Date: 09/20/10 10:31 am Title: Chapter 30
This is getting SO mysterious and I'm loving every second of it.
Author's Response: Well that's great! It's kind of tricky to think up how I can present a certain mysterious issue without giving anything away to my readers.
Date: 09/20/10 09:34 am Title: Chapter 30
When will Bill and Tom get back together?
Author's Response: Hm. Well there are several things that need to happen before they do. But I would say... no more than five chapters. And that's a pretty liberal estimate, so maybe not even that long.
Date: 09/20/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter 30
O.O ohhhhhh I was so holding my breath here!
Author's Response: Glad you found it suspenseful.
Date: 09/20/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 30
Updaaaaaaaate!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Revieeeeew! Please, if this is all you have to say, don't even bother. That little box at the bottom of the page is for site members to make actual comments on each others' stories.
Date: 09/20/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 30
ooh, intrigue is right!! thanks for the great update!
Author's Response: You're welcome.
Date: 09/20/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 29
OMG I NEED MORE BILL/TOM ACTION lolz :P
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. It has been a long time hasn't it? Maybe I'll put some Bill/self in, but that's the best I can do. It's going to be at least a few more chapters before Bill gets with Tom again.
Date: 09/19/10 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 29
I love the addition of Micah. Win.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. Thanks.
Date: 09/19/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 29
poor bill. stupid tom. ughhh. frustrating. oh, bill, don't be so hard on micah, there are a lot of people who would put their life on the line to be with you~
Author's Response: Yes it's frustrating. Please just bear with me. Glad you didn't hate Micah (I was worried some people would)Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/19/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 29
well as long as they do.. i guess i just have to sit back and wait for it to happen then
Author's Response: Oh yeah, they definately will.
Date: 09/19/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 12
:( oh tomi. i trusted you.
Author's Response: Sad huh?
Date: 09/19/10 02:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Ah! NOT LAFEE! :( I don't know what that actually means but it sounds horrible! NOOOOOOOO!
Author's Response: Well Lafee's a person and 'no rules' is a bad thing.
Date: 09/18/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm anticipating maybe Tom finding Bill and Micah and freaking out. Which could lead to many results. Bill having his good(ish) name tarnished by a possible relationship with the guard. Bill giving in to the guard. I think I'm listing my ideas in reverse. :. Oh well. :D
Author's Response: Good ideas, we'll see...
Date: 09/18/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I vote for Jealous Tom!!
Author's Response: You think? Maybe I can work a little of that in.
Date: 09/18/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 29
I can easily see this ending VEERRY badly... -sits patiently and waits for next chapter- :3
Author's Response: Well thanks for being patient. What bad things are you anticipating?
Date: 09/18/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 29
I'm happy that Bill cut that off before it even started to grow :D Wouldn't want him sent back to the crazy lady in the torture chambers XD
Author's Response: Well that probably wouldn't happen. Micah would be punished automatically by the authority of others, but the only one with the power to punish Bill in a case like that would be Tom,and (trust me) he would never send anyone to Lafee.
Date: 09/18/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 29
ohhhhh, poor Bill. He can't have Tom and he can't have anyone else. :( Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah, it sucks. If he were less caring about other people's safety he could be with someone, but he's not, so he can't.
Date: 09/12/10 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 28
ooh i wonder what aaron did that was so bad, and why jorg doesnt seem to care but everyone else does. i love your writing and i cant wait for your next update! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I can't tell about Aaron yet, but even if you have a guess, it's probably more complicated than you think.
Date: 09/12/10 05:13 am Title: Chapter 28
ooooh, come now, tom. what will it hurt to see bill? you have to want to...what did aaron do...and what is he going to do next. he worries me. i feel a bit frightened for bill. psh bitch stealin his money?!
Author's Response: Thanks for all your thoughts.
Date: 09/12/10 02:32 am Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for the lengthy update! I'm still very curious about Aaron and looking forward to learning more.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was the longest chapter yet, but I'm going to try and post longer ones now, since I won't be posting very often (no more five chapter sprees). I also just want to finish this. It's been going on forever and I don't want to end up with over fifty chapters. Thanks for the review.
Date: 09/11/10 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 28
I can't wait for his new wardrobe!
Author's Response: Yeah, me too. I always wish I could go on and on in much greater detail about Bill's clothes, but it would be excessive and weird I think. Plot's the most important thing.