Date: 02/06/26 01:03 am Title: Chapter 31
Gahhh i had forgot how freaking AWESOME this chapter is, DAMN friend you can write with suspense and killer spot on descriptions damn I’m floored xD the ending is SO amazing and there’s just so many details in this chapter that is unique but SO fitting the story, Tokio hotels members and just the feeling is electric haha okey I’m rambling and I’m sleep deprived and I’m also submerging myself into this fic right now to feel better so I might sound very dramatic but it’s also true.. Xoxo ;>
Author's Response: Hi again!! My TH email is so active now it’s really surprising after all these years! Thanks for reading. I’m overcome with nostalgia of the time I spent writing these fics and the joy of it. I sometime wish I had more time to keep writing but alas life. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review. Hope you keep enjoying!
Date: 02/05/26 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 29
The lovemaking was beautiful and Toms possessiveness and older twin protectiveness is hot and also beautiful, and finally some rimming (a) it really fits with his obsessed and hungry Tom is for all that is Bill in this story especially so nice work there:) with Tom being an empath with his twin and feeling double the pleasure it was also very fitting and nice work that he actually fainted when he climaxed too.. it was actually hot, endearing and amusing all at the same time ^^ what could have been better though is that it wasn’t really clarified if Bill had an orgasm during their lovemaking, since he spasmed and such before Tom climaxed and it wasn’t brought to attention that he didn’t finish I guess he must have but it could have been more clear ^^ also in the shower why was it only Tom that got to cum (a) it was super hot but it would have been the icing on the cake (lol cum pun not intented xD) if they both got to cum by mutual oral/fondling or just by grinding in the shower, grinding against each other in the shower is always a hot twin scene to include ;) But those were just some ideas and nitpicking.. I loved this chapter honestly, as always
Date: 02/05/26 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 28
And Omg hahaha how adorable if the tomato was to be called Goldilocks xD aww! I’m gonna start calling him that or write a fic where he’s called that but he’s still very manly and gangster at the same time would be hilarious ahah! I also loved the line “Gangsta and Princess; Twins on the run!” :,)
Date: 02/05/26 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 28
This whole chapter is amazing :,D “queer looking gun” ahahah! One of Toms fantasy cars a silver audi r8 being their get away car, Tom and Andy bickering and bonding and how they blushed and was flustered turning away when Bill changed clothes and looked at them ahahah! And how Tom asked Andy if he wanted a kiss, simply amazing xD I love this Tom / these twins in this fic and also this Andy.. and btw it’s fun to write emojis out especially the xD smiley because I rather do that instead of putting real emojis in cause they sometimes don’t show up and it’s just weird symbols instead haha, writing xD and ^^ and :,D and stuff feels like earlier 2000 era again, love it :) I love you too ;) And I hope you read all my long and silly comments (a)
Date: 02/05/26 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 25
Regarding what you yourself said about what you wrote in the start that Tom felt he had “alien feelings and alien flustered reactions towards *ugly Bill* now we know *SPOILER DONT REED MORE OF MY COMMENT IF THIS IS YOUR FIRST TIME READING THIS FIC* that is WAS indeed Bills flustered and in love and passionate feelings and reactions towards Gorgeous Tom ;D and those feelings were and are in fact NOT alien even if Bill is the one having an alien chip thingie, ahah ;) BTW it’s very hot and magical that Tom will feel double the attraction / love and pleasure because he feels Bills feelings and sensations towards himself as well as his own, how in the world could he stay away from being the one himseeeelf dryhumping Bills thigh when they’re in bed every night? Haha xD I love this story btw, yet again
Date: 02/05/26 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 27
They’re so sexy together ugh.. again I’m missing rimming ;) Btw, Bills question regarding if Tom didn’t suspect him (he really should have? x)) but also Bill should also have suspected something since HE was the one who shut down Tom at first when he told him they were brothers, cause Tom said he was in love already then or tried to say so, and yeah maybe Bill thought it went away (like Tom would stop loving Bill after learning his true looks AND that they were born soulmates when he loved him already as the ugly boy xD? Pfft haha they’re both a bit stupid our babys) and also Tom was hard and almost coming from Bills teasing entry when they reunited at the base and Tom even showed it (held his bulge when he jumped from the ladder) and even implied he was still in love / aroused by Bill ^^
Date: 02/05/26 05:37 am Title: Chapter 14
It’s soo sexy that Tom gets so incredibly horny by Bills scent alone ugh
Date: 02/05/26 01:40 am Title: Chapter 14
Ugh the last part is so hot and naughty, that tomato ;) always aching for his Bill
