Date: 10/03/10 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 33
ITS PERFECTLY FINE! :D :D :D
Now an update please? :3
Author's Response: I'll probably be able to get another one in before the end of the week (when I normally post now). Glad you liked.
Date: 10/03/10 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 33
It was long, yes, but not too long. It was detailed in a becoming way.
And actually I thought the forgiving scene was incredibly well written. It didn't feel like surrender, felt like finding unknown forgiveness in yourself when you love someone.
Author's Response: Good to hear you think so. And "detailed in a becoming way" was a great thing for you to say, becuase even though I love writing hot, heavy sex, I always feel a little guilty and inapproriate using vivid descriptions and words like "cock" in a story that's supposed to be a romance.rnrnOh my gosh, the stuff you said about the forgiving scene was SO PERFECT! I totally wanted you to perceive it as forgiveness but was terrified it would just look like surrender and make Bill seem weak and shallow. I feel a lot better about it now. Thanks.
Date: 10/03/10 11:52 am Title: Chapter 33
Too long? God no! After everything they've gone through over last god-knows-how-many-chapters I think both them AND we needed exactly that ;) My god woman, you never stop being amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, this chapter was planned out to be much longer and with way more plot points in it, but I got off track and figured, wtf, my readers will leave me if I don't give them some serious T/B loving soon. And hey guess what, there's going to be even MORE in the next chapter.
Date: 10/03/10 11:33 am Title: Chapter 33
the blow job was a bit long, but I liked it still :)
and yes, bill should have taken longer to accept tom.
Author's Response: Damn. Well I kind of agree with you, but I want to finish this story and to be honest am grwing a little sick of it. You haven't seen the whole thing yet, But I've known the ending since the beginning, so yeah, I want it over. Other plot bunnies are a'jumpin. Thanks for telling me what you really thought. Most people don't.
Date: 10/03/10 09:52 am Title: Chapter 33
This chapter was worth waiting for-thank you for the great update. I am loving the dialog and how their relationship is starting over-hopefully it will only get stronger, but i'm afraid a few people don't want that to happen.
Author's Response: Specific comments, woot! I love dialogue, so I try to write good dialogue. I'm also encoraged that you didn't think their relationship is back on track too quickly. And you're right about the "few people," but which ones? You may end up being surprised.
Date: 10/03/10 09:20 am Title: Chapter 33
Mmh... Bill could have been difficult. Could have been to hurt to want Tom back immediately. But I think this way isn't wrong, Bill just wants to be loved so badly, by Tom ofcourse, and Tom gave a good explanation. So I think it's okay he took him back kind of fast. It's true love, if Bill had left Tom, to think about it, it just would have been more drama... I just wanted them together again
Author's Response: Exactly, I think everyone was getting sick of the uber-angst and just wanted some progress and love (not to mention sex) back in the story. Glad it didn't seem irrevocably rushed in your mind.
Date: 09/28/10 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 32
Whew, I actually thought Tom was gonna die then!
D: And now we finally know what Aaron did! I hate him even more than before. I really hope he get's what he deserves. Tom didn't deserve what Aaron did to him :(
And ooooh, nice cliffie you left us with there ;)
Author's Response: Good! What's the point in writing something like that if people don't worry?rnrnI expect everyone to hate Aaron, but his main purpose in this story was to make things difficult for Bill. Glad you liked it!
Date: 09/28/10 06:34 am Title: Chapter 32
Arrrrrrr a cliffie! You tease! XD
Author's Response: Yeah, I threw that in there. But at least I don't do it very often.
Date: 09/28/10 05:46 am Title: Chapter 32
yay! The truth comes out! How are you going to wrap this all up so soon. With the new guards, and Bill and Tom...I look forward to seeing what you do!
Author's Response: At this point, I've got three more chapters planned, plus an epilogue. Hopefully I'll be able to stick to the plan.
Date: 09/28/10 03:47 am Title: Chapter 32
Very good story!!!I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 09/28/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 32
-Marry me Bill
- Yes Tom
;D
Author's Response: Do you seriously think that's what Tom's going to say? Haha. But that's part of the problem isn't it?
Date: 09/27/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 32
omg yay a update so fast i love it. not at all a bad chapter. omg update soon again please. ill give u a cookie and another review :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. There won't be an update till this next weekend.
Date: 09/27/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 32
Holy crap!
Author's Response: Have any thoughts or comments to go along with that?
Date: 09/27/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 32
oooh plz moreeeeee
Author's Response: Maybe I should hold out, would that make you leave better reviews?
Date: 09/27/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 32
Man this is good. I'm always wondering about Bills family that he left behind. What happened to them?
Author's Response: Well they're still living the pesant life. I'm sure they got real sad (his mom at least), and think he's dead by now. Bill still misses his mom sometimes, but he's had a year to get over it. Plus I don't mention it much because the focus is on Bill's life in the harem.
Date: 09/27/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 32
gos se is crap in chinese, isnt it? tho im not sure...oh my! what a cliff hanger. i loved that bill opened himself up to tom at the end, and that he would be damaged from that final rejection, if it came...sweet and sad and hopeful. cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: That makes sense, since I stole it from the show Firefly. Maybe it means dog shit?rnrnGlad you understood what I was trying to convey about Bill's emotions and psyche. SUPER glad to hear that you found it sad and sweet. Maybe I don't hate this chapter as much anymore. Thanks for your thoughts.
Date: 09/27/10 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 32
OMG *_* i'm speachless i love it you're the best i love the chapter ...but what is it that tom is going to say??...hmmm
Author's Response: I don't know... Glad you liked the chapter. I didn't.
Date: 09/27/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 32
*slaps you in a friendly way* how dare you give me a heart thumper! i thought you were going to kill off Tom! i LOVE this story!
Author's Response: Kill Tom! Oh that would ruin the story. But glad I could at least make you sweat a little. Thanks!
Date: 09/27/10 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh my god. Such delicious drama.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 09/26/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 31
OMG! You've got me hanging there in suspense! I love your story and you have a way of crafting your story that is bewitching. Please, please update. I love the theme of the orient with the harems. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chappie. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Bewitching? Awesome!