Date: 10/30/09 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was really good.
I'm glad that Bill stayed consistent. It's great that he and Tom are getting along, but I suspected that realistically, he'd be mad once he realized that he was now TOM'S concubine. I'm glad that you had him react that way, it made things much more realistic!
Also, the relationship between Bill and the other girls, the simple camraderie, it's wonderful! It's the different extreme elements that make this story as wonderful as it is: Friendship, Slavery, Freedom, Lust, Fear, and amidst it all, happiness. I love it! Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: As usual, your review made me squeal. I knew from the start that I was not going to allow Bill to just change his mind about things. I'm glad you think it's realistic. And yeah, Bill's hanging out with these girls every day, so they're gonna grow close. Even though he doesn't really want to be there, Bill is making a life in the harem.
Date: 10/30/09 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
So, Bill gave Tom something to think over. I totally understand Tomīs point of view though. Itīs only natural that he in his position has to think that being his concubine must be the ultimate dream come to reality.
Thanx for the fast update!! Letīs see what happens next. I wonder if Tom is OK with Bill yelling at him in front of other people...
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill and Tom are not exactly seeing eye to eye right now. And no, Tom is not ok with Bill yelling at him.
Date: 10/30/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yes, I meant sexual healing last time. :D
And I almost chocked when I saw there was an update, they make me so happy! :D
Great chapter as always. :)
Author's Response: I'll be updating tomorrow too. Don't choke!
Date: 10/30/09 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
=D
Author's Response: How about putting some words in your review next time?
Date: 10/30/09 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
KEEP IT COMIN!
Author's Response: You are so annoying. Why bother reviewing at all if that's the only thing you're going to say.
Date: 10/30/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh and even nice guys like Tom do nasty things xD
A little more angst would fit the plot well.
Author's Response: Yes, a nice person can surely mess up and do not so nice things. One serving of angst coming up!
Date: 10/30/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
What sorts of things do I want to happen?
Hmm.. I say take off here "leaving Bill wondering just what “handed over” entailed".
I vote Tom tells Bill the rules about his stay in Tomīs "care". Bill IS relieved heīs with Tom now, but I donīt think his attitude has changed, so he will try to escape or something and the guards catch him before he manages to flee or something.
Just donīt make it too fluffy too soon please :)
Author's Response: Sooo... You want Tom to lay down the law eh? I think I can make that happen. Never fear, fluff this story is not.
Date: 10/30/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
I want to see bill try and escape again but get caught by tom :p
Author's Response: Hey! You're not the only one who has asked for this. Maybe I'll have to accomodate your wishes.
Date: 10/30/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yes, you are really nice to us! :D
Poor Bill though, but I'm sure Tomi will make him better. :D
Author's Response: Well Tabeeb Ihsan is doing that. Maybe you mean some sexual healing? :D
Date: 10/30/09 09:39 am Title: Chapter 9
Ya you are so nice and we all love ya for it!! *hug*
Author's Response: Thanks for the hug!
Date: 10/30/09 06:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Ahaha, being kicked out of your own room...sorry, that just strikes me as funny. Aww, Tom's so cute :D
Author's Response: Bill needs his beauty rest. He can't have Tom bugging him all day.
Date: 10/30/09 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, a friend sent me the link to this fic and I couldn't stop reading! This is brilliant! I hope you update soon! :]
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, people are spreading the news as if my story is something notable? Wow! Who was the friend who sent you the link?
Date: 10/29/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
what do I think should happen? lots of harem sex on silk sheets and all that. of course. a little dom/sub action. yes. ;)
real freaky naughty - lol - dodgeball rules.
Author's Response: Yes! D/s harem sex. That's what I will write.
Date: 10/29/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
I love this story! It's on my favorites and I longed for a new chapter months ago. And now I see many updates. Short but lovely updates. Keep up hun.
Author's Response: Yeah, the chapters are short, especially this latest one, but the task of writing just seems less daunting if I keep them short. Therefore I write more.
Date: 10/29/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
~Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad it's Tom/Bill now too, but don't be so sure that Tom will be so lovey dovey right away.~
He better not be. But whatever he does, it will be way better than what the sultan had in head for Bill. Tom is a kind guy (the story about his abused concubine showed it) but heīs still the master.
After all Bill hurt the sultan. Tom should teach him manners ;-)
Author's Response: Girl, you and me are right on the same page. "Real freaky naughty" ( White from Dodgeball)
Date: 10/29/09 08:49 am Title: Chapter 8
awwweee.. Ich liebe dich Tomi!! such a knight in shining errr.. idk..LOL
he'll be bitching about the pain?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and your guess. Yes Tom saved Bill, but I wouldn't call him a knight in shining armor just yet.
Date: 10/29/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 8
oh thank god you saved bill from that last torture. i don't know what will happen, but i hop i know soon! =) I'm excited to see tom and bill begin to interact more. thanks for the speedy updates, they are wonderful!
Author's Response: Well it's not like I could let Lafee actually use that thing on him. He'd be ripped to shreds! No no, I'm not that evil. Yes, Bill and Tom will be interacting a lot more from now on. Thanks for the great review!
Date: 10/29/09 03:27 am Title: Chapter 7
oh man, that last thing she pulled out...i can't even think about it, its too awful. yee gads...
Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to think of something really terrifying, like from Saw or something.
Date: 10/28/09 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
hmm bill will try and run away again! :p
Author's Response: Maaaybe...
Date: 10/28/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oooooof... Thank God she couldn't do that to him!!! Only thinking of it made me sick.
Go on!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, it squicked me just writing it!