Date: 02/04/26 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
The cheek caressing / cheekbone kneading and Toms serene smile / leaning into the touch was so easy to picture and SO sweet and adorable I just can’t :,) something I’m sure has happened sometime with them IRL too when one of the twins have caught the other falling asleep… and yet again Toms subconscious is reacting to his identical twin / his soulmate and it’s so beautiful >_
Date: 02/04/26 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww I love the twins reacting to each others actions unconsciously , or I don’t know if Bill knows about Tom already here but at least Tom is reacting unconsciously, and they’re so adorable :,) yet another fic from you that I love and have read more then 2 times and now I’m reading it again ;)
Date: 02/15/24 12:12 pm Title: Epilogue
Hello! Just finished this story and I also could not put this one down. I almost hate myself for how fast I read this one. One of my favorite scenes was when Tom is peaking over the edge of the bed when confronted with Bill after getting to the base for the first time. I could picture that whole scene perfectly in my mind and it was so humorous I just loved it. I also loved how clueless Tom was to how Bill felt about him for awhile even after the way Bill treated him. This whole story was wild from start to finish, just like your other story I’ve read I could not predict what would happen next. Which is very refreshing considering most fanfiction can end up being predictable. I loved the way you wrote Bill in this story and I can total see him being perceived that way he is very magnetic. I look forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response: Hi again!! Thank you! I wrote this story so long ago that it feels so strange to recall the scenes. Such good times hehe. I am really happy you liked this one too. Thanks again for leaving a review. 🙂
Date: 03/05/23 08:42 pm Title: Prologue
This is one of the fics I added super early on to the tracked list and I took a god awful long time to read. Finally I did and hate that I waited so long. What a ride. It was interesting to go into it so blind wondering what was up with Bill being so ugly LOL ... when the story got to the reveal I was even more hooked. Super original and I could legit see Bill being like this esp in the mohawk/pompadour phase - just this insanely enchanting human that turns every head. Tom getting the injection to read Bill's thoughts was great. This was really an all-around good time. Thank you!
Author's Response: Hello! Thank you! It’s nice to read reviews from old stories. Writing this fic in particular gives me such fond memories. I have moved on to other fandoms and hardly have time to write anything anymore so It’s always nice to remember the fun I had. Such good times. Thank you so much for your comments. I’m reay glad you enjoyed reading 🙂rnrnrn
Date: 02/02/18 05:32 pm Title: Epilogue
I don't think I'll ever not love this story. I'll be reading it 20 years from now and still loving it
Author's Response: Awww thanks so much!! I'm so happy to know you enjoy reading it. The twin connection will always be an intriguing subject. :D
Date: 03/12/17 08:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Mindblowing! I am speechless after reading the last part. How? How can you write such an amazing story with a great plot? I salute you! Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Hi!! Thanks so much! I'm really happy to know you enjoyed it. Heheeh I guess I was inspired by the twin bond to write this one. Such an interesting topic. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 01/13/17 06:05 pm Title: Epilogue
this was a really good story!!
you should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! So glad you enjoyed it. I don't know if I'm good with sequels, series or that sort of stuff. So every new story is a stand alone story :/
Date: 09/30/16 05:07 pm Title: Epilogue
This is definitly one of the best stories I've ever read. Just amazing, worth every minute spent on reading. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it :D
Date: 11/19/15 02:46 am Title: Epilogue
Well done sci fi!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 02/14/15 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 28
Does anyone else love Cody's immaturity? The image of him making shooting sounds while disabling the cars is way too cute. XD
Author's Response: lol XD
Date: 01/11/15 01:29 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this story so much! and you're such a talented writer! I don't know what else to say, this story was...incredibly amazing, absolutely one of my favs aaaaahhh *-*
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad to see people still read this story, it was posted a long time ago. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the great review! :D
Date: 07/22/14 12:58 am Title: Epilogue
Oh my god!!! I loved this story sooo much!! I laughed, I cried, and screamed along with this story! Its perfect! But sometimes it made me gag;) hahaha but loved it!!
Author's Response: haah thanks! It's so long since I read it, sometimes I re-read it and go OMG myself hahahahahaha times changeeeeeee I'm less perverted now. I think lol