Date: 09/06/09 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 27
Ahah! is it bill in disguise??
Lol.. How genius!! God, they'r so meant to be together.
Can't imagine them w/out each other..
Keep up!! Can't wait 4 d next chappie!! ;)
Date: 09/06/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 27
WHAT THE FUCKKKKK
lol
Don't tell me you were expecting any more response from us LOL
Date: 09/06/09 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 27
Ahh it's Bill! Right? I hope...lol! Devious Princess. But poor Tom is probably gonna have a stroke. Lmao.
Date: 09/06/09 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 27
Dr. L has got to be Bill with that body image thingy.
Date: 09/06/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 27
I SECOND THAT WTF.
Girl, that better be Bill disguised as the Dr. or I'm gonna go wtf at you again, lol.
*crosses fingers* let it be Bill, let if be Bill, pleasepleaseplease
Date: 09/06/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 27
Wow... Wait what?!
Date: 09/06/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oooo! I love this so much, sexy and full of ACTION.
Date: 08/31/09 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 26
omg!
that's hawt!!
and sweet...
seriously man!!
luv it! luv it! luv it!
Date: 08/29/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter 26
yay!!!!!!!!!11 for love and escaping!
Date: 08/26/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 26
Well, apparently my first review screwed up and left only smiley faces.. so..
Awww! I love how we keep seeing snippits of Andreas' jealousy.. I'm wondering what's going to happen with him. The operators are also neat to read about.. so snoopy. ;) :) Awesome chapter! :D
Date: 08/26/09 01:16 am Title: Chapter 26
O.O are they leaving to japan? O.O
Date: 08/26/09 01:11 am Title: Chapter 26
-panting-
so...damn...good!
Date: 08/26/09 01:05 am Title: Chapter 25
And as i said before i love this story. You make everything conect!
Date: 08/26/09 12:55 am Title: Chapter 24
Ohhh o.O I love this story.
Date: 08/25/09 10:42 am Title: Chapter 16
Oooooooh oooh ohhh. I want a Bill clone!!
Date: 08/25/09 12:29 am Title: Chapter 26
Tom squeezed his eyes, his mouth agape; his hands making faulty chords. It was just too much to bear. ‘I wonder if my piercing really makes this feel good. Would Tomi like it?’ The image Bill pulled Tom’s member out of his pants and opened his mouth, pierced tongue about to touch the slick flesh.
“Oh my God,” Tom moaned. - *blushes* OMG!
“It sort of opens my mind to yours,” Tom said. Bill blinked.
“It does? How?”
“Well, let’s just say…I think you look real good in mesh.” - *blushes* OMG yes!
“Whoa, are they fighting or something?” Lars said.
“I guess Princess shouldn’t have messed with that guitar,” Cody said. – lol not quite!
“I was devastated, heartbroken. I thought you didn’t love me the same way I did.” – lol I love the miscommunication!
Bill blushed profusely at the confession, self-consciously lowering his gaze. “Then why’d you shake me off?”
“Because if I hadn’t and you kept touching me, I would have made you mine right there.” - *giggles and blushes*
“Oh my God,” Lars gasped. “Did Princess really do what I think he did?”
“And can he do it again?” Cody said enthusiastically. – lol
The twins tried to ignore the operators’ comments as they indulged in a passionate kiss, until Bill broke the kiss, completely annoyed. He went next to the bed’s railing and feigned a sonorous, pleasure-filled moan.
“Holy crap!” Cody cried. The silence from the operators was instantaneous, an obvious indication that they wanted to hear more. Bill made a satisfied smirk and pounced back on Tom, resuming their kiss. Loud rock music suddenly erupted from the adjacent room, no doubt Andreas’ doing. – *cracks up and claps* so fucking funny!
“I want to taste you,” - *fans self* oh god!
“I’m there, Bill,” he panted, “I’m gonna burst!” – nice choice of words!
“So good, Tomi,” Bill purred throatily against his ear. “I loved doing that.” Tom lay dead and conquered; his head spinning. – oh god that was so hot!
“We’re leaving the base. Tonight.” – it’s going to get worse before it gets better!
Date: 08/25/09 12:12 am Title: Chapter 25
“Well, Tom? Do you feel anything different?” Dr. Lawrence asked.
