Date: 03/20/11 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 14
I love this story so far.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it.
Date: 02/02/11 01:36 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow!This story was awesome.One of the best on the site!I'm so happy I've found it.Goes to favourtites for sure.Now I gotta check your other stories..:)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I love finding great fics when they're already completed and I can just sit down and gorge myself on them. Hope you like my other stuff.
Date: 01/29/11 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
Describing vaginas are sooooo your forte!:)
Author's Response: Seriously? I didn't think so, but thanks.
Date: 01/06/11 12:04 am Title: Epilogue
*cries forever* That was a bittersweet end and I loved it.
Author's Response: *hands tissue* thanks.
Date: 12/21/10 09:38 pm Title: Epilogue
I can't stop crying! Gah!
I honestly couldn't imagine being in Bill's place. Loving someone, but not being able to marry them. I guess, being in Tom's place as well would be just as hard.
This story is absolutely phenomenal! I absolutely loved it! I wasn't going to read this but I decided that I should. I am so glad I did. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. So many ups and downs and twists and turns. You kept me wanting more and more.
You are a truly amazing writer, hun! Thank you for sharing this wonderful world with us =]
Author's Response: Even though it was AU in a made up verse, I still tried to make it realistic. And in real life there are obstacles and less-than-perfect endings. It's nice to hear that you could appreciate both Bill and Tom's positions, as well as understand that it was equally hard for both of them.
Thanks for deciding to give the story a try. I'm glad you liked it. I think readers like you who discover the stories after they've been finished have the most fun, since you can just zip right through and don't have to wait for my ridiculously long updates.
Thanks for all the nice compliments, and you're welcome!
Date: 12/02/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 36
I knew Umhind was somewhat involved, and I was right! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Congrats, you're one of the few. I think most people barely payed attention to her. Thanks!
Date: 12/02/10 10:15 am Title: Chapter 31
Oh no =( I really liked Ankara... I think she and Farah were poisoned
Author's Response: There were poisoned, but they're not dead.
Date: 11/19/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
Tom luring Bill toward him was sexy, and I usually don't say things like that.
Yay for the sex ;)
Only, I found it that Bill didn't hurt at the first time sex, even with the lubrication, I think he'd still feel some sort of pangs... Even if he was relaxed, to me it felt like 'it' went in too smoothly. *shrug*
And no it was not rape.
Bill complied with the kisses, he didn't start screaming or fighting back once Tom pleasured him. He came, had an orgasm, deffi not rape. He enjoyed it.
17 with 23 I don't consider pedophilia b/c 17 is one year away from 18 plus 23 is so close. If it were 17 with 47 then THIS is pedophilia. IMO.
Beautiful chapter, it's the breaking point now...
Oh, and I still wonder of Bill's parents! And Andread and his brother. What do they think? Has Bill completely not thought of them once? Hmm...
Let me read on ;)
Author's Response: Bill's father and brother would probably get over his disappearance fairly quickly. His mother and Andreas, however, are probably very worried and sad. Bill has thought about them in previous chapters, if you look for it. But he thinks about them more than is mentioned in the text, for sure.
Date: 11/19/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
Firstly, you're very welcome. :) I am enjoying the story very much, and reviewing every chapter is a way to show it. Even though you have a very large review amount already, THF has been lacking fics, and I just need something worth reading. I had seen this story before, I just never bothered reading the summary. I'll be honest 'sultan' got me hooked pfft. xD
Is this story supposed to take place in the Middle East? If so, which region (country)? :)
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Bill is a sweetie.
He was disgusted by the sex. Haha. So cute, and Deena & Mahtob (where did you get this name from? o_o) are sweet too. I really enjoy their characters.
So Anis is back, he didn't do much, just order Bill to Tom.
Tom seems angered, and I can't believe he rescued Bill and went through all that library thing to threaten him with rape? I have the feeling he won't rape him, but if so, wow... story has lacked real sex so far, so I'm guessing it should be soon. Eleven chapters in already.
^_^
Author's Response: This story takes place in fictional country that is meant to be a combination of elements from the middle east and Turkey, and to a lesser extent India and the far east. I made up Deena and Mahtob's names, though I'm sure I had heard them somewhere before.
Date: 11/19/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
While I read I thought, 'Oh I was wrong, Bill still has a crush on Tom.' but as I kept reading, Bill changes his mind, b/c of the 'handing over' thing.
It was good, why so self cautious? :p
You'd think Bill would be somewhat glad to be able to get fucked by Tom lol, if he were that kinky. But he's a virgin, and not into that. Which makes his character super appealing, and just awww worthy. < 3
Author's Response: Bill may think Tom's attractive, but he barely knows him, and now Tom's acting all blase about having him for a slave, and that isn't to Bill's liking at all.
Date: 11/19/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
Naww, Bill/Tom early... bonding. xD
I think Bill feels uneasy about the 'handing over', and will mostly likely have some sort of nightmares and change his opinion on Tom.
Short but nice chapter. :)
Next.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm loving this reviewing on every chapter thing.
Date: 11/19/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 8
Though Bill is seriously injured, just no dildo.. I have a headache now. I don't know if it's your fic or the music.
I loved the emphasis on the hair pin. It let in some humor throughout all that... violence.
Jorg sounds a bit crazy, sex addicted, and just... fucked up. :p
Yay so this is the start (sort of) of Tom/Bill! :) Tom wants Bill as his... 'slave'.
