it. I know it is confusing but all shall be explained. :D
Date: 03/13/09 08:32 am Title: Chapter 6
AW poor Tom.He's internaly conflicted.This is getting better and better
Date: 03/13/09 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh!When Bill is sad Tom is too.They are connected.So if Tom had those symptoms since he was little,Bill must have been a very lonely and sad child that's why his feelings were mirored on Tom's.His sadness comes from the fact that he misses Tom?Was Tom his "brother",his whatever you call it but bonded to him?Hmmm....He studied humans through the books,then.Maybe I'm wrong at some parts but that's how i understand it o_o
Date: 03/13/09 08:05 am Title: Chapter 4
LAWL!!Bill:"I wouldn't know" XD You're not human!
In his non-human form or fairy or whatever form,he's so beautiful that people fawn over him all the time and he wanted to escape it?Or people want him like the gys at the first chap.
Anyway i still love this
Date: 03/13/09 07:57 am Title: Chapter 3
LMAO!!It's so adorable!I think I am fan of ugly!Bill lol!he acts so freaking cute.and I love the scene with Tom and THE BITCHES
Date: 03/13/09 07:44 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh,and At first I thought that i would 've loved to not read the first chapter first(or the prologue where we see Bill transform.)It would've been cooler if i didn't "know" what will happen already *sigh* but i still like this very much and indeed,it's very original and so well writen.You certainly deserve the feature.I love this!
Date: 03/13/09 07:42 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG this is hilarious!!