“No,” Tom lied, making a stern and convincing face.
“No?” Dr. Lawrence’s disappointment was evident, and it made Tom evilly glad. “You mean you don’t hear anything?” – fight back where you can!
‘I wonder if Tomi understands my lyrics…Oh! He’s coming!’
Tom smiled; Bill’s ability didn’t fail to marvel him. Hell, he was marveled that he was part of the whole prodigious bond. The fact that he could now hear Bill’s thoughts was beyond him. Maybe the alien stuff wasn’t so bad. – Is Tom going to tell him?
Perhaps he should let Bill know; he was, after all, invading his privacy, but then Bill would probably guard his thoughts and he didn’t want that. – lol I was just thinking about that.
‘Oh God, that look. Why is he making that look?’ Bill looked away. ‘Dammit, we’re brothers!’
Tom stopped mid-pace, his smile vanishing.
‘I can’t stand it. Makes me want to---‘
The sides of Tom’s head tightened just as Bill’s thoughts ceased sounding in his head. He felt ill, once again experiencing the sensation of his heart being crushed. He held onto the wall for support. – I don’t get it…why does Tom head hurt and why did Bill stop thinking?
“That you’re in love with your brother.” Tom’s stomach heaved in horror; completely taken by surprise with the spot-on and unexpected answer. “Am I right?” – well duh!
“Well, if it’ll make you feel any better, it probably couldn’t be helped. It’s possible that you were affected by this condition called genetic sexual attraction, which some psychologists deem can happen in half the cases of adopted children who obliviously reunite with a sibling or close relative as adults. Upon meeting for the first time, they fall in love and often feel a strong need for intimacy, perhaps as a race to know each other and make up for all the lost years. These feelings can occur with same sex individuals too, not necessarily homosexual.” – actually it has to do with the chemical change in Bill’s smell. We have similar genetic make up of our siblings and we give off the same order. We are genetically programmed to not be attracted to someone who has the same smell. But because Bill’s chemistry was changed and now he gives off a different sent it makes him more okay to “breed with” from a genetic stand point. He doesn’t smell like taboo.
“Really amusing. I wonder….You couldn’t see your brother and yet he could see you, from the start,” Dr. Lawrence drawled as his eyes traveled to the outer corners. “Could be you couldn’t tell the difference.”
“About what?”
“You’re an empath, Tom,” Dr. Lawrence stated, looking straight at him. “Especially when it comes to the emotions that render your brother particularly vulnerable. I do believe you were experiencing an echo of his nervous state.” – lol I get it he feels this way because Bill feels this way.
So that stuff only works for a little while? That's lame!!!! I wonder if he makes the conneciton if it will stay if they work at it like working a muscle?
Date: 08/24/09 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
“Alright, Tom, speak up. I’ve connected to Dr. Lawrence’s office. He’s hearing you now,” he said.
“It’s over,” Tom said sharply. “You won’t get anything from us anymore.”
“I’m with my brother. I won’t do anything,” Bill accented vehemently. – do you guys realy thing you have that much power? Cause you don’t!
“Look, tell him…tell him I’ll do it…I’ll do as he wants. I’ll cooperate. Just please, don’t take Bill away from me.”
After an intolerable moment of silence, the door finally clicked open. The guards took Tom and guided him back to Bill’s room. He could hear Bill’s weeping just as he entered the Surveillance room. He went inside the bedroom and hugged him.
“I hate him,” Bill sobbed against Tom. The twins stayed like that for a long while, Tom’s presence having a balmy effect on Bill’s tears. – wow didn’t take him very long to break.
A week passed with unrelenting testing with the twins. Tom was subjected to more perception tests that dealt with the symbol cards, and other times he was moved to different sections of the base while the scientists who stayed with Bill asked him of Tom’s location. But he didn’t think he had the worse part. One day he learned they had scared the living daylights out of Bill, teasing him with the most vicious looking insects. Tom’s gut had tightened so violently, he doubled up and vomited. – awh they are torturing them!
