Date: 10/18/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 30
Awwwwwwwww, i loved it! you never to stop amazing me with this story. I love it more than any other one on this site hun! so update soon, id love to see the twins, their mom and the G's all together again, at the base or free, as long as they are together!
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much. :D I like happy endings too. XD
Date: 10/14/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 29
Fucking Tom sensor!! Now, we're back to square one. It was too good to last, wasn't it.
Author's Response: there are a couple of stumbles along their way :/
Date: 10/13/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 29
I have honestly just spent the last day reading this. Reading it before bed, staying up too late, reading it at lunch today at work and getting nothing else done at all because this is an amazing, spellbinding story that absolutely will not let me go. I believe you just updated not too long ago but I really hope you update again soon. Wonderful, wonderful work!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the nice review. Sorry for the late reply u_u. I'm glad you like reading it. It inspires me to keep writing :D
Date: 10/07/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 29
AWESOME! I was hoping it would be these guys who found them.
Author's Response: You were hoping for the bad guys? XD
Date: 10/07/09 11:12 am Title: Chapter 29
Oh damn....
Author's Response: DUN DUN DUUUUNNN XD
Date: 10/05/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 29
aww snap!!! :o
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/05/09 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 29
cliffhanger!!!
Just when I'm about to say aaaawwwww and leave my comment as a thankful one seeing their love you took it away in the last few paragraphs! Oh, what would happen to the twins.
I'm still thankful for the update though.
Date: 10/05/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 29
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
'*Gasp*
Please more soon, you can't leave us hanging like this!!! D:
Haha This is torture! xD
Author's Response: lol I know, I'm evil :)
Date: 10/05/09 07:37 am Title: Chapter 29
NEEIIINNNNN!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter now. Horrible horrible cliffies XD
Author's Response: I agree, cliffies are horrible, but I can't stop myself sometimes XD
Date: 10/05/09 04:12 am Title: Chapter 29
uh oh!!!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 10/05/09 03:11 am Title: Chapter 29
uh-oh. i see trouble.
Author's Response: yeah, it's the bad guys again. XD
Date: 10/04/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 29
Uh oh. This is so not good. Wow! What have they got themselves into now. I actually hope Andreas comes to the rescue. However I think more will happen before that comes to pass. Not the best decision to leave the base but I can't blame them. I hope they're ok and I hope they can get away! I'm really nervous for them now.
Author's Response: not the best decision is right! :) Lucky they've got Andreas on their side.
Date: 10/04/09 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 29
*Gasp* OMG somehow I missed your last chapter updating but I read them both together and holy crap can you write action scenes!!! I was totally floored by both chapters and now you've thrown in this terrible cliffie and I have no clue how they're ever going to be truely free... PS the smut was fantastic as well ;)
Author's Response: thank you! Glad you enjoyed :D
Date: 10/04/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 29
awwww nooooo!i wanted them to be safe after they finally got outta there... please dont tear them apart again and please let Bill's alien scent make their hearts explode or something?
Author's Response: lol I write obstacles, but I don't like sad endings XD
Date: 09/26/09 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 28
wow....thatz wow..i feel bad for andreas though..but YAY bill and tom are free=]=]
Author's Response: :D Andi will remain friends, though. A very useful friend.
Date: 09/26/09 04:07 am Title: Chapter 18
starting ch 19 you start to lose articles like a & the. sometimes the large words you strive to use have unclear double meanings. I really like your style writing overall.
Author's Response: Hi. So I should use more a and the? I do need these tips. Sometimes I think I know the meaning of a word, but it has a completely different meaning to what I wanted to say. English is not my first language and although I don't think I'm bad at it, I still make mistakes like using the wrong words :/ I'm glad you like it though. Thanks for the review.
Date: 09/24/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 28
Both of us know that I love this story. Thanks again hun. It is great to read another chapter pretty soon and as always I can say that I loved the things that happened there.
Kisses.
Author's Response: Thank you :) Makes me happy to read this.
Date: 09/23/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 28
so...I'm wondering....is this gonna end soon and become a series? ooor its gonna be a long fic? XD just wondering hahaha
Author's Response: lol it's ending soon :/ I'm trying to write other stuff and that's why I'm trying to finish this first. It's too confusing.
Date: 09/23/09 09:45 am Title: Chapter 28
OMG!!! This is so exciting! The crawling to the elevator is so stressful, I really thought they couldn't make it.
Author's Response: thanks! I tried to make it exciting so I'm glad it worked. :)
Date: 09/22/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 28
yeahhh i was right!!
now lets see how this goes...
thanks for the update
Author's Response: Good call! :) Thanks for the review!