omg its ending T.T this was the best fic i ave ever read it was soo awsome everday i would look forward for an update and it would make my day it was awsome keep up the awsoomme work

Author's Response: This short review made me squee where longer ones have not. If you really meant what you said and this is truely the best fic you've ever read, well then I am touched. Really, I'd be touched if you even said it was in your top ten. Thank you for your kind words.

its the end already? D:
this feels so soon, but I guess it has to happen :(
honey, I absolutely love this story. its so beautifully written, and its intriguing, heartbreaking, heartwarming, and fascinating! I can hardly list down my favourite bits from the story, because there's too many! ok probably two that tops my list will be Bill's heartbreak at Tom's rejection, and Tom telling Bill that he loves him. I swear my heart clenched and I was on the edge of tears when reading both scenes *sniffles* :(
you're a great writer, and I look forward to more Bill/Tom adventures! :3

*btw is it mean of me to say I kinda rejoiced a little that Deena died in the story? :x cause I can't stand poor Bill being so upset after catching Tom with her so I was kinda like 'yeaaahhhhh one less for Tom, more love for Bill!' :p

loves! :)

Author's Response: There have been great fics that I've felt ended too soon, like Analyzed by Froggy. I hope you mean you just want it to go on forever, and not that the ending was written as too abrupt (remember there is an epilogue coming).rnrnI always like to hear that I can evoke strong emotions from readers, mainly because it takes a really good fic to evoke motions from me, so I guess I assume the same about other people? Thanks for all your sweet compliments!rnrnDeena only died because what she and Bill wanted from Tom would have ended up being irreconcilable. You're not supposed to hate her, but if you don't feel sad over her death I certainly understand why.rnrn

omg what a good last chapter it pulled together so well. maybe u could somehow like bill see his family again let them know his alive. please thats what i have been waiting for. ok anyway im sad this story is over. it was so good

Author's Response: I'm actally glad to hear everyone feels sad, it means they were attached! And yay that you feel like it was pulled together well. And for all the things you're still wandering about.. read the epilogue.

yeah killing the too of them would have been a bit too obvious.

you did good, very clever. she was indeed too much competition/trouble :P

still, it's sad to see bill sharing tom :( poor monogamous and jealous bill

wow...this fic was good. I mean I knew Hessa would be involved, but I thought Aaron would be too, but he wasn't, that was a bit of a shocker for me because I'm normally uncannily accurate on these things...this whole fic was so great from the very beginning it pulled me in so fast its almost scary...one thing though, Tom had Deena before Mahtob, and I was under the impression that it took Mahtob a LONG time to get comfortable with sex, but she had been comfortable for some time before Bill got there, yet you just said Deena had only been there a year before Bill...I dunno...maybe its just Harem time...I guess it wouldnt have mattered if Deena played dumb though...not with the Coup happening that night anyway, oh and thats what I meant, I didnt mean Deena WAS dumb I justt thought she should've played dumb, you know, "I didnt hear anything I was just running after my cat" kinda thing...Poor Deena she was nice I liked her. I cant wait to see how you wrap this baby up.

Author's Response: I'm so glad I could surprise you with who the villains were. I knew you'd probably figure out Hessa though.

Deena proabably did try and play dumb, but she was too big a risk. They couldn't let her go! Oh, and she was nice, but not as sweet as Mahtob, if you noticed. Also, she was much more pushy and a bit more shallow/materialistic.

"she was yours. But then a year later you were completely wrapped up in that boy. Shameless.” “And now you have this one, the same as the first.” --OK let me explain this: Tom got Deena when he was sixteen, a year later, when he was seventeen, he was wrapped up in Aaron, aka "that boy." Tom got Mahtob when he was Bill when he was 23. I hope that clears things up. Do you think this part confused a lot of readers?

Thanks for the great review!rn

This is fucking brilliant. I was blown away. It was perfectly dramatic, fluffy, sexy and the action was awesome. I loved it.

Author's Response: Ooh I'm glad! Thank you.

WOW! Though I would have sent Hessa and those traitors to Lafee! :D

Author's Response: Tom's not that mean to anyone. Jorg was sick, vindictive, and cruel, so LaFee was his tool, not Tom's. Besides, both Bill and Tom have been tortured by her. Death is suitable punishment.

this was somewhat unexpected, very good!

I look foward to read the epilogue :)

Heh. Hard to miss that foreshadowing if you're paying attention... "A spreading puddle of blood..." Yeah.

And Deena's just gotten herself into trouble. I hope that foreshadowing refers to her captors and not to her. I kinda like Deena.

And I'm not really complaining that they don't close their doors. This story wouldn't be half as interesting if they did. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, not very subtle I guess.rnrnI'm glad you like Deena. I tend to hate most OFCs.

omg omg omg noooo!!!! bad bad things happening :o

Author's Response: Yes, that's true.