Date: 10/12/10 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 34
That was crazy amazing and packed! I kept thinking it would end but it just kept going in the best ways possible. Damn!
Author's Response: Well at least you stayed interested and didn't get bored. One reader actually told me she got bored! Thanks for your review.
Date: 10/12/10 11:52 am Title: Chapter 34
;D;D;D;D;D
Pr0nz!
And also smutt.
And awesomeness!
Yay.
Author's Response: :)
Date: 10/11/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 34
First: My apologies for not reviewing every chapter. I wanted to catch up, and I was fully absorbed in the story the entire time. I only took a break because I had to go to class.
This story is really amazing. You've created characters with real personalities and lives and placed them into a believable realm. They're dealing with the conflicts they meet as real people would - making mistakes, falling apart, coming back together. It's really beautiful, what you've done with this story.
And intrigue upon intrigue! You're giving out information at just the right pace - not so much that I know exactly what's going on and have no reason to keep reading, but not so little that I'm frustrated and feel like you're holding back from telling me what I need to know to understand the story.
I am very much looking forward to reading the rest!
Author's Response: Oh squee! This is the best reveiw in a long time. Some of the best thngs in thi story were not planned out. Deena and Mahtob were origionally ust filler OFCs, but then I developed two distinct personalities for them. Most of the characters didn't exist when I began writing this. They just pop into existence when I need them. And other things in this "world" were randomly thought up, such as thier religion and Foularr.rnrnI'm so excited to hear that you think the intrigue is properly paced. My greatest wish is to lead many readers down one path, where they're so sure of what the big mystery's going to be, and then surprise them at the end.rnrnReviews like this really are the best. Thank you for being so thoughtful and telling me all your opinions!
Date: 10/11/10 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 34
wow the love-chrysalis analogy was gorgeous. i also loved bill's thoughts of his man'ness being threatened by the presence of other males...thinking about what should have been but never will be~ooh, and the lovely description of the sensation of being filled~besides all that, and the breathtaking lovemaking, it was just a gorgeous chapter in general. thanks so much
Author's Response: Well you know what I love? People who tell me the specific details they like! No one else mentioned the stuff you did and it tickled me to read your review. I was wondering if the chrysalis analogy wuld be weird, so I'm glad you didn' find it so.
Date: 10/11/10 06:53 am Title: Chapter 34
OMG-I don't know what to say other than what an amazing, beautiful, and well worth the wait chapter! I have to read it again...and again...great job-thank you!
Author's Response: You're welcome. Glad you liked it and thanks for your review.
Date: 10/10/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 34
LOOOOOOOOOOL I don't mind the long chapters..XDD I'm glad that they're loooooooooong hahahaha...XD
I'm glad for Bill and Tom. Except that it still worries me about the 'enemies' they have around. Scary..O__O
Author's Response: Yeah, that is a concern...rnrnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/10/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
of course I won't stop reading it, even if sometimes i don't like a thing or other you still got a great fic, very original! and I also take into consideration the fact that you take what I say as constructive and not the opposite.
maybe it's just me who feels this way, maybe it's my problem, not yours. I don't know :
Author's Response: :) I like the comments you make. Everyone else just goes "ooh drool." You're not mean in your feedback, just honest, and I appreciate that.
Date: 10/10/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know, I know. I started reading it but it was going so slow (although that was the intention) it just made me lost the interess and the patient to read it :|
Author's Response: Oh my gosh that's so horrible. Sorry it had that effect for you, that certainly wasn't what I wanted :( Hopefully other people don't feel the same way, and hopefully you'll keep reading future chapters.
Date: 10/10/10 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 34
Well, while you worked hard on making this part amazing, I will work on making my review amazing.
Guh... but you're making it quite hard, you know, writhing THAT and expecting me to say something while you left me utterly speechless.
I was just love. You could feel it, you could see it, hell you could even smell and taste it. You have this talent to just suck your readers into your story, we almost fall back next to our computers/laptops, thinking "HUH? where am I?". It's that realistic and compelling. (I hope my translate-thing failed me at that word)
[quote]Swaying them the barest amount, eyes closed, Tom whispered, “I love you.”[/quote]
Almost made me cry =)
xx
Author's Response: Agch! Thank you for that lovely, thoughtful review. I love it when people actually point out the things that they liked.rnrn*does happy dance* ~"I'm taaal-en-ted, I'm taaal-en-ted!"
Date: 10/10/10 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 34
I love you too ;)
awesome chapter! its so sweet and loving and long and wonderful and and ahhhhh *melts into gooey puddle*
love it to bits! *scrolls back to the top to read it again*
Author's Response: *mops up gooey puddle* ~"where did that come from?"rnrnI'm so tickled to hear people are going over it to reread again.
Date: 10/10/10 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 34
The I love you's were so sweet and romantic and I loved how this time they were actually making love and not just fucking like last time.
Author's Response: Exactly! That's what I was trying to make clear in chapter 22, that they were not making love that time. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/10/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 34
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH my god this was an amazing chapter... an amazing sex scene i just loved it... you are an amazing writer... god i have no words strong enough to discribe how much i loved this chapter... i'm gonna read it again... LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/10/10 11:36 am Title: Chapter 34
I couldn't read the sex scene, was too long :X
the party was a bit too descriptive too. other than that the chapter was good :)
Author's Response: You didn't read the sex scene? That was a big part of the chapter.rn
Date: 10/10/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 34
love love love it! and you, because you are writing this!
Author's Response: Oh, well thanks bunches for reading it, and you're welcome!
Date: 10/10/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 34
This is very goood!!! love,love, love!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/10/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 34
Oh wow, I'm blown away at how seriously perfect this chapter was! I fell in love with it all over again a few times over. You did an extremely heavenly job on this, I love it~
Author's Response: Squee! *perfect* *heavenly* Squee!rnrnThank you for the nice comments.
Date: 10/10/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 34
omg im really tired cause its late but damn this was a amazing update and i love how long it was. u get 100 for today. goood job
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!
Date: 10/10/10 02:12 am Title: Chapter 34
By 'mathimatical logic', I was refering to the chapter ends note :0D (9,000 words + sex = loads of amazing reviews!)
Author's Response: Oh, ha yeah.
Date: 10/09/10 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 34
that was an amazingly great chapter!! I just adore how sweet Tom is with Bill. I am so glad things are better. And I love that Tom taught Bill how to use his knives. I'm not sure if I hope he needs to use those skills or not. =)
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the specifics of what you liked.
Date: 10/09/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 34
Well, Since I can't argue with your mathematical logic...
YAY! Can you say sweetest sex ever?!? I will admit I might have teared up a little during it. This chapter has made my day, and I can't wait for the next update. This is definitely one of my top favorite stories. You rock.
Love,
RazorSoftLie
Author's Response: Oh so flattering! I'm so happy that you found it to be sweet. And tearing up, really? That's something I did not expect but is great to hear. I'm grinning because you said this was one of your top faves. rnrnWhat do you mean, you can't argue with my mathematical logic?rnThanks,rnSarah