Date: 12/11/10 07:26 am Title: Chapter 23
I knew it! When Tom found out the cards were all blanks, I knew he must have read the symbols in Bill's mind!
Date: 12/11/10 01:49 am Title: Epilogue
wow. that was long. it could have ended, like 3 times. it drug on a bit here and there for me, but overall it was a great story and a creative use of AU tying in with reality. i enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 12/10/10 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow I really like your story so far =D !
Date: 12/01/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 26
I may be stupid but what is a mesh!?!?
Author's Response: Hi. It would be something like this:rnrnhttp://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/54/l_3cd0a78e81124038bf7a9d87a836dac4.jpg
Date: 11/30/10 05:49 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my god! I am totally in love with this story! I can't understand why I hesitated on reading this? my god, it was just perfect!!! I loved the way you wrote everything so detailed , it really makes a dfference on a story. There were only a few times it was so much imformation that I got slightly confused and there were a good few words I didn't understand, but thats just sine I'm Norwegian and that doesn't mean I'm stupid, just that my english is simple ... But really, this story was badass ! Gotta love it ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! :D Really glad you enjoyed it. I researched a little so maybe it got complicated at some points when I tried to explain it. lol
Date: 11/21/10 08:33 pm Title: Epilogue
this is the best story ever! because i am obsessed with demon i HAD to come read this! I READ it from beginning to end! I love you! you are the best author on this site by far!! i am leaving my hubby and marrying you! promise!! hehe! this was pure- sex and entertainment. thankyouthankyouthankyou!!
Author's Response: Aww. I'll be your secret wife :) Thanks so much! This is such a reanimating review. I needed that after the crappy days I had with no computer!! It was awful! lol But I'm back now :D
Date: 11/17/10 08:11 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow! This is so brilliant! This would make an awesome movie. I'm just pretty much speechless at the moment. I don't even know what to say. I LOVE it! Excellent work & congrats on being featured. U totally deserve it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to see you read it XD
Date: 11/14/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Holy crap! Hmm...I think I said that earlier haha. WOW!
Date: 11/14/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ahh! This is so damn fantastic. Everything about it is just....I dunno. Fantastic.
Date: 11/14/10 05:32 pm Title: Prologue
Holy crap! Fantasitc writing & creativity. Although I shouldn't be surprised, being ur fic & all. =) *clicks next*
Date: 11/09/10 06:55 pm Title: Epilogue
God! That was the most exicting fanfic I have read!!!! It has been awhile since I've read a story until 3 am in the morning! I just couldn't stop reading. Also I'm just pretty much gonna summerize the fic. In the beginning it was amazing! Like I haven't read a fic in which Bill was seen as 'ugly' and than Tom comes along liking him as him, even though he wasn't really him you know? But than it kept going and i just (again) loved it! But along the way it just competely changed! From ugly guy, beautiful guy, finding out their twins, Bill gets taken away, Agents come and take Tom away, Tom learns more bout Bill, Bill come back, testes and missions, escape, running/hiding, Simone, bad guys, rockstars, Rescue mission, and than rockstars again!!! It just kept changing that once I reached the ending I was amazed about your writing skills!!! And after finishing reading I tired to remember how the first part started and realized it all started off with a ugly boy! I don't know if I make sense to you but you've just blown me away O_O Again really and I mean REALLY awesome fic!!! I'm faving this! *click*
Author's Response: Thank you! Such an awesome review! I'm glad you liked Nexus. I had a blast writing it but it makes me real happy when people tell me they enjoy it, so thanks again :D
Date: 09/14/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 33
oh my fucking god thats soo funny! ...and kinda underhanded of bill o.O
Date: 09/11/10 12:57 am Title: Epilogue
I loved this. I loved how the twins were drawn together, Andreas, how the band came to be, just everything about this was very well done and so well written. A favorite, instantly the moment I started reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it. And thanks for telling me :)
Date: 09/11/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw poor tom.
Date: 09/10/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol. Tom's all but too-cute in this story. How he reacts to ugly-Bill.
Date: 09/05/10 10:10 am Title: Epilogue
This is the best damn way a plot like this could have ever been written. I love love LOVE this fic and the way you have each and all of your characters fully developed. Especially Tom's character--you wrote him perfectly, always in character (for the fiction Tom, of course ;))
I hope you will write more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! :D I have a new story out called Demon, it's different but I'll try making it entertaining too.
Date: 08/29/10 08:11 pm Title: Prologue
I'm totally astounded. In the good sense. I have to gather my thoughts in order to write everything I want to say. In this site I have read more than a hundredfold of stories, and this one, is by far, the most incredible story I have ever read. I'm normally very picky while reading stories because I always find elements I don't like but I personally loved every part of this. You gave it an amazing twist the moment you stated that Tom didn't fall in love by the way Bill looked and also all this mixture of feelings who had a very particular reason. Most of the time I find a bit cheesy that boy meets boy, boy thinks boy is pretty and then he's in love. Or the typical "you're my brother but you're beautiful but I don't care, let's do it" haha.
But you went way beyond that, and it's really remarkable, a trully original story that deserves all my respect.Your story is priceless, in my opinion this would make an amazing movie script. Copyright your story, because its spectacular, it deserves more than a thousand of reviews.
Also, is incredible how you manage yto merge all their real life facts and get them into the story. If I wouldn't know, I would say this was the story of their lives haha. Another good point is, I don't like fics that involves music, and the guys forming a band, because I don't feel it like a real AU story but your way of writting it all made it sound like a must, if you know what I mean. Your story didn't let me any doubt, as the story progressed I understood the purposes of everything, not even movies spare you doubts like that.
So congratulations! I believe you had to read a lot to add all those cientific details and everything, you're a genious! It took me a week to finish it all, I enjoyed everyday. I'm very happy I got to read this. Thank you, thank you so much.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your incredible reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :D I'm writing something else at the moment that I'll start posting any time now, and I hope it's just as entertaining :)