I think when Bill will wake up he'll thank Tom and.. have.. cheesy time? Idk.
*next*
Author's Response: Glad you could find some humor in there. Jorg's not crazy, but he's not nice, and he and Tom don't get along. At all.
Date: 11/19/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lmfao, Lafee is... lulzy. It was somewhat sexy, until she went to far.. letting him bleed. I couldn't help but LOL @ the razor bladed dildo. ._.
I'm surprised all the servant girls love Bill so much! I didn't really expect it. Thought they could become jealous. /idk.
I don't want to know what happened to Bill.
Either the dildo (which is insanely disturbing :l) or something else.
What will happen to Lafeeeeeeee? (did you name her after that German band 'Lafee'? :p Or the girl herself [whatever])
*clicks*
and btw, nice cliff hanger. Really gave a good effect.
Author's Response: I kind of found her funny too when I was writing her, and she's named after that one girl(whom I know nothing about). I imagine all the harem's occupants either crushing on Bill cause he's pretty or squeeing cause they think he's cute.
Date: 11/18/10 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
;) I love Bill with older men... Especially Jorg, but this time Jorg isn't his real father.. Still a total YES!
I wanted a rape scene, but it was still worth it I suppose... Just confused why take him to 'Lafee' (assuming she's some.. servant or something) when he could dismiss the guards and continue with Bill.
The mental image of Jorg stabbing a pin into Bill's thigh is just... I can't respond to that. It's funny, yet also very disturbing at the same time. I shuddered though.
Love the violence.
Chapter felt like it zipped through, I was so into it.
The beginning was also really sweet, I loved the hand and hand in thing.. then Jorg tried charmingly luring him.. but Bill was stubborn, and he became abusive. /shrug
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Well Jorg isn't exactly in the mood anymore. He's more angry at Bill than anything, so he's sent him away to play with Lafee (so many rhymes). Sorry if the violence grossed you out, it's all part of the story.
Date: 11/18/10 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sweet chapter, so Bill is the only male concubine...
Hmm..
Of course I like. ;)
So now, Jorg is there. He has not met Bill yet, yes?
Mahtob is interesting, why was she thinking of Bill lol? She's a fangirl. :p
Bill has fiends now, cute.^^
Are the friends supposed to be laughing as Jorg err.. comes? You ended it off like that, I'm wondering if it holds something more than it is. *ponders*
Brilliant, next one now.
Author's Response: Yes, it's Bill surrounded by oodles of women. I don't think he minds though, as he is making friends with some of them. And yes, they were laughing just as Jorg showed up.
Date: 11/18/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow.. I don't know how to respond to this chapter...
The beginning, with the doctor to Deena...
Though now Tom has met Bill, (sort of) I wonder what he'll do to him since he's.. male.
This chapter was most effective, yet I have no words.
Amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 11/18/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I find Anis cute, funny because in most fics he is not portrayed as such. I like his character, he's sweet, and the idea of holding Bill's hand out of the balcony is precious. ^^
So Bill is for Tom's father? That's again, different than I thought.
"One rapist to another" Oh God.
“Did he come willingly?” The sultan queried.
When I first read that, I just.. thought 'come' as in 'semen'. I don't even.
Either way, it was lovely, and Bill seems to already find Tom appealingly attractive. :)
Author's Response: You may change your mind about Anis later.
Yes, as of right now, Bill is intended for the sultan. Don't worry, it is a Bill/Tom fic.
Date: 11/18/10 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ah pff, xD All the Arabic. I know the language naturally, I love seeing it in the text. :) Shawarma. xD
Habibi is a male word, and if one called a girl that thinking it was darling I'd lol.
I really did think the man was going to force Bill to give him head, and Bill would really do it. Did not expect Anis to be the hero, and stab the man. Bill seems innocent and very ignorant, only because even though Anis is a nice guy, he just... let him carry him out? Hmm...
I wonder how severe the damage on Bill's head really is, and how Tom will respond to him. More importantly, Andreas & and his mother..
Good of course. :)
Author's Response: I hope you're not disappointed when I make mistakes with the Arabic. It's just for effect, not perfect accuracy. Yes, Anis saved him, but Bill only let him carry him away because he's kind of out of it right now, what with a concussion and probably in shock too. And you're right, at this point in the story Bill is incredibly naiive.
Date: 11/18/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Saved the fic to read it once it completed. ;)
Youseff, Deena. Those are funny ways to spell them. xD My cousin is named Yousif, and I know a Dina. But naww, I love it. :p I also know an Omar. /I'll shut up now
So, Tom is a king (no.. if he has a father he is... prince? But they call him 'lord'. /confused), he has Deena for his... 'pet'
Oh Bill, he's beautiful.. and the men... he's not of high status, seems interesting. :)
*reads on*
Author's Response: I just found some vaguely middle-eastern names and spelled them how I liked best. Yes, Tom is only a prince, but people call him a number of things. "My lord" is just a polite title.
Date: 11/18/10 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol okay, I have not read the fic yet, but I see 'slavery' for a warning, so I will. For sure. After this little review. ^^
I just felt like saying, lol, and I smiled at Sultan. Arabic for king, and my question was, do you know Arabic or did you just look this up? ^^
Now I go read :)
Since I see some Middle Eastern thing going on just with the summary, and I feel the story already - being Middle Eastern. :D
< 3 ~
Author's Response: No, I don't know a lick of Arabic. I just googled what I needed for this story and hoed I got it right.