Date: 08/17/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 9
HAHHAHAHAH!!!! Bill's subconscious is horny....:3
Date: 03/27/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG! You HAVE to update soon! I absolutely LOVE this story! I CANNOT wait to see what happens to Bill and Tom!
Date: 10/21/09 01:23 am Title: Chapter 9
I see from your replies that your having computer problems, I hope you get it worked out soon so that you can get back to posting.
Date: 06/17/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow I just got addicted to this story :D
Author's Response: I know it's been like 2 months but I wanted to answer you, lol. As soon as I get my computer back, this one will be finished. You'll have to start it all over again by then, LOL. Thanks!
Date: 06/15/09 09:41 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm having suchs a great time reading this! I can understand why you would ever want to delete it
Please keep up the awesome work!
You've got me hooked ;D
Author's Response: It took me forever to answer this I know. But I wanted to let you know that it will be finished when I get my comp back! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/30/09 05:06 am Title: A Child is Born
Really enjoy the story so far, love a spazzy Bill. To be honest I get annoyed with ppl who are cheerful all the time so don't hate me when I say I hope Tom loses some of it. Really hope you continue with the story its a good addition to the fantasy genre here. Ciao!
Author's Response: Well he wasn't cheerful at the beginning, but he is right now b/c it's the first time that he's been anywhere and he's looking at it as an adventure, but don't worry reality will come back to him, lol.
Date: 03/26/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 8
Don't worry Gustav, Bill won't let Tom die! ...Hopefully... :P
Author's Response: Hopefully, lol. Nah I'm kidding. :D
Date: 03/26/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 7
It would be made of lots of sad if you delete this story. I really like this story, it is totally different than anything I have read on here. I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^_^
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I just posted another chapter up. I can hopefully get to the exciting stuff soon, lol. Thanks again!
Date: 03/20/09 02:55 am Title: Chapter 7
eh.. ;______; you're going to take it off?? :[ well i like this story and it is getting more and more interesting! D: Bill finally got over his fear of healers~ XDD so cute~ XDD i want the story if you're going to take it down!! if you don't mind of course.. D: my e-mail is sugar.cookies.are.yum[at]gmail.com :]
Author's Response: It definitely wasn't a sure thing that I would take it down. I'll give it more of a chance. It deserves it I think. And sugar cookies are yum! You're right about that.
Date: 03/19/09 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
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I am coming out of hiding to say PLEASE DO NOT DELETE
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I lurk on this site =/
Author's Response: LOL, I don't know why you made me laugh. I am glad you came out of hiding though, I really am. :D I think it deserves not to be deleted just b/c you ventured out to where I could see you. :)
Date: 03/19/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww... This Tom is one of the very rare characters that actually make me want to swoon... Which is a really weird word by the way. "Oh, Fabio!" *Faints Dead* It's so retarded. So you see, that's not an emotion I feel very much.
But Tom does it. Sigh. (You can puke now, I don't mind. :P ) If that made any sense at all... ;)
Don't delete it! I guess if you do, SEND IT TO ME! It's so good! And now that they've met and Bill's not being a freak (:P) it's going to get so much better! (Which will be hard to do, since I love it so much already.)
Author's Response: I won't puke, LMAO. I will definitely send it to you if I delete it. I don't know that I even will though. Kinda makes me feel like a quitter and I'm not, lol. But yay, I'm glad you like Tom. He's so sweet. :D
Date: 03/19/09 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
hi. IŽm really sorry that you may delete the story, please tell me so I can send you mi email. I really really want to read the rest of the chapters.
See you later bye
Author's Response: Oh I'll definitely tell you before I do it. One way or another you'll get the whole story! :D Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 03/17/09 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bill's hilarious. That guy's story about healers made me picture Tom doing some Avatar-style martial arts for some weird reason... o.0
Author's Response: Lol! Well I can't promise martial arts. I'm glad you think Bill's funny, I do too. :D Thanks for all your reviews!
Date: 03/17/09 10:00 am Title: Chapter 6
jaja this story is beyond words....is so funny hope youŽll continue it soon see you
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it. I will continue it soon! :D
Date: 03/15/09 02:22 am Title: Chapter 5
Have to say that i love this fic. It is very different from the fics i have encountered on this site. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to come up with something different. Don't know how it's turning out though. But I am glad that you like it so far! :D
Date: 03/14/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
yay~~~ that wAS a really quick update~ :DDD LOL! oh confused!Bill is soo adorable~ XDD but..ah.. 0_0;; not a very bright idea to kidnap Tom.. >>;; oh dears~ XDD i can't wait for more~~ :DD
Author's Response: I just posted more. :D Yeah, I definitely think Bill agrees with you. He's not too fond of the idea either...yet. LOL.
Date: 03/13/09 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahahaha... Poor Bill. They're technically pirates now, yeah? Yeah... I like pirates. If you couldn't tell. ;)
Author's Response: Just for you, they are pirates indeed! lol. :D Thanks for reviewing again! It means alot!
Date: 03/13/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad you didn't drop this after all! I'm enjoying it so much! I really hope you do continue! XD
Author's Response: I'll continue it. I've decided to because of you guys. I'm glad you like it and I more than appreciate you telling me so! Thanks so much!
Date: 03/13/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 4
i personally like this story~~ :DDD but if you have no desire to finish it..please don't force yourself. D: i personally believe that if you have no desire to continue your story, it won't turn out as nice.. :/ So put it up for adoption~ :DD LOL jk..It is your choice :]
Author's Response: Oh please don't misunderstand. The story will be finished. I started it for myself to try to improve at being a writer. I kinda suck at it. I only wondered if it was worth posting. I've still been writing. But I've decided to post it regardless because of the few of you that do like it. So thank you for letting me know that you do. It will be finished. :D
Date: 02/21/09 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was really nicely done, I think I'm starting to love this story, seriously. I like the way you write because it's serious in a way and also very smooth. Maybe my opinion has been influenced by the many adventure books I've read when younger, but I'm glad I'm reading this 'cause it sort of takes me back to those childhood days.
Author's Response: Wow, that was the nicest thing ever. I really appreciate everything you just said. I lack confidence in writing because I suck at it so much but you just really made me smile with this review!