Date: 10/28/09 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
ooooh Tom saved Bill! i'm so so so happy
thank you for the chapter, can't wait to read next
Author's Response: How mean would I be if I let Lafee use that thing on Bill? Thanks for the review! I'll post again tomorrow.
Date: 10/28/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ah, no...poor Bill :[ Ahmed's a bitch. Yay for quick updates? Love this.
Author's Response: Ahmed is a pompous ass, in fact. You'll see more of him later. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/28/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hm, maybe when Bill wakes up he thinks Tom is evil too?
I mean, he is Jörgs son... Tom can also send Bill to Lafee... things like that?
Author's Response: Thanks for your prediction! Yeah, Bill could be scared, or confused at least. But remember, he kind of thought Tom was hot before.
Date: 10/28/09 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
I´m glad this is going to be Tom/Bill now instead of Jörg/Bill. I´m sure Tom will treat Bill well; this is going to be ~cute~ :]
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad it's Tom/Bill now too, but don't be so sure that Tom will be so lovey dovey right away.
Date: 10/28/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
I think he should be ever grateful that Tom got there when he did, lol. And I love that you are updating this so much now! :D
Author's Response: I sure would be. Although, he was kinda out of it, having been tortured and all. And yeah, I'm really trying to motivate myself to write like crazy on this fic. I've thought up a whole bunch more stuff that's gonna happen. It's going to take a LOT of writing though. Damn.
Date: 10/28/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG... That's brilliant!! a razor studded dildo? I love it.. and why do I imagine lafee looking like the pink girl in strawberry shortcakes? god.. I don't even watch strawberry shortcakes!!
Author's Response: Well, Lafee was suposed to be little-girly and demented, so maybe that's how you view strawberry shortcake?
Date: 10/28/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 7
No, no thumb screws but the studded dildo comes this *----* close to a good stand in for them (^_^) Poor Bill! i love that you made Lafee the insane mistress of the torture chamber.
Author's Response: My idea is worse than thumb screws, cause it could actually kill you. I'm glad you liked the character I made for Lafee. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/27/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm not sure if I even want to know what he saw...
Ahw, who am I kidding, I want to know!
I'm glad you updated, can't wait for the next one!
(And I do hope those razorblade dildos don't excist...)
Author's Response: It's kind of like the urban myth of the razor blade in the bobbing for apples, except much much worse!
Date: 10/27/09 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
lafeee rapping bill!! :@ I honestly dont know ..PLs update soon!
Author's Response: She's not raping him, she's torturing him!
Date: 10/27/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay! An update do u know how much I missed this story :p
Author's Response: I can imagine. Sorry for that.
Date: 10/27/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Is that ALL you can say?
Date: 10/27/09 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aaah no why did you end here??? Ahh!! I'm going to have such bad nightmares why did you do that to poor Bill??? ... This is supremely awesome, by the way.
Author's Response: I ended it there because I like to make you squirm.
Date: 10/27/09 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, god, PLEASE don't tell me that she had a chance to use that dildo. O.O *shudders at the thought of it*
Dear goodness, that was.. wow. That was quite the torture scene. It was really well wrtten, and even though I don't like torture, I read it anyway,just because I love you and this fic so much. XD Now, if you'll excuse me... *wanders off to cry in a corner* I do believe that the THOUGHT of that dildo has traumatized me a little. *weeps*
lol
Can't wait for more! (That's more FIC, not torture XDD) This story is just so beautiful. :)
Author's Response: Well I'm flattered that you endured it. It's a strange thing to write torture. I've never done it before, and it was far easier than I would have imagined. Lafee was fun to write, and I got so excited when I thought up the razor blade dildo. I was like, YES! this is terrifying!
Date: 10/27/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad you are updating this story! But then I got to the end of this chapter and I'm all worried!!! Don't let Bill get hurt.
Author's Response: You're supposed to worry for him. But don't have a seizure or anything. He'll live.
Date: 10/26/09 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG! I need the next chapter! Please don't leave me hanging!! I need to know what happens next! You got me hooked!
And how about some longer chapters?
Author's Response: I won't leave you hanging! I can promise this because I've already got the next four chapters written. But I hate to tell you, there are some short chapters coming up. Some long ones too, but one is only like, 1300 words. I know it sucks, but it's better than nothing right?
Date: 10/26/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
I just read this story from the very beginning, for the first time, and I'm completely in love with it! The imagery, the palace, the relationships, everything! It's all so beatifully crafted into a gorgeous story that pulls you right in. I love it!
Everything flows so well, and is so well written!
Jorg seemed to actually be kind-hearted at first, but now his true colors are showing, eh?
Tom is interesting. I like how he's drawn to Bill, but at the same time, they're not all goo-goo for each other after only seeing each other a few times.
And Bill... oh, sweet Bill. He's such a darling, he really is. And everything about him is so well written! From his hesiitance to his reluctance, to his fears, to his joy.
I absolutely can't wait for more! I hope you update soon. :)
Author's Response: Ok, you get the award for best review for chapter 6! Seriously, I want to serenade you. But I won't. Instead, I shall respond accordingly to the most loveliest points in your review.rnrn1:I like that it seemed to you that Jorg was nice at first. I wish that had been on purpose, but I'm simply not that clever.rn2:THANK YOU for applauding the absence of the suddenly-in-love syndrome. I'm trying to make it clear that Tom and Bill are two real, very different people.
Date: 10/26/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
KEEP IT COMIN!
Author's Response: That's all you ever say! I'll keep it coming, but give me something else here. Tell me what you thought.
Date: 10/26/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really squealed when I saw you updated this, since I'd been tracking it since way back when. And poor Bill! Jorg makes me shudder, and I'm glad Bill got away, although I get the feeling what's coming up isn't going to be a picnic either. I can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're glad. And that you didn't yell at me for the five months. New chapter tomorrow! And yes, bad things happen.
Date: 10/26/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh no! Poor Bill...
Author's Response: Oh believe me, it gets worse.
Date: 10/26/09 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
It was alright, but I would have preferred a definite rape scene. But thanks for updating :)
Author's Response: Wow, you really wanted Jorg to rape Bill huh? Sorry, but this story isn't that much of a hurt/comfort. Tom's going to furthur antagonize Bill, not pick up the pieces of his raped self.