Date: 03/26/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
....that's a good question, isn't it? Simone is not surprised, of course, but why does she think Bill died at birth? Unless it's a memory thing and made her forget? Whoever is behind all this, etc. because there IS a reason why Bill feels the need to hide behind this image....
But awww, poor Tom! He finally admitted to himself he fell in love with the ugly boy, only to find that said ugly boy was in fact not so ugly and IS his TWIN BROTHER.
I feel for him, really. :-(
Date: 03/26/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
....that's a good question, isn't it? Simone is not surprised, of course, but why does she think Bill died at birth? Unless it's a memory thing and made her forget? Whoever is behind all this, etc. because there IS a reason why Bill feels the need to hide behind this image....
But awww, poor Tom! He finally admitted to himself he fell in love with the ugly boy, only to find that said ugly boy was in fact not so ugly and IS his TWIN BROTHER.
I feel for him, really. :-(
Author's Response: Yeah, I totally crushed/ripped his heart out. But that's what I figure would happen when he found out it was his twin brother :/rn
Date: 03/26/09 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 12
*hugs Tom close* oh poor thing. Poor Bill too. This was a great chapter.
And to be honest, I totally forgot about the twincest rating XD I don't see it when I read a new chapter, so it slipped my mind XD
Author's Response: Thank you. lol well, I usually check the twincest rating first when I read TH fics, cause I preferentially want to read the bill/tom steamy scenes. :P
Date: 03/26/09 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'm curious, too. What happened to Bill?
Author's Response: Bill's story is coming up in about two more chapters. :)
Date: 03/26/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
I was so caught up in the sci-fi aspect of the story that I didn't even notice the twincest category! But yeah, you definitely shocked us. Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: lol yeah. Thanks. Hope I can keep it up.
Date: 03/26/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
awwwwww
*tear*
Author's Response: =/
Date: 03/26/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
aww plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: =D
Date: 03/26/09 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awwwwwwwww wow that was so sad! I feel so awful for poor Tom... gains a brother and a broken heart... how sad for him! Keep up the fabulous work, I'll be waiting!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll try posting soon.
Date: 03/26/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww!Poor twins.
Thank you for the chappie,that was awesome.I need to read moaaar!XD
Yeah,that's a good question too.Where did Bill live then?Where did he learn to put on glamours etc...And the weird guys who had the hots for him,who are they?I guess i'll wait like a good girl for the answers in your chaps ^_^
Author's Response: Welcome! Yeah, the answers will come soon :)
Date: 03/26/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawww poor toooom D:
ei! he just forget about the G's xDDD and bill :0 oooh
so... bill is a living dead or a child living with the doctor that said that he was dead? xD or a god :0 naah xDDDDDD
I love your fic *-*
and
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :DDDDDDD
well... bye ;D
see u :D SOOON ¬¬ xDD
.nekito.
Author's Response: lol thanks! Not a living dead. God? lol nope.
Date: 03/26/09 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awwwwwh poor Tomiiiih ;____; I feel an explanable urge to go and...gather poor Tomi in my arms and...hug him sooooo tight. And then go to Bill and do the same...Gawd, I feel so bad for them. Poor twinnies *-*
*hugs you too for this, yet again, lovely chapter*
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, poor Tom. Every time I read a fic where they struggle to be together, I really feel for them. :/
Date: 03/26/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
That was so emotionally powerful. Excellent job, I am excitedly and patiently waiting for the next part.
Author's Response: Thank you. I had a difficult time writing this. I can't imagine really what it'd be falling in love with someone and then finding out they're your sibling. Must have a dire effect obviously >_< so I sorta tried making it look like that.
Date: 03/26/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
AWWWWWWWWW poor Tom...I just wanna hug him. *sniffs* this is soooo good!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll make it up to Tom later :)
Date: 03/25/09 01:32 am Title: Chapter 11
more soon PLEASE!
Date: 03/22/09 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
wooooooooooow
I mean, it always seemed to be a possibility, but the confirmation that they are DEFINITELY brothers really surprised me.
Hmmmm, it just seems so strange that they're brothers though. Bill has these other worldly qualities that Tom doesn't seem to have. He must have been taken or something, to another time or another world. Or maybe it was Tom who was taken...
Okay, sorry, review time.
Incredibly suspenseful, I honestly don't think I took a breath while they were in Tom's room. And then afterwards I was all shaky, and I felt my chest collapse a bit. You know, the typical reaction when a great story all of the sudden twists on you.
This is just spellbinding all around. Not once have I been disinterested or feeling as though something was lacking. It's amazing how the story sucks you in so quickly. It's a true talent, honestly, to be able to tell stories the way you're telling this one.
I am on the edge of my seat! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
DCB
Date: 03/22/09 02:49 am Title: Chapter 11
stare. stare. stare. stare. stare. blink.
*faint* *gets back up, brushes self off*
wow... bombshell much?
you know, deep down, i was expecting this, really I was.
Damn. Kudos to you and your cliffie. I shall now sit in front of this computer and wait until you update again.
*looks around the room* hmm... I should get some coffee...
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad to know you were. I gave so many hints and people were still shocked but it's cool. I like the reactions. rnrnOh, I love sitting in front of my computer with a cup of coffee :)
Date: 03/22/09 12:43 am Title: Chapter 11
They're brothers?!!?!?!?!?!?!! What the fuck ;____;, and Bill it's beautiful, mmmmmmmmm I like the ugly Bill too
Author's Response: Yup. Glad you liked ugly Bill. XD
Date: 03/21/09 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
o.O omg...
QUICK! NEXT CHAPTER!!
Author's Response: m'kay
Date: 03/21/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
I was literally sitting with my face like two inches from the computer screen the entirety of these last two chapters. And I'm not even exaggerating when I say say that my mouth dropped open at that last part, I can't believe Toms mom would keep that from him. You should write soap opera's, you're so much better than the d-bags they hire now, LMAO. Anyway, I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. :]
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! Soap operas lol >_<
Date: 03/21/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
:O....thats how my face looks right now....HOLY CRAAAP!!!!! DX omg omg please update soooon DX
Author's Response: LOL I'll try update soon.