Date: 02/23/09 08:44 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww...poor Tom and Bill! It really suck they were separated, but that's unfortunately what's schools really do. Great update!
Author's Response: Yeah I was trying to keep everything realistic thats how I like my story's and thats how this is to be seen ^^. Danke 8D!
Date: 02/23/09 08:22 am Title: Chapter 4
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Excellent chapter! It was very good, and I certainly can't wait to read more! I don't think it's being rushed in the least bit... I love the scene where they were being seperated... it was absolutely heartwrenching. Very good! I hope you get the chance to continue soon! I can't wait...
Author's Response: THANK YOU ~^^~!!! I have had a few people say it was heartbreaking and in a sence I am glad. I didn't think it was going to be all that sad and that I'd fail :O. But I'm glad to know I didn't! And of course I will continue this story is already fully completed. I will update wednesday 8)
Date: 02/23/09 05:26 am Title: Chapter 4
*giggles*
Happy Birthday!
Author's Response: THANK YOU ~^^~!!!
Date: 02/23/09 02:59 am Title: Chapter 4
well happy birthday I gave you two reviews in one day.
so them being separated put the devestating idea of permanent separation. now they defintely learned they have to fight hard to stay together.
it was heartbreaking watching to scene unfold with the separating. bill's reaction was so heartfelt. his reaction and tom's shows that later they'll do everything in their power to make sure that people won't separate them permanently.
oh this chapter showed the first promise tom couldn't keep. with “Promise not to let them take you away from me?”. I knew that eventually there would be some obstacle that would threaten their relationship. bill seems more dependent of the two to being together.
and it was so cute that bill tried a new kiss to make sure they're always together. bill was so cute throughout the whole experience and teaching tom a new kind of kiss.
I don't think it's moving to slow in most 9 year old perspective a french kiss and gropping is pretty far. so no need to further their experience's when they would no what the next step would really mean emotionally and physically. so nice to just get milestones from their relationship. no need to push on sex I think they'd have to at least touch eachother first before and be more curious about more physical aspects. right now they seem more into the emotional bond of their relationship as should be before anyways. so look forward to more soon.
again happy birthday hope it's a good one.
Author's Response: Didn't you give me two reviews on this chapter ;~;?? I don't see the other one :O!! And thank you ^^!!! But wow... I... don't know what to say. The fact that I even got such a detailed review mind blows me. It means so much to me I can't thank you enough!! And no worries I don't further their 'relationship' at such a young age that would be unreal, this is suppose to be realistic I like my stories that way ^^. But still... THANK YOU!! *Hugs for you*
Date: 02/23/09 02:17 am Title: Chapter 3
love how tom keeps all of their promises to heart. he will protect bill to the end of the world. the teacher totally deserves to bit. picturing the bit was hilarious. oh and the birthday party part was cute. the things bill said about all he need was tom and tom said he didn't need a wish. aww their too cute. you really see that they have made it them against the world already. this chapter just shows how independent they are from outsider and how dependent they are of eachother. sorry late hope you read this i'll read the next one and review too.
Author's Response: Tom is turning into a good big brother! And yes I agree she deserved to feel Tom's wrath with his teeth lol. And thanks I was hoping it wasn't cheezey about them saying they only needed each other but then I thought 'hey... they're little kids. They're suppose to be filled with cheezey-ness' lmao.
Oh and no worries I like reviews no matter what. I apologize for my later response though! I enjoyed your review very much for chapter 4 ^^!!
Date: 02/23/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 4
HAPPY BDAY...and at 9 they should know wat kinda kiss that is..so ur doing good=]=] update soon plz=]
Author's Response: Well with TODAY'S generation I wouldn't be surprised if they knew what kind of kiss that was XD. But here they're not really sure actually :/. It's not like they're exposed to this stuff a lot and thanks for the happy birthday ^^!!!
Date: 02/23/09 01:06 am Title: Chapter 4
HAPPPPPPYYYYY BIRRRTTTHHHDDAAAYYYY!
*gives you tom and bill jizz cupcakes*
xD
why didn't you tell me it was your birthday?
now i feel bad
x[
anyways this chapter made me laugh
i loved tom's reaction to the kiss
but the ending had me crying
=/
HOW COULD THEY BE SEPERATED?!
thats just shinanigins
Author's Response: Oh wow those cupcakes sound... interesting XXDD. And dumby I've had a count down in my statues for over a week :O! Thanks for noticing T~T. BUT I still love you *Hugs* lol. Don't worry nothing will keep them seperated for long. THANKS FOR REVIEWING and telling me HAPPY BIRTHDAY Angelica :3!!!
Date: 02/22/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
heehee... tom's soooo protective!!! i LOVE it!!!!!! but, why won't bill talk or anything in school? am i supposed to already know why, or am i just weird and can't figure it out?
Author's Response: It's ok I'm more than happy to tell you ^^. It's because he doesn't like school and the people pick on him. But mostly because he can't sit near Tom and the twins are seated far apart. But the teachers won't sit them close cause they're mean ;~;
Date: 02/22/09 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
aww it was cute=]=]=]=]
Author's Response: DANKE ^^!!
Date: 02/22/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter 3
great chappie! its so lovely how tom protects bill :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review 8D! And yeah it's like a cute big brother thing going on ^^
Date: 02/22/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter 3
That was soooooo NOT boring at all. I love seeing Tom defending Bill. I really love this. You are still doing an awesome job here sooo, keep it up. I loves this story. *Gives you hugs*
Author's Response: *Gives you lots of hugs back* =D!!!! I'm still doing things right than XD! I hope to keep everyone happy with each new update. Danke ^^
Date: 02/21/09 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
WOOTWOOT!
GO TOMI, GO TOMI, GOOO!!!!
Author's Response: LMMFAO XXXDDD
Date: 02/21/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lol, I can just imagine little Tomi's angry face as he bites the teacher xD
Author's Response: I know isn't it funny XD?!
Date: 02/21/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Go Tom! I think it's really sweet the way he stood up for Bill. And once again, everything is so realistic...I can really imagine a nine year old say and do the sorts of things you described in this chapter. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *Dances around* Alright! I'm on the right track than! I decided to update every other day. Twice a week was too slow... lol
Date: 02/19/09 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aaw, so cute!
Author's Response: Danke ^^
Date: 02/19/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like that every year they have new challenges that threatings their relationship. but bill and tom do everything to their knowledge to keep themselves together forever. so you start to notice that they are developing a strong need for eachother only. I really like how you show a important factors each year that changes their relationship. I look forward to their next year and their ever strengthening bond.
Author's Response: Wow... your review was... so wonderful ^^! Gosh I'm glad that I was able to show that in only 2 chapters! It's so great when people notice what I was trying to stress without like messing the whole story up. Danke danke danke!
Date: 02/19/09 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
awww... this is sooo cute!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: DANKE ^^!!! I hope you keep reading!
Date: 02/19/09 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
You've really captured the thoughts and emotions of little kids in this chapter. It was just another great look at the twins and their love for each other!
Author's Response: Your reviews are always so great ^^! I can't thank you enough really 8) I just wanna thank you for reviewing again and it gives me the will to keep posting chapters
Date: 02/19/09 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was sooo cute. I can see this fic is going to be amazing. I can't wait for the next chappie. You are going such an awesome job here.
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much ~^^~! Your review means a lot to me 8)!
Date: 02/19/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
IT'S SO ADORABLE!
Author's Response: Thank you ^^!!!