Date: 08/23/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 26
This is quite possibly the chapter of my dreams. *____*
Author's Response: Aww really? I'm so glad! Thank you. :D
Date: 08/23/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 26
Oh shit, that just killed my brain. O_o
Author's Response: XD
Date: 08/23/09 03:04 am Title: Chapter 25
Oh wow,oh my god!please let the alien stuff stick this second time or something..i love Bill's thought process,so cute<3<3
Author's Response: Hello!! Just updated next chapter. I hope you like it! :D
Date: 08/21/09 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 25
Argh.. you are excellent with the cliffhangers thing. :P :) Haha.. I love the way you explain things, via dialogue between these two.. I'm very curious to see what happens next chapter. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, sometimes the cliffies appear out of nowhere as I write. I like to keep readers hooked :)
Date: 08/21/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 25
yup!!
don't waste time!!
tell us what bill's thinking..
yeyy...
Author's Response: lol you'll like what he's thinking XD
Date: 08/20/09 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 25
Finally caught up, and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Hi. Just loaded next chapter :)
Date: 08/18/09 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 25
I really enjoyed this. I'm glad Tom was able to get it all off his chest, and when he realized the way he felt may have been Bill all along
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :D
Date: 08/18/09 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 25
hmmm, interesting...
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 08/18/09 06:45 am Title: Prologue
I always look forward to reading the updates on this story. I think it's really original, and I absolutely loved the spin you took by having Bill turn into the gorgeous guy that is, apparently, Tom's twin.
I haven't read something so original on here in a while. Your characters are rather well-developed, and I like where it's going.
I also adored the last chapter, by the way. I'm interested in what's going to happen next.
Date: 08/18/09 01:29 am Title: Chapter 25
DANG IT!!! Its like waaaaaaaaaay past my bedtime and I've been hooked on this story all day!! I dunno how Tom can handle it, all the tests and secrets and all the emotions and whatnot, I'd get pissed and throw a hissy fit. At first I liked the Doc, now, he's kinda an ass :/ I hope I can sleep tonight, you got me thinking of what's gonna happen next! X333 SO EXCITED!!! I love your style, and the first chapter was awesome! OH! and What about Bill's wet dream!? I wanna know pleeeeease! T^T I'll give you a bag o' treats, complete with tomi and billa dolls, cookies, money, and a muse brush. So you can brush your muse and get ideas ;) |bounces| can't wait till the next chapter!! ^^v
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! Glad you like it :) Tommi and Billa treats? I bet those are yummy!! XD Reviews like this are my muse, so thank you!!
Date: 08/18/09 12:00 am Title: Chapter 24
Funny, before you menioned Mengele, I was wondering if Dr. Lawrence would start doing stuff like that: seeing if the twins could sense each other's physical pain and stuff.
Date: 08/17/09 10:56 pm Title: Prologue
Donde me meti YO? *pokes* donde estabas TU? :PPPPPP
TEASE!! Stop teasing me now, my heart is fragile and can't take this...
Date: 08/17/09 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 25
Oh wow... Poor tom.. I feel awful for him... i liked the theory about him loving bill because he's an empath and bill loved him first... this is so intrigueing... you make my nerd heart happy.
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, now Tom can explain his funny feelings, but also his 'alien' reactions to ugly Bill. XD
Date: 08/17/09 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
oh my god...
PLOT THICKENS and the boys better talk!!!
Because they can't kiss since they are being watched.
Author's Response: hello! donde te habias metido? hehe. rnrnBecause they can't kiss since they are being watched. rnrnLOL so funny that you said that cuz...
Date: 08/17/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 25
OMG
Author's Response: XD
Date: 08/17/09 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 25
I always look forward to your new chapters because I love the depth and detail in which you write =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I try to write stuff down as I see it in my head. My first language is not English so I have a little trouble finding the correct words, but it seems to be working out. If the reader is entertained, I'm pleased.
Date: 08/17/09 11:50 am Title: Chapter 25
Wow! so... I'm really, like , I'm not sure what the word is for this but I'm really not so much confused as I am happy that Tom has some kind of answer to how he feels about Bill and that it's possible Bill feels the same. I felt really bed when he heard Bills thought and it seemed like he was thinking something that hurt Tom, but I can see why he would be sad or upset about it ( Tom I mean) Then Dr L. gives him this long lecture about everything and I could almost see Tom's face. It would have been so funny in in real life to see that Facial expression of Tom's pretty face. That "what on God's green earth are you talking about" face. Anyway... great chapter and I can't wait to hear what Bill is thinking now and how Tom reacts to it. Update soon.
Author's Response: wow long review! Thanks, loved it. Yeah, Tom lost the effect at a bad time, so he just assumed what was missing in the sentence. :)
Date: 08/17/09 11:02 am Title: Chapter 25
Awwww...so exciting. Some smexing in sight? Or at least a confession? Lovely.
Author's Response: what do you think? I may have to change warnings XD Thanks.
Date: 08/17/09 03:11 am Title: Chapter 25
i hate you!! T-T i got so excited expecting to read the next part but nooo! you stopped *sob* hahah jk jk ^_^
Author's Response: I know I'm evil! I'll make up for it in next chapter :)
Date: 08/17/09 02:31 am Title: Chapter 25
Oh tom's going to find out. I can't wait.
Author's Response: yup, he is!! XD