Date: 11/20/10 02:41 am Title: First Time for Everything
Hahah, sorry for that. I always forget you read the reviews(I'm stupid like that)... It's just that there were alot of mistakes and I'm not a fan of the "fast forward" stories ;)
Author's Response: No its completly fine und i understand. I will try to not fast forward in the series. Und yes I do read all of my reviews. It helps me figure out what I fucked up und what need to fix.
Date: 11/19/10 05:48 pm Title: Tomi, I-I-I....
So shitty written, but oh so sweet :')
Author's Response: Thank you for that.
Date: 11/19/10 01:27 pm Title: I Love You, Even When Your Covered in Mud!
Wait...where's the banner?
Author's Response: Did it not show? Im so sorry. my comp was being really weird but ill upload it again!
Date: 11/14/10 12:17 am Title: Tomi, I-I-I....
Nice job! Love the way that you had them make love, "not fuck or have sex" after Tom ask Bill to marry him-I think thats how it should be. Will deff be watching for the series!
Author's Response: Haha thank you! That's kinda what i was going for. I would totally put up the last chapter but i still have no idea what the series name will be! Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 11/12/10 07:12 am Title: Meeting Gustav and Asshole
I like the plot of the story, but your writing style is a little hard to follow. There is a lot of dialog here and not enough action to counter that. The personalities of the character keeps changing rapidly as if they are having a bi-polar attack, and there is no background.
The background isn't so important at this part but a little wouldn't hurt.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I think I will so the seirs so i can gett more into the backround. your right I dont add a lot of action but i shall try in the next seris
Date: 11/11/10 11:56 pm Title: How Can I say this? I Love You!
Gahhhh---he better say yes!!!! And YES to making this a series...please?
Author's Response: Haha i can't tell you what he will say. He might say yes und he might say no. The whole series thing is still up in the air but i will consider it. Thanks for the review
Date: 11/06/10 01:13 pm Title: Consequences of Drinking. The Morning After
Can't wait for more :) Update soon!
Author's Response: thank you! I'll try und update before I leave
Date: 11/06/10 01:05 pm Title: The Hardest Part of Living......
lol Kazi and Georg...perfect for eachother :)
Date: 08/16/09 09:03 pm Title: First Time for Everything
well maybe it makes you proud that you don't do spell check, but to readers its simply annoying. why don't you get yourself a beta then? i'm sure it'll help you to improve you skills
good luck))
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. No I'm not proud that I don't use spell check. I'm sorry it's annoying. I'll try und stopp fuckin up words.
Date: 05/10/09 11:36 pm Title: Your No Bill!!
its a good start but you need to slow down it seems like you're rushing way to much and you really need to edit there are way to many simple spelling mistakes use spell check
Author's Response: Thanks for in the input. The thing is that I don't have spell check. I'm not using Word. I'm using WordPad. The only time I have word is if I'm using a friends comp or I'm at school. I really can't write my story there. Thank you so much for tellin me that. I really like the feedback. Please keep reading!
Date: 05/08/09 07:08 pm Title: Your No Bill!!
plzplzplzpzlpzlzlzplzplzp update sooonnnnnnnn..thx soso much=]
Author's Response: don't fret i will. im goin to try und out up ch 5-7 today(if they let me) und then im workin on the last couple of chs as we speek so just hold on! they will be up soon i promice! thanks so much for readin btw!
Date: 04/06/09 08:31 pm Title: The Story
awwwh! i lovee this story! cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: thanks so much for the feedback. im writtin as quick as i can. my internet is down at my house so i have to do the story at school. i will try und put up two neu chs asap. plz keep readin
Date: 03/20/09 11:27 pm Title: The Story
ooh my goodness..plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: i will dont worry. its spring break for me so i will try to add a lot more chs. thanks so much for readin!!!
Date: 03/20/09 08:42 pm Title: The Story
aww its cute how tomi did tht just for bill!!! :D
Author's Response: im trying to make the story as semi-romantic as i can. i know Tom's really not like this but i just think its cute to knida make him like this. haha. thanks so much for readin!!!!
Date: 02/18/09 06:20 am Title: First Time for Everything
Haha, I loved his little daydream about Bill, I've had a few of those xD I love it, more please!
Author's Response: haha i think everyone has thanks for the review. there will be more by this weekend i swear. if you have any ideas let me know
Date: 02/17/09 07:40 pm Title: First Time for Everything
*loves*
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review. there will be more soon. if you have any ideas let me know.
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review. there will be more soon. if you have any ideas let me know.
Date: 02/17/09 05:34 pm Title: First Time for Everything
lol love it
Author's Response: thank you und i will try to write more very soon. if you have any ideas for the next ch please let me know