Date: 07/15/09 01:14 am Title: Chapter 22
awwww no!Bill should kiss Tom so that they can get closer or something soon
Author's Response: ahhh but when they do kiss...it'll be sweet XD XD XD
Date: 07/15/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 22
O_O wow that was still intense hahah
Author's Response: Really?? lol thanks!
Date: 07/15/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter 22
awwwwwwwww. i'm glad they got out safe and whatnot, but awww to the end..but had to happen. tom has to be strong and not want his brother that way...at least until his brother wants him back the same way lol
Author's Response: Yeah, it's difficult to confess his deeper feelings when he thinks they're unrequited. :/
Date: 07/15/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 22
Yay! Tomi saved the day!!!! Poor Bill though he just wants to be close to his brother. They had quite a scare. It's hard for Tom to sleep with Bill so close and what it does to him, but they need eachother after that. Update soon:)
Author's Response: Yeah, exactly. :) Sending next chapter to be betaed today. XD
Date: 07/14/09 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 22
:( But I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah it's sad, but just wait. It'll have to take some sort of mediator for them to understand what's going on.
Date: 07/14/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 22
Tom is so brave ;) But of COURSE he'd do anything for Bill. *ha*
Poor baby, though. Bill doesn't realize that Tom is afraid to get TOO close to him =/
Or does he? And he WANTS Tom to get too close...? *hmmmm*
I can't wait for the next one! :D
Author's Response: I think it's more of a survival instinct than being brave. Like when mothers protect their young, risking their own lives. I think this sort of reaction would really happen to Tom :D rn
Date: 07/14/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 22
plzplzplzplz update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: =D
Date: 07/09/09 09:54 pm Title: Prologue
I like that sound :P... It's so cool to give an effect XD
Date: 07/09/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 21
OH MY GOD HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE! FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING GREASY AND DELICIOUS WHY OH WHY!!! :( I really hope you update again soon because this cliffie is going to kill me...!!! I still love you though so keep it up
Author's Response: LOL loved the "everything greasy and delicious". I'm glad you didn't kill me after yet another cliffie :)
Date: 07/09/09 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 21
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
IT WAS GETTING SO INTERESTING!!!! LEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
... it would be so cool if Tom could help or if he was like Bill in some way...But that's just a suggestion. A million thumbs up!!!!!!
Author's Response: XD Thank you!! The main idea of the whole story is in the title. I think you'll also like next chapter :)
Date: 07/09/09 02:01 am Title: Chapter 21
ahhh omg that was intense!!!! :o i hope nothing bad happens :(
Author's Response: yay another intense in the reviews!! I'm so glad :D
Date: 07/09/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 21
Tom! Do something! Draw them to you! I'm sure they won't kill you!!!
Author's Response: XD Have a star for paying attention.
Date: 07/08/09 08:47 am Title: Chapter 21
OMG!!!
I hate when things go wrong just when they are so close!!!!
Author's Response: twists and turns XD
Date: 07/08/09 08:33 am Title: Chapter 21
you're such a talented writer, and your imagination only astounds me further with each new chapter
Author's Response: oh wow, thank you. I really appreciate your comment. I hope you like what I write next. :)
Date: 07/08/09 02:22 am Title: Chapter 21
Oh my goodness, that was so intense. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thank you! Intense is what I was hoping for :)
Date: 07/08/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter 21
..no...bring.Bill.back.to.Tom...
Author's Response: I am to please. :)
Date: 07/08/09 01:58 am Title: Chapter 21
Fuck Midori!
Author's Response: Yeah! Like the codename. I feel like a Piņa Colada with midori right now. :)
Date: 07/08/09 01:54 am Title: Chapter 21
Oh dear. I'm so scared for Bill right now. I hope he can get out of this one alive. Tom will freak out ( wait he's already freaking out) he's so scared. I hope it turns out ok update soon:)
Author's Response: He's freaking out for sure! :/
Date: 07/08/09 12:55 am Title: Chapter 21
Oh. My. Gawd!!! So much suspense! Update soon n.n
Author's Response: Editing next chapter. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/08/09 12:37 am Title: Chapter 21
oh my god this is so exciting. D:
Author's Response: oh, I'm glad the chapter had the effect. I hoped it were something like that. :)