Date: 10/09/10 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 34
PS: Lol oops, and you wrote 'still-writing boy' when it should be 'still writhing boy'.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, I destest typos and hate to think that even one person had to read the story with that mistake in it.
Date: 10/09/10 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 34
DAMN, woman! This was a long chapter! :DDD
Ah, I feel so cathartic. Immensely beautiful lovemaking.
Lol, is Aaron still going to be a problem, or has his potency to make trouble gone?
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. And as for Aaron, I wouldn't write him off just yet...
Date: 10/09/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 34
*drools* ughhh...so hot, and fluffy, thats a pretty touch combo to pull off, I'm impressed. Somehow I get the feeling Tom is going to be detained from Bill through no fault of his own, and I'm betting it has something to do with Ex...You know on another note I find it really hard tobelieve Jorg would put up with the en doing that in the Harem, I mean yea sure he treats them all like shit but...they're HIS bitches to treat like that...you know what I mean?...abusive jackasses tend to be POSSESSIVE abusive jackasses...unless were talking about a pimp but we arent are we?...can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: That's a good point you're making about Jorg. But I can't really change it now becuase I need Salim and those guys to be there, so just pretend it issn't a plot hole mkay? rnrnYeah, smut and fluff are a hard mix to do. I just tried to avoid the more vivd physical descriptions, as well as too many uses of the word cock.
Date: 10/09/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 34
That was so sweet and so very hot *_* It probably wasn't such a good idea to read right in front of my grandma, but I couldn't wait ;) (I just had to stop a few times to make sure I kept my drool INSIDE my mouth). Haha, I loved it!
And yay for long chapters!!! :)
Author's Response: Wow, I seriously don't think I caould read smutty fanfic in front of my grandma. You're a determined reader.rnrnGlad you like it and the length didn't bother you. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/09/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 34
OH I'm so happy for those two, adorable ones! *-* Finally!
Author's Response: Yes, finally the "I love yous" came out. And this time they mean everything they say.
Date: 10/09/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my.....That sex scene was so intimate, so hot that even I began to sweat. Which isn't exactly good to do while at work ;o) *wipes brow* whooooo....can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you said intimate AND hot. I was going for both. Obviously intimate was more important, but I didn't want it to be so sappy that I got eye rolls. I almost didn't put in the part where Bill's crying because I thought it might be too much. So glad you liked it.
Date: 10/09/10 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd say, do whatever you like. It's your story.
Maybe it'd be a bit more clear if you did so, but I get it now. Thanx!
Author's Response: No problem.
Date: 10/09/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 34
Um, in the chapter notes you say Bill's been in the harem 5 days longer than in the previous chapter, but in the fourth paragraph, you say 'Two weeks passed by...'
Is this a typo or am I missing something?
Author's Response: The note at the beginning is VERY LITERAL. Meaning that if the first thing the chapter says is "two weeks later," then you are addding two weeks onto whatever it says in the chapter notes. rnrnThat is kind of confusing. Do you think I should put the time he's been there in the end chapter notes from now on?
Date: 10/09/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 34
You have know idea how much I love long chapters. The sex scene was so intimate and well-written. :)
Author's Response: Well that's nice to hear. I was a little worried though. 9000 words is pretty f***ing long. And intimate is definately what I was going for there, so I'm glad that you thought so.
Date: 10/09/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 34
awwwwwwww....amazinggggnesssss :PPP plz more soon
Author's Response: Updates next weekend.
Date: 10/08/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter 33
updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate!!! i'm quite excited for Tom to get better.
Author's Response: I will!rnrnDon't worry, he will.
Date: 10/05/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 33
wow...really good fic this is. I think if it were written any differently I would think Billtook himback too quickly, but you wrote it so well it worked you know what i mean? great so far i can't wait to see this wrapped up!
Author's Response: Oh yay! That's so nice of you to say. Thanks!
Date: 10/05/10 02:38 am Title: Chapter 33
i loved it, the blow job was perfect, and no, they got together in fine time. i love you!
Author's Response: Great, Thanks!
Date: 10/04/10 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 33
YES! Oh, I'm so happy. No, it was not too long. I think Bill understands. Right now their man struggles lie in these personal attacks, in my opinion. I think them spurring on their return to each other and a new set of problems is believable.
Author's Response: Good to hear. If Tom hadn't been like, delusionalally confessing love on his deathbed, they never would have gotten back together. So happy that you think it's believable. I was worried about that.
Date: 10/04/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 33
Too long? Are you kidding? Neither Bill nor Tom have gotten any in awhile, so they'd sure as hell better make it last awhile! And in regards to Bill taking Tom back, hmm... no, if he waits too long, he might start to sound bratty. It's not like he was instantly like "oh yes of course I love you so much Tom!" anyways. I think the way you did it works. Also, I give you permission to get distracted at least 3 more times before you end this. ;)
Author's Response: Oh yay I'm glad you thought that! May I point out though that Tom still had Deena and Mahtob, while poor Bill was the only one not getting any (and he still hasn't, really). rnrnSo happy that you think the whole forgiveness thing wasn't too fast and that it worked. I thought that if I almost killed Tom it might help Bill forgive him a little faster.rnrnHaha, yeah well there will be more distractions. At least...two?
Date: 10/04/10 02:44 am Title: Chapter 33
I think this was all just perfect. =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/03/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
it's your fic, you do whatever you want :)
Author's Response: Ok, thanks I will.
Date: 10/03/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 33
aww so cute :P
Author's Response: Cute? Ok, thanks.
Date: 10/03/10 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 33
to your questions, no, and no. :) it was lovely and if that's you distracted, you can be distracted as long as you like.
Author's Response: Hahs, thanks. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/03/10 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 33
omg i love it!
Author's Response: Ok thanks.