Date: 08/11/11 12:17 am Title: Epilogue
AMAZING!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! XD
Date: 08/03/11 01:21 am Title: Epilogue
I love this fucking fic *-*
Author's Response: Thank you! XD heehee
Date: 07/24/11 09:15 am Title: Epilogue
Best story ever, you've put in so much effort in writing this amazing story, all readers can see it. This can seriously be made in to a movie, it's absolutist breath taking, thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with us. I enjoyed every minute of reading this, it truly was inspiring, emotional and a heart warming journey for Tom and Bill :')
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! I'm always happy to know people enjoyed it. I always have fun doing research, it's part of what makes writing really entertaining for me :)
Date: 06/23/11 09:44 am Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing it <3 that was amazing :3
But I still love Demon more xDDDDDDDDDDDD
Author's Response: Thanks!! hehe so glad you like Demon so much. You can read it again anytime you want :D
Date: 06/22/11 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
O.O what the hell!!!!!!! xDD
Date: 06/21/11 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
AHAHAHA UGLY+BILL=WTF O.O
Date: 04/03/11 10:00 am Title: Epilogue
Oh my fukken fukken fukken God. This story is amazing, absolutely fantastic with all its details and descriptions and research and fun sci-fi stuff. Like, I REALLY love this story and how it was fluff at the appropriate times. Gah, you just made my Sunday a little - pfft, scratch that - THOUSANDS times better. Your other story Demon is equally awesome, buh teh wei. Keep your fantasy flowing, magnificent author. :D
Author's Response: Hi!! Glad you read this one too! Thanks for the nice review! Makes me want to write more! Hope you keep enjoying! :D
Date: 04/03/11 09:49 am Title: Chapter 37
This chapter was fucking amazing. The suspense and action and everything was just killing me and the fact that I was listening to Imperial March (just for the heck of it) really nailed it. I could really fucking feel the scene, see it, sense it. It was like a fantastic scene from a movie unfolding in front of my eyes. Absolutely amazing! I'm out of breath now. :D
Author's Response: Star wars! <33 I'm truly happy that you enjoyed it!! XD Sci-fi and fantasy stories must have some action scenes in them, imo. XD
Date: 02/26/11 11:06 pm Title: Epilogue
I absolutely LOVED this story! Seriously fed my post-apoc (although this was not post-apocalyptic yet more sci-fi than anything else) love! It ties in realy well with reality, makes a girl wonder... Really, amazing work and interpretation of the twins! Love Princess and Gangsta 4 Life!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D Glad you liked it. I thought the general theme of the twin bond was a perfect idea for a TH story and watching and reading too many sci-fi movies and books helped to elaborate this plot XD
Date: 02/18/11 03:06 pm Title: Epilogue
This is a very great story! I loved every chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/16/11 01:57 pm Title: Epilogue
This fic was totally amazing! I'm supposed to be revising for exams today, but I couldn't stop reading this haha XD
Author's Response: lol thank you! XD
Date: 01/13/11 03:39 pm Title: Epilogue
Awesome! Read this since Demon's so awesome, and I was not disappointed. Things at the end tied off a little nicer than I'd liked, I'm one for total drama until the end, but a happy ending isn't necessarily bad. You handled all the technical lingo very well!
My only critique: The verb "to have" shouldn't be contracted in the present tense or for ownership. Only in the past tense when used as an auxiliary verb. For example:
Present tense:
Yes: You have a pencil?
No: You've a pencil?
Past tense:
Yes: I've seen that movie.
No: I have seen that movie. (not wrong technically, but sounds odd because it's overly formal)
Author's Response: Hi!! Thank you! Glad you liked this one too.rnrnThanks so much for the tip. I think I get it now. I'll try use it correctly. I have so much trouble with stuff like that. I have a beta reader but I guess she also gets confused. :P
Date: 01/12/11 06:57 am Title: Chapter 24
I don't like Dr. Lawrence. He shouldn't do something against a person's will even if it's for some fucking experiment. He's manipulative. I seriously hate him at this point. Bill and Tom are not guinea pigs.
