Date: 04/28/09 05:36 pm Title: 4. Swimming Class
Aaaah it's well good. :D
Write more. I neeeeeeeed to know wht's going to happen next. Otherwise...i might die.
tehe.
xxxxxxx
Author's Response: Awww I willllllllll. Thank youuuuuu xDrniluuu xxx
Date: 04/21/09 06:10 pm Title: 4. Swimming Class
why hullothere *waves*
fancy seeing you round here AND on the UK forum ahh the world is a small place!
anyway i thought i had (and i might have) already left one of my long and rambling reviews on here because i remember readign it but maybe i havent hmmm oh well here it goes (possibly again) first my i just ay im very impressed? you changed from bills perspective to toms rreally smoothly without breaking the entire chapter with a dotted line or something like most people do and that eally improves th qualit of ths chapter for me anyway
also i reaally HATE crystal can i push her off a tall building please? umm yh well thats all i really had to say at this point. youll get mre slightly isightful ramblins if you post another chapter soon if that will epersuade you and if not then that is a punishment if you dont update. ok now im just rambling so im gonna shut up and end this review now.
much love and waiting for the next update
Ellie
xXx
Author's Response: Aha what's your username on the Street Team? And I would love it if you pushed Crystal off a cliff. xD I'm planning on update sometime soon, so I'll await your next ramble ;)
Date: 04/12/09 03:29 pm Title: 4. Swimming Class
Wow, Tom's pretty stupid for even attempting to do that. I would've just been like, "Freak this. I CAN'T swim. I'm not going to die, for you."
But, I'm weird, so,x']
And, I hate Crystal, with a burning passion.
Like, She knows Tom knows it was Bill who saved him, so, what's the use? haha.
I Love how Tom's Obsessed with Bill, it makes me happy[:
:D
Author's Response: Haha thank you :)
Date: 04/08/09 02:15 am Title: 4. Swimming Class
TOM YOU IDIOT!!! DO NOT JUMP IN TO THE F*CKING WATER IF YOU CAN'T SWIM!
I love this story give me more more more more soon!
Author's Response: Aha looooool. He is a reatard, isn't he? ;) ;) ;) I will try to give you more :)
Date: 04/08/09 12:38 am Title: 4. Swimming Class
ooh i luvz this=] update SOON plz thx=]
Author's Response: I'll try!
Date: 04/07/09 10:56 pm Title: 4. Swimming Class
I hate that Crystal chick, if I were there I would have held her head under water lo
I am really enjoying this story, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Aha thank you :P
Date: 04/07/09 10:00 pm Title: 4. Swimming Class
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will...soon! :P
Date: 04/07/09 05:50 pm Title: 4. Swimming Class
eeeiii post soon, this is getting good! please write longer chapters, youre great!
Author's Response: Thank youuuuuuu :)
Date: 04/07/09 05:41 pm Title: 1. Bunking
hmm I really like the storyline and your writing is also ok - but you can sense that you are really young - try writing more to get some experience - or let someone comment your writing(like a teacher or something)
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 04/04/09 10:39 pm Title: 1. Bunking
I am really loving this story. I can't wait for more, I need more lol
Author's Response: Thank you! The next story should be up in a week or two :)
Date: 03/29/09 07:03 pm Title: 3. Maths Class
This is great so far Nom! I cant wait to see what comes next! I love the idea that they are 2 completely opposite students at the same school. Lol they should go to the school dance together!x
Author's Response: Aha thanks, B! Lu x
Date: 03/29/09 05:26 am Title: 3. Maths Class
Give me more more more more NOW!!!
I kind of hate Tom's girlfriend...
Author's Response: I'll try! And don't we all? xP
Date: 03/29/09 01:02 am Title: 3. Maths Class
So, I'm starting to pretty much dislike Crystal. x]
And, the whole staring thing, one word: Adorable
Author's Response: Aha me too.rnThank you :)
Date: 03/28/09 11:27 pm Title: 3. Maths Class
they couldn't take their eyes from each other!!! *.*
Author's Response: Aha noooope
Date: 03/28/09 10:56 pm Title: 3. Maths Class
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will!
Date: 03/28/09 10:29 pm Title: 3. Maths Class
Aww XD that was cute. now all Tom has to do is talk to Bill and dump the whore :) cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Aha thank you.
Date: 03/25/09 06:56 pm Title: 2. French Sucks.
This was Amazing:)
theyfinallytalked! *giddy fan girl squeal* :Dx]
Author's Response: Aha. Thank you! They talked just for you ;)
Date: 03/21/09 03:49 pm Title: 2. French Sucks.
ooh i luvz it=]=] plzplz update soon thx soso much=]=]
Author's Response: I'm gunna' try, but I have exams coming up so I'm reivising first. :)
Date: 03/17/09 05:08 pm Title: 2. French Sucks.
'Mrs the bird'? Cause that makes sense... lol. You should have told me it was for a name. It wouldn't have been Mme Oiseau. 8-) lol
Author's Response: Oh wellllll. -shifts eyes- we won't tell anyone else that. xP
Date: 03/17/09 03:20 pm Title: 2. French Sucks.
I LOVE IT! :D It's a great story. You shall keep writing on this or else i will hunt you down with the cookie monster!
Author's Response: D: I'll update soon. lol