By the end of the day’s testing, Tom always ended with a big headache, and he didn’t mind how close Bill nestled next to him on the bed; he was too tired to become nervous, anyway, but his heart ached when he noticed Bill waited until he thought Tom was fast asleep to move closer to him. – awh! Well Bill is being super sweet and not trying to make Tom feel uncomfortable.
“Listen, Tom, I don’t want you to be angry with me, believe me. Despite what you may think regarding what I do, I have a heart. I really like you and it affects me to see how badly you’re taking this.”
“You seriously expect me to believe you?” Tom scathed. Dr. Lawrence sighed. “Spare me the bullshit; just go ahead with the damn test so I can go.” – yeah you’re doing a fucking awesome job to make sure that he likes you! Asshole!
The science of this makes my brain hurt!
but the telepathy tests really wore you out, and no doubt gave you bothersome headaches. – yup it did!
“No!” Tom yelled, “Don’t you dare!”
“It won’t harm you,” Dr. Lawrence said, adjusting the implant on a small injecting pistol. – but if it works then he’ll be trapped there just like Bill.
“You don’t need to worry; even if you do have absolute compatibility, you’re all grown up. The implant’s effects will only last as long as it remains activated, about six minutes or so. Once deactivated it’ll disappear from your body.”
“Don’t!” Tom grunted as the guards stretched and exposed his neck. The shot wasn’t painful, but the liquid felt searing as it ran through his veins. – oy!!!!
Date: 08/24/09 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
“That night you were injured, you witnessed the kidnap of a very important person,” Simone explained. Tom swallowed. “Who’s affiliated with the government. Your life is in danger as long as the kidnappers are on the run and that’s why they took you into the witness protection program.” - -_- well that works *frowns*
Tom rose and headed for the door. It was locked. “Open the door, I want out,” he told the men.
“Why?”
“Just open it. Open the door!”
“But why? Where are you going?”
“I want to see Bill,” Tom said. The white-coats glanced at each other.
“Why?”
“I think he’s crying.” – awh
“There, Bill,” Tom said, rubbing his arms. “Don’t cry.” Bill looked up and Tom fixed the smeared makeup from his face. “I’ll play my guitar for you, what do you say?” Bill smiled and nodded. – it was a test!
A couple of hours passed before they were interrupted as one of the scientists came back looking for Tom to meet with Dr. Lawrence. Tom huffed.
“Well, now I’m busy,” he said.
“It’s urgent,” the scientist said. Tom rolled his eyes. – still testing them!
Tom was left in Bill’s room. His brother wasn’t there.
“Where is he? Where’s Bill?” he seethed.
“With Dr. L,” Cody said.
“What? I was supposed to see Dr. Lawrence, not him. What the hell is going on with you people?!” – if they are going to test them at least fucking tell them they are being tested!
“So they give you gifts while they make a fool out of me?” Tom was livid now.
“Why do you say that?” Bill asked, admiring his new bling in front of the mirror, hands on his hips. His poses were too sensuous. “Tom?” Tom blinked. “Why do you say that?” Tom forgot what he was going to say; in fact, he’d forgotten altogether why he was angry.
“Er…uh….”
There was a blatant snort that came from behind the panes. Tom turned to see Andreas looking at him with daggers for eyes. He stuck his tongue out. – lol poor Tom totally in love with Bill!
“They made a fool out of you because you’re a fool, gangsta,” Andreas miffed. Tom sneered.
“He’s not,” Bill returned angrily. Andreas gulped. Bill went next to Tom and hugged him. “You say he’s a fool, you might as well say that about me too.”
“I didn’t mean it, I’m sorry,” Andreas said quickly. Tom smirked. Bill rebuffed Andreas' apology. – lol
“Oh, I drew that,” Bill said. “It’s nice, isn’t it?”
“You drew this?” Tom asked perplexed.
“Yeah, when I went with Dr. L. He asked me to draw a simple figure. He’ll use it to make me a pendant. I like stars, so I drew that.”
“Wait, he asked you to draw this?” Tom said, and felt as if some light was starting to illuminate him. “What else did he tell you to do?” Bill chewed on the gummy worms, obviously not having a clue as to why he was being questioned.
“Well, he also told me to think of you as I drew it, for inspiration,” Bill smiled. Tom crumbled the paper in his hand. That two-faced bastard! – nice!