Author's Response: Yes, he's very much like all crazy scientists, he craves to answer all mysteries. He does care for the interns' well being, though.
Date: 01/05/11 03:06 pm Title: Epilogue
Hey, de nuevo yo por aquí.
Estaba comentando con algunas chicas los fics que escribes en inglés (que son geniales, no sé si ya te lo había dicho XD), y otra persona, quien no habla inglés, nos comentó el por qué si hablas español, no escribes en este idioma.
¿Nunca has considerado traducir alguna de tus historias?
Author's Response: Mi español esta fatal (en cuanto a redacción y asi) haha y es lo malo de haber aprendido casi puro ingles y leer todo en ingles y ver peliculas en ingles, etc. Mis ideas fluyen mas facil cuando las plasmo en ingles. Cuando leeo en español me atoro demasiado porque hay palabras que ni idea que significan. XD No he considerado traducir mis historias, pero no estoy en contra de que alguien mas lo haga. :P
Date: 01/02/11 10:16 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh My God! The best sci-fi fic ever! I mean it!
Listen, I've read a lot, a lot of fics about Alient!Bill, Robot!Bill, *Inser.here.another.thing*!Bill but no one is like 'NEXUS'.
I enjoyed the whole story: ugly Bill was really nasty, hahaha, but I'm relivered he's just a covert. And, well, I totally fell in love with all the military stuff and so!
BTW, where are you from? I'm sorry if I'm being impolite, hehehe, but I couldn't help noticing that your English is very good!
Ok, back to the fic... Sorry, but you just let me speechless!
You are very smarth, I think. How the hell do you know all that stuff about particles and atoms and guns and so? My God, you must be a brainy, don't you? XDDDD I feel so stupid right now XDDD
I was so impressed by Dr. Lawrence and his speeches, too!
Oh, fuck, I had a lot of things I wanted to tell you, but I just forgot them!
Well, just say thanks for sharing this amazing story!
Author's Response: Hi! Wow, thanks so much for the nice review! Makes me happy to know how much you liked and enjoyed it! Let's just say I'm from Latin America lol. I learned english during school. I think I know it very well but I make so many grammar mistakes still, so I depend a lot on my beta reader to help me see them. I had the plot on my mind for a while but I did a little research on the subject before I started writing this story. Some stuff I gathered from personal experiences lol. I love sci-fi and fantasy stuff and it helps a lot to have a wild imagination. XD Thanks again!! :D
Date: 12/30/10 02:18 am Title: Epilogue
What a wonderful journey this was.
Author's Response: Thanks! Really glad you liked it. :D
Date: 12/18/10 01:07 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow your story is awesome! I really like how it ends, it's very well written with just the right amount of action =D
Author's Response: Thanks!! Really glad you liked it. That's just what I wanted when I wrote this story :)
Date: 12/11/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 35
hehe, im currently reading chapter 36, and something suddenly came to me 0=
If Tom feels his tattoo, and his hangover, how come he's not feeling sore? ehem if you know what I mean o.o
It struck me as interesting is all, since I would imagine Bill's thoughts would be filled with nothing but Tom.
In that case, it should pretty much be feeling like a threesome for Tom XDD
Well, it's just something like a spur of the moment thought ^.^
This story is amazing by the way, as if it wasn't obvious enough ;3 Can't wait to finish reading it.
Author's Response: Hi. Yes, you're right. Tom can only feel Bill when Bill's thoughts are centered on him. There are some sensations that are stronger perceived than others, though. I guess it depends on the moment if they go acknowledged.(or the story in this case XD) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 12/11/10 07:44 am Title: Chapter 24
I'm not sure if I like this Dr. L or not =S
Your story is awesome though!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to see you're enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing too :D
Date: 12/11/10 07:26 am Title: Chapter 23
I knew it! When Tom found out the cards were all blanks, I knew he must have read the symbols in Bill's mind!