Date: 04/03/09 06:32 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm really curious about what's going to happen next. I started reading this complete story yesterday and I am already to the point where it stopped... It's like watching an anime's series on youtube and realizing that, exactly at the point where things get really exciting, that episode has ended and all the next episodes haven't been uploaded yet. Hope the next chapter will come very soon :)
Author's Response: Wow thanks for the awesome review! I know what you mean!! I love anime and that has happened to me too! It feels darn awful, but also with fanfiction. There are great unfinished stories out there :/
Date: 04/02/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 13
:OOO
So tom is good bait?
Or bad?
Aw Poor tom.
Why must his life be so complicated?
Great Update. :D
More soon?
Author's Response: Yeah poor Tom. I'm so mean to him. Tom makes the perfect bait...for Bill
Date: 04/02/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
plz update sooooooooooonnnnnnnnn plzzzzz=] thx=]
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/02/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
wtf is bill?! haha
Author's Response: LOL XD I'll try explain soon.
Date: 04/02/09 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
OK, so are they the good guys or the bad guys? They're using Tom as bait, but will they hurt Bill when he comes?
I anxiously await the next chapter. Maybe my questions will be answered soon.
Author's Response: The first ones were the bad guys, these guys...well I suppose you'll have to decide in regards to what you read next.
Date: 04/02/09 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
WTF DDDDDDDD:
run Tom, ruuuuun!!!..uhg or fly...is more useful in this case xD
omfg I've been waiting all the week and now :00000 I feel like I NEED to keep reading x)
well..thanks for write this story and publish it :D je l'aime vraiment x)
so I'll be here..waiting for the next chap..(and check all the days if there's one *-*)
byeeeeeeeeee
;D
.nekito.
Author's Response: Hi nekito! lol love your reviews. XD Thanks! I'll keep you in mind as I type.
Date: 04/02/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm so happy for the update, as usual really good. I don't know how you come up with this stuff but I love it
Author's Response: Cause I'm a crazy sci-fi freak ¬.¬ Naw, just wild imagination I guess. Hope. lol
Date: 04/02/09 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh man, this is getting good. Update soon!
Author's Response: =D thanks.
Date: 04/02/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
*Gasp* another twist in the plot... Ooh I'm going to be debating if these guys are good or bad for the longest time now! Ooh do keep it up and soon! The suspence will soon drive me insane!
Author's Response: Hee-hee. *evil smirk* I love suspense.
Date: 04/02/09 12:44 pm Title: Prologue
:( I prefer ugly Bill xD anyway xD I still don't understand what's going on xD...Next: chp 3
Date: 04/02/09 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
xDDD awww Bill like a ugly boy xD I think h'es cute and now xD I'm gonna read the first chap cos I didn't jijiji xD I jumped to the second xDDD and it was great!
Date: 04/02/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 13
O.O this gets so interesting! i have my jaw in the floor!
Author's Response: lol wish there was a smiley for that.
Date: 04/02/09 07:14 am Title: Chapter 13
I love your story! It's very interesting, the plot is developing so quickly.
I just wonder how come all those 'men' don't see the beauty in Tom matching the one they see in Bill, although the are twins.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it. There's a scene in next chapter just about that. :)
Date: 04/02/09 06:01 am Title: Chapter 13
this an amazingly different story, and well written too. seems very finished if you can call it that, not as it's endning, but there's just like nothing missing in the chapters it all just fits together - which is very nice :) I'll be waiting for new chapters . .
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you told me that because I don't want to leave anything out. It helped a lot, lifted my spirits too, so thanks for that. :)
Date: 04/02/09 05:55 am Title: Chapter 13
HOLY SHIT!! great chappie.
But now I'm dying for the next!! 0_o
Author's Response: =D Thankee!!
Date: 04/02/09 04:31 am Title: Chapter 13
O.O Oh my, I can't wait to see what happens. It's confusing to figure out who are the real bad guys and is there really anyone on Bill and Tom's side now. Gah, I'll just have to wait *_*
Author's Response: I try to keep the mystery and not be too confusing but sometimes it's difficult because in my head there are no mysteries; I know who the bad guys and good guys are. Sometimes you just assume the reader gets it. :/
Date: 04/02/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Okay so I just finished reading up to this chapter and like every other reader here, I'm hooked. My eyes are way too close to the screen.
Amazing story, amazing plot.
I found it quite funny when I read to the end of that chapter where Bill revealed they were brothers, and I had the shock of my life... Like "omg! impossible! how?!" then I kinda had to remind myself that that's what they are in real life.
*tracks + faves story*
Author's Response: LOL yeah, it's so funny how people are all shocked when they're brothers in real life! But I love it how when reading fanfiction, they're so into the story that they forget that. I'm really proud of that chapter and its reactions lol. Thanks for the reviews.
Date: 04/02/09 03:50 am Title: Chapter 13
oh man!!!!!
Author's Response: lol
Date: 04/02/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 13
Okay, so this chapter was awesome in that it was extra long and, well interesting, as this whole story had been.
However, I'm starting to feel like Tom and Bill are never actually going to be together, like together together.
Again, it's just a feeling, and I wouldn't find this story any less interesting if it were true. There are still so many mysteries outside of their relationship that need to be explained!
It would just be a little sad I guess, for Tom, who was unintentionally mislead.
Oh, and Bill's note to Tom was so sweet! Made my heart ache a bit.
Anyways, it was awesome. I might have already said that but I'm not gonna scroll up and check, it's worth repeating.
Hoping for a quick update! Great job!! :)
DCB
Author's Response: Oh, the twins will be together alright. Don't worry. lol I know I'm taking it slowly, but I'm not trying to tease, honest. Thanks for the nice review! :)
Date: 04/02/09 01:25 am Title: Chapter 13
Ooooooo. This is getting REALLY good. It was good to begin with, but I'm so, like, on the edge of my seat right now. I can't wait for the mystery to unfold some more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll reveal the mystery quite soon.