Date: 07/25/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
yay!!! i was worried there for a minute...
Date: 07/25/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
ahh!! i hope tom's alright...at least tom followed his gut...
Date: 07/25/09 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
so bill has a chip on his shoulder? that might explain a lot...
Date: 07/25/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
see, looks don't matter...if you get tto know someone, the outcome just might surprise you...
Date: 07/25/09 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
shame on tomi for lying...
Date: 07/25/09 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
it's only human...that's true...i'm glad tom passed his test...
Date: 07/24/09 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
funny...i wouldn't know...and the girl running out of the library was funny too...i like...
Date: 07/24/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
good for Tom...sticking up for bill like that...
Date: 07/24/09 01:39 pm Title: Prologue
intriguing...i will keep reading...
Date: 07/18/09 11:00 am Title: Chapter 22
Ohhh Gosh Tom can be such a jerk sometimes! I knew! Tom would do something! I hope you post another chap soon
Author's Response: yeah, I saw you figured Tom would save Bill! :)
Date: 07/18/09 01:42 am Title: Chapter 22
Aww Poor Tomi... that escape was brilliant though... i never would have thought of that!
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I like the twin, sci-fi stuff. More of that in next chapters...
Date: 07/17/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 22
My sister is totest going to wonder who Tom is. I was full blown yelling for Tom to hurry and run during the beginning XD
Author's Response: Who's your sister? Ahh yeah, although he didn't figure it out at first. Tom is dense. lol
Date: 07/16/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 22
Aw, poor Bill. Those two really do come from different worlds...I guess they can't understand each other completely all the time. I'd hope Simone would get to see her sons again, though.
Author's Response: Yeah. I'll explain why the sexual tension and the interaction between the twins. I really don't want to leave people wondering how it got to this. :)
Date: 07/15/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 22
Oh so sweet...
*giggles*
Continue pliss!! Tq! XD
Author's Response: Thanks! I will XD
Date: 07/15/09 03:16 am Title: Chapter 22
Yay! You updated!... I hope Tom doesn't d anything stupid...
Author's Response: He's fighting real hard not to do that, actually. :/ Poor Tom
Date: 07/15/09 02:31 am Title: Chapter 22
oh, thank you for a perfect start to Wednesday morning. You can't know how much I love this story and have been thinking about the cliffi from last week and what would happen =)
My kingdom for another chapter, but I know you are working on it and it is spectacular and worth waiting for. =)
Thanks so much,
Riv
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it that much =D I am working on the next three chapters, but I do so much editing, they never seem to be finished. Anyway, I really hope you like and find it interesting as well.
Date: 07/15/09 01:18 am Title: Chapter 22
YAY!!!! Tomi got to help them!!!!
Dammit Tom!! Stop being a baby and man up to your feelings for your brother!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL yeah he should!! But he's afraid to find out what Bill really thinks about that. Doesn't want to be hurt. Ignorance is bliss, sometimes. You'll see what I mean in a couple of chapters.