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Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 10

Yay ! Bill is back, at least I hope so ! Tom is so miserable without him, he need his Bill!

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Date: 04/15/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 9

This is becoming even more interesting and intriguing! I like how Tom was able to feel that there was something wrong with Bill!

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Date: 04/15/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8

Tom does get really into it when he is playing guitar, it leads to amazingly hot pictures ! lol
So cute when Tom decide to play Green Day after noticing Bill’s presence !

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

I love Tom's personality, he is so kind and he doesn't judge like other people.. He should read Bill's lyric, I bet they are awesome ;)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor confused Tom ... I like how he can’t understand his own reactions around Bill..
Awww so sad to see what Bill has to endure from mean bullies... at least he has Tom to defend him!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

I like your description of the G's and Tom's friendship ! Seems really realistic!
The Notebook is my favorite movie of all time, I was so trilled when Bill mentioned it !
Very intriguing Tom's condition and all those doctor visits! I really like where this story is going, can't stop reading it !

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

Well that was interesting ! Bill smelling delicious to Tom makes it all more captivating! How will Tom cope with that ? Can'T wait to see !
Loll Bill using the fact that he is ugly to laugh at people's reaction is hilarious !

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

The way TOm defended Bill from those bitches was brilliant ! I really hate girls like that who don't have anything better to do than annoy people.. GO Tom !
Bill is so happy to help! Can't wait to see how this tutoring session will turn out !

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awwww Bill is so damn cute! I like how awkward yet adorable you describe him ! And I feel bad for him, reading about Tom's toughs and how he don't want anyone to see him with Bill.. :(

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, first time ever I imagine Bill as ugly! I really like your writing style and the plot is awesome so far ! Reading more now :)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 09:29 pm Title: Prologue

I just saw that you finished this story so I finally decided to read it ! It's very interesting so far, and reading all the good reviews, I know it's gonna be a good read!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 06:07 pm Title: Epilogue

THAT WAS EPIC!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

Reviewer: mcpofife Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/10 05:57 pm Title: Epilogue

That was a fun, imaginative ride! Thanks for posting. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

Lol, was I the only one who got extremely nervous here, when Tom was going after Bill? It felt like a non-con was coming on. (Not rape, no, but unwanted kissing and groping perhaps) Curse Bill's outrageous appeal XD
Glad Bill snapped him out of it, though.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

Omg, poor Bill! *cries*
Wow, you really carried across the aching longing. :(

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 18

Haha, oh my GOD. The way Bill came into the base was like... lol, it reminded me of Miranda's entrace and effect in The Devil Wears Prada.

Except of course, Bill is much more intimidating and more of a crazy diva bitch XDD

I felt for Tom a lot. That was definitely not the Bill we got to know in their prior encounters. Damn, what a turnaround XD

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 01:49 pm Title: Epilogue

*also stands and gives a round of applause, clapping till it hurts*

OMG. I slightly saw this fic around sometimes, but never took the time to start reading it till last night. (lol, coincidence that it had just completed, huh?)

I am COMPLETELY blown away. The high sci-fi perfectly combined with real-life events is just astounding.

It's pretty rare that a fic will keep me obsessively reading until 5:45 in the morning!! XD Of course i had to sleep, and I finally finished the whole thing a bit ago.

The characterization was excellent, and oh my god, the technology and just the entire concept was awesome. The writing was flawless.

Lmao, omg and this should SO be an actual movie. Title roles played by the twins, of course ;)

Haha, thank you for the EPIC story :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you gave it a chance and that you liked it! :D

Reviewer: DarkFantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 05:14 am Title: Epilogue

WOW!! It is so rare to come across a fan fiction that actually has a well thought out and written plot. And the idea of the twins being a little more than human fits them perfectly. Kudos!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, the Kaulitz twins are something else entirely! It's hard to think they're humans :D

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/10 12:26 pm Title: Epilogue

*stands up and gives a round of applause* That was an AMAZING story! A perfect ending too ^^

Author's Response: Thanks so much! XD Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: sweetascAndie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/10 07:23 pm Title: Epilogue

AHHH SO GOOD!!! this is easily one of my favorite fanfics - im kind of sad that it's over :') im looking forward to reading all of your future stories! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! XD I am in the process of writing some other stuff but we'll see. :)

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