Date: 04/10/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 14
Whoa, Tom, from just his pillow? You got it bad. This story is freaking excellent! I wonder what they all do there? Why is Bill so important to them, anyway? Hm, I guess when (or if) he comes I'll find out. I hope it's soon, I have no idea what could happen to Tom while he's there. They don't want anything with him, do they?
Author's Response: Ahh, good point! At first they think Tom is irrelevant, but...he does share the same DNA as Bill..sooo DUN DUN DUUUUUUUN hee-hee that sound fits well in there.
Date: 04/10/09 07:44 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow... it's all pretty overwhelming.. O.o
I dunno what I would do if I where Tom.. (well, probably first stare at a mirror for two days and then stare at Bill for two days. But, you know.)
Author's Response: Exactly. Must be pretty confusing. That's why I wanted Tom's feelings to surface before he saw what Bill really looked like. Kinda like "The Crying Game" great movie. So it's kinda like too late. XD
Date: 04/10/09 07:09 am Title: Chapter 14
Tom's anxiety and depression he was being medicated for could have been from the "twin connection" the two men were discussing? hmm hmmm. I like how you described this new location.
Author's Response: *nods* But there's more to it, which I'll explain in later chapters.
Date: 04/10/09 12:15 am Title: Chapter 14
BAHAHA! As soon as he got in that room i was like 'damn, he can't jack off' look at you going and proving me so so wrong *wink* That was a great ending... the description in this chapter was superb! Felt like I was really there! I love it, keep up the AMAZING work!
Author's Response: I lol'd in RL when I read this! Thanks for the nice words. I'm soo pleased to know you're enjoying it.
Date: 04/09/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
oh man, oh man, oh man!!!!
I'm worried, where is Billy?
XD
Author's Response: Still has to find out that Tom is missing! He'll be mad of course.
Date: 04/09/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
ooh plz update soon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: ok, I'll try. :)
Date: 04/09/09 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
O.O ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! i need more chapters!!! lol XD
Author's Response: editing next chapter XD
Date: 04/09/09 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 14
so noisy! oh, i love this.
Author's Response: =D Thanks!!
Date: 04/09/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 14
Just the sent of Bill nearly got Tom off, wow. I wonder he smells like. lol Great chapter by the way... I already miss Billa...
Author's Response: Yup! You can't really describe the smell because the aroma sort of turns into what appeals to you most. There's a reason for the smell too lol. However I figure in RL Bill smells like hairspray or shampoo, maybe soap? Bill will come back definitely.
Date: 04/09/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hope Bill rescues him soon.
Love that this fic is unfolding.. excited to know more about Bill's history.
Go for it Tom!
Author's Response: Thank you :) Gonna get pretty scifi-ish now.
Date: 04/09/09 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ooh *sits and waits for another update* Please? I want . .scratch that. . NEED another update *puppy eyes* I want Bill to come back and do what Tom was fantasizing about
Author's Response: I want them to get it on too! lol
Date: 04/05/09 03:37 am Title: Chapter 13
*signs angrily* Shit dude. *signs again*
It was getting to the good part when it ended right there!
You better update soon or I'LL DIE!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON I'M BEGGING YOU!!
Date: 04/05/09 03:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Ohhhhh daaamn... This story is getting interesting man.
Date: 04/05/09 03:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Dude! Dude! ... *signs* I forgot what
I was going to say ...
Date: 04/05/09 02:47 am Title: Chapter 5
“It’s the needle in the heart again,” Tom mentioned.
I use to take those pills and I feel the same way man! I totally love this story.
Date: 04/05/09 02:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Daaamn... I usually do not read this type of stories but I'm actually enjoying it man.
Date: 04/05/09 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah! This is like the first story
where Bill is actually... not good looking.... But I have a feeling that will change.
Awesome story by the way.
Date: 04/04/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
OH. MY. GODDDD.!!!!
*stops breathing*
:D
Date: 04/03/09 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
i am really starting to like is story ^^ it has that darkness i like in stories x please carry on ^^
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad to know!! :)