Date: 10/26/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm just glad Bill didn't have to be with him. i want him to have a good first time. thanks for working on this again! =)
Author's Response: Oh no gross! I would not allow Jorg to be the one to take Bill's virginity. That's Tomi's.
Date: 10/26/09 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
sadly to say.... I loved it! It was intense and just wow! I'm kinda scared of what Lafee is going to do to our Billa! Anyways I'm glad you updated! Can wait for another one!
Author's Response: Don't worry, it's ok to like the bad stuff too. It's all part of the adventure. After all, who doesn't love seeing innocent Billa subjected to the lustful desires of pervy men. And boy oh boy, get ready for Lafee! She's really something.
Date: 10/26/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
I never like Pedophilia!! So I'm glad no Jorg/Bill scene!! Goodness!! I'm going to vomit at any imagery of it!!*cringes*
So, Bill's getting punished. I just hope Jorg would like, throw him away but then Tom will come to the rescue and turn him as his own slave. PLEASE!!!T^T *teary eyes*
Author's Response: Well Jorg couldn't just throw him away! That would be way too easy! Nope, shit happens before Tom gets to Bill.
Date: 10/26/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
phew...so glad there wasn't a Bill/Jorg scene...still, poor Bill...he's not got much going for him lol
Author's Response: Yeah, I totes didn't want Jorg raping poor Bill. And no, he doesn't; his situation is shit.
Date: 10/26/09 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
its good but you make me sad i don't like bill being injuried and shouldn't the language be more regal i like for the time period im not a writer thats just my opinion ...lol well nice job
Author's Response: Well, as I've said, bad things are going to happen to Bill. But there will be a happy ending, as I'm quit fond of those. About the language being regal: whose language do you mean? Jorgs? Bills? or just the text in general? If you mean Jorg, I'll just say that just because he's sultan doesn't mean he's got much character or class. He's not a very nice man. Is it the swearing that bothered you?
Date: 10/26/09 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really liked the almost rape scene! Oh no. That sounds really bad. Uh, well written is what I meant. I really do wonder what's next for little Bill.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. There had to be some kind of a confrontation between the two.
Date: 10/03/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
more more more don't leave when it was getting so good uggh .....lol great writing skills and the plot is great and the banner is beautiful
Author's Response: Aw, great writing skills? Thanks! I chose the pictures and Mars made them into a beautiful banner for me.rnrn
Date: 08/29/09 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like the story, although the part with Bill's operation made me cringe seriously =(
Are you going to update it? May was so long ago...
Author's Response: I know. I feel bad that I haven't. The writing mood just hasn't struck me, and I don't want to force myself to write something half-assed. Maybe I'll work on it this weekend.
Date: 07/04/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
luv it continue to update this story i want more of the tom and bill story line and with the others...luv it
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/20/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
I was worried you'd lost interest in this fic. I'm glad you added another update. (^_^)
Author's Response: No, I haven't lost interest. More like I'm lazy as crap and never update.
Date: 05/10/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
i do like this story. glad your semester is almost over so you will be writing more. :) keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/06/09 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
OH MY GOSH!!! More please update *begs* pleeeeaaaasssseee this is so good sugesting you to be featured! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!! You're the first person who's said they were going to nominate me! Oh I'm so excited! I hope other people are doing it in secretand just not telling me.
Date: 05/06/09 06:26 am Title: Chapter 5
WOW. Conbratulations to this amazing story! I completely blows my mind. Seriously. First, you have a beautiful writing style, rich language, and second, the story is well-thought out and not rushed at all. I like the Arabic setting and you obviously know what you are talking about what with the many Arabic words you employ. I can't wait to read more, it's a really really amazing story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're one of my fav authors so to hear that from you is totally flattering.
And hey, guess what? I have no clue about Arabic stuff. I just research it as needed. But this other girl reviewed and said I got it all right.
I just read the latest two chapters of Scar Tissue and it was AMAZING! I'm kinda scared to find out what Jorg did; like it's gonna bother me like when I watched the movie Sybil and found out why she was so fucked up. SO looking forward to more chapters on that one.
Date: 05/06/09 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5
it is very cruel ending the chappie there. please please please update soon? I'll... kidnap the twins and give them to you if you do... I'll even gift wrap them with a big red bow... lol.
Author's Response: Ok Deal. But I want them unharmed you hear?
Date: 05/05/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh my, i've been meaning to start this for ages... and now i'm really glad i did. it's really origional and I can't wait to see where you go from here... i have a feeling bill's life is about to get more complicated but eh, what's a good story without conflict... keep up the amazing work and danke for writing this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. Glad you think it's origional.
Date: 05/05/09 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh...poor bill...yuck jorg!
oh, i hope tom gets to bill soon...
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/05/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Bill=Exotic doll.
Author's Response: Oh yeah.
Date: 05/05/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
How do you know all this Arabic?! The only one I know is "habibi" and that's from the milk&honey song. :)
Author's Response: I have to look everything up.
Date: 05/05/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
'Good' does not cut it. THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!! I love your descriptions and your characters (so far). I usually don't review on 1st chapters but I'm making an exception for this AMAZING story.
Author's Response: I am so flattered by your review. Thank you so much!
Date: 05/05/09 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
well does tom get to rape bill then? D:
Author's Response: Maaaybe....