Date: 11/07/09 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 31
Your story never fails to captivate me. It's got my attention for the entire chapter and there's never a boring scene. I loved the part with the band-playing in it, though, because it was quite a pleasant surprise seeing as they were running in the crowd a while ago. So, so amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: wow thanks so much for your review. I'm really happy :) Hope you keep liking it. XD
Date: 11/07/09 06:53 am Title: Chapter 31
LMFAO. PERFECT.
But then, if they're 'famous' or whatever now, wouldn't it be 10x harder for ANYONE to get them? :0 Just a thought.
And and and I LOVED IT. Totally unexpected XD
Author's Response: XD That's exactly what Tom thought too. I'll explain more about that in next chapter. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/07/09 04:43 am Title: Chapter 31
Shit hit the fan!
Author's Response: LOL
Date: 11/07/09 04:31 am Title: Chapter 31
OMFG OMFG!!!!!!! :O i was holding my breath lol XD
Author's Response: lol really? And here I thought everyone would guess what was coming. XD
Date: 11/07/09 12:17 am Title: Chapter 31
Oooooh! I love it. :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: thank you!! =D
Date: 11/07/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 31
*jumps up and down flutterclapping* YAY!!!! now if they would just get simone and the g's to stay with the twins somewhere safe OR make the band famous... hmmm, regardless theyd all be together and untouchable... i love you sweetie!!!
Author's Response: ^_^ (hugs) Of course they'll be together. They belong together. =D
Date: 11/06/09 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 31
You just do action so well. I really enjoyed the scene with the band playing, as well, and very much look forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. Still working on next chapter :)
Date: 11/06/09 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 31
Ahhhh, Tomi, Tomi! Gah, I dunno if I should kiss you or slap you for that! LOL
But oh, Simone sees both her boys omg!!! As a mother, I wouldn't even KNOW how to start feeling about that, but it has to be most overwhelming right now. <333
Author's Response: Yeah. I wanted their first meeting to have some impact. :) You're a mom? =D
Date: 10/24/09 02:32 am Title: Chapter 30
yikes, big happenings. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try :)
Date: 10/21/09 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 30
fantastic chapters =)
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 10/21/09 01:02 am Title: Prologue
oh i mean i knew it was gonna happen, but the way bill said it, it seemed that he was trying to lie to tom XD
Author's Response: lol well since Tom couldn't see anything, he wouldn't know that really happened, just assume by what he heard, but the bad guy cleared that up in the dialogue in the elevator so Bill really didn't have to lie. He was trying to calm Tom down. :)
Date: 10/20/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 30
Damn.
Author's Response: ¬__¬' XD
Date: 10/20/09 09:32 am Title: Chapter 30
Poor bill. *pets*
I've been expecting updates of this fic all the time. And of course, it never disappoints.
Author's Response: Really? Thanks ^__^ Hope you keep reading :)
Date: 10/19/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 30
plz more=]
Author's Response: more coming :)
Date: 10/19/09 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 30
Bill is so manipulative, and there was non con... Gosh!
Author's Response: Yeah, he is manipulative. That's why they have trouble with him in the base :)
Date: 10/19/09 10:51 am Title: Chapter 30
Awww yay! I hope nothing else goes wrong
Author's Response: oh. hee-hee XD All I can say is it gets closer to the end.
Date: 10/19/09 09:43 am Title: Chapter 30
w00T! Yes, I love love love this fic LOL
And poor Bill...What can I say? Maybe the guy should have used lube...XD
Author's Response: lol I wrote something about that, but later deleted it. The guy was being gentle, but Bill was still sore because of Tom. XD
Date: 10/19/09 02:52 am Title: Chapter 30
...WTF?! how could bill be raped?!!?
Author's Response: Luckily, the good guys arrived just in time. There was fondling, but no actual intercourse. I described the bad guys' intentions with Bill since the beginning, so this scene was eventually going to happen. Anyway, I wrote a little dialogue in the elevator that somehow says it didn't happen and then Bill says it again in the car. It still was hard on both of the twins, though. :/
Date: 10/18/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 30
OMG! That was crazy!!!! I feel so sad for Bill though. How awful for him to feel that his brother would be safer without ever having met him. I can't imagine being TOm and having to be in the same room while my little brother is being raped and to not be able to help or do anything. It was so scary! However, I thought it was kind of cute and funny when Tom called Andreas while Bill was crying and suddenly Andreas was all " Ok i'll help you meet your mother" Such a sucker. Bill does have that effect though even in real life I bet.
Author's Response: I think he does have some power over the others, to some extent. XD
Date: 10/18/09 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 30
Damn, the non-con hurt, of course, but I enjoyed this chapter over all. So much excitement! It's hard to write that well, I think, but you've done a great job. I'm anxious for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I try to make it entertaining :)