Date: 05/02/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMG I LOVE THIS :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 05/02/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 19
That was excellent. I really like what's going on with Bill's psychology and changes here, amazing.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the way I'm showing Bill's changing thhought process. Thanks!
Date: 05/02/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah .... I can see how Bill would feel now =/ imagine fancying your rapist? But it wasn't that bad for a rape. At least he didn't cause Bill any pain
Author's Response: Yeah, it was about the best way to be raped that I could think of. And it had to be, or otherwise Bill never would have been able to forgive him.
Date: 05/02/10 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
No it's not, Tom's character was slowly revealing to be a tough-guy wannabe but is really pure and plain fluffy goo on the inside and Bill Post-traumatic syndrome is a really nice touch too. -smiles-
Author's Response: Ok, thanks for clarifying your thoughts.
Date: 05/02/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 19
i love this! post more soon!
Author's Response: Maybe anoher chapter tonight...
Date: 05/02/10 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
nein. I like penis and ass to be simply put. JAja but it was good, nothing the less Lol
Author's Response: Glad you still thought it was good, even though het doesn't appeal to you. I felt that way writing it, to be honest.
Date: 05/02/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 15
I;m LOL because i have a feelign me and probably a select few others actually know how to pronounce these arab names such as mahmood :)
Author's Response: Ha, you're probably right. Even I might not know a few of them.
Date: 05/02/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 14
WILL YOU STOP PUTTING FOOD IN HERE WOMAN!. i want lamb... fuckkkk youuuu . Lol i loved thisss
Author's Response: Haha, sorry, but not really, lol. I put stuff like the food in to make it more culturally deep. I had lamb once, but it was dry and I didn't like it. Give me dark meat any day. rnrnHey, have you ever had camel? Googe told me that it's a less common, but still eaten, meat in the middle east. What's it taste like?
Date: 05/02/10 11:38 am Title: Chapter 19
Yayy!! Bill finally doesn't hate Tom anymore!
Author's Response: He's been hating him less and less over the past couple of months. It's hard for him though, because, well... wouldn't you feel guilty if you started to like the person who raped you?
Date: 05/02/10 08:08 am Title: Chapter 19
wow... O.o Tom is... sweet. -gapes- what... errr.... yeah..
-waits for more-
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom is changing how he acts.rnrnDid you think that seemed unrealistic? I tried to build up to the sweetness in other chapters.
Date: 05/02/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 13
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Author's Response: i?rnrnrnok...
Date: 05/02/10 06:21 am Title: Chapter 12
You actually want me to leave a coherent review, after reading that... your on crack. HOLY FUCK THAT WAS HOT, totally made my toes curl, it was oh so yummi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. It was super fun to write.
Date: 05/02/10 05:54 am Title: Chapter 11
idk... that may be sexy.... oh gosh im a perveee Lol but only if its like rape where bill ends up like...AHH idk Lol
Author's Response: If you're a perv for liking it, so is everyone else on this site. It may be rape, but that doesn't mean it's not sexy!rnrn
Date: 05/02/10 05:35 am Title: Chapter 9
ich liebe dich!!!!!!!!11
Author's Response: Danke!
Date: 05/02/10 05:28 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my lord. lafee about to stick a tortures dildo where the sun dont shine? AND OH MAH GAWD I ACTUALLY LAUGHED DURING THIS! lmao...
Author's Response: I tried to make it sort of weird and funny. No one but you has found it so though.
Date: 05/02/10 05:22 am Title: Chapter 6
OH MAH GOD, i swear i pictured bill perfectly like a movie playin in my head, i am in love with this! ^-^
Author's Response: Wow, I am so excited to hear that! I always try to convey the same things I see in my head while writing it.
Date: 05/02/10 05:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Gah! jorg! AH
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry for that. A lot of readers asked for it though.
Date: 05/02/10 04:23 am Title: Chapter 2
I am arab ( totes forgot to say that in last review) and let me tell u, i now have such a damn craving for a shawarma its not EVEN funny, damn. Lol good lord, haha but i likey this chapi mucho
Author's Response: Haha, I can't sympathise, because I've never had one. I don't really know about anything middle eastern, I just google as I go along. rnrnPlease don't be disapponted when this story deviates from arabian culture. It's an AU, not a period piece.rnThanks!
Date: 05/02/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter 19
wow. great chapter. tom and bill were very hot together and i loved the tom was so understanding. i also loved bill's realization about being unguarded. keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me the specifics of what you liked. I like that.
Date: 05/02/10 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Not good nope. AMAZING! :D ich liebe!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!