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Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/09 12:54 pm Title: Secret

Yay for Bill telling Tom...but it seemed like it didn't faze him, like he isn't going through an identity crisis or anything.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean. I think it'll make a little more sense in the next chapter.rnThank you for you honesty!

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/09 09:42 pm Title: Secret

hah andreas is a HATER! lolz. if i could react that quickly to that kind of situation i would have responded the same way =P

anywayyyy great chapter! update?

(p.s. the end of chapter six was all italic)

Author's Response: Update soon I think... Tom controlling a pageant is hard to write! LolrnAnd THANK YOU SO MUCH for telling me that!!

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/09 08:25 pm Title: Secret

i think tom was lil too accepting of bill's secret. like he just rushes to say "i love you" too fast. but overall, it think it was great :). and ooooo, tom controls a beauty pagent? how would that turn out? me curious O___O

Author's Response: That's what I was thinking. Thank you for being honest!

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/09 07:39 pm Title: Your Mom

interesting....

Author's Response: Indeed...

Reviewer: ellakaulitzlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 10:47 am Title: Your Mom

What's going to happen...?
DOES TOM KNOW?!?!?! :p

Author's Response: I honestly don't know if Tom knows yet...rnThank you!

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 05:33 am Title: Your Mom

I'm really liking this story! They both have secrets from one another, can't wait to see wha happens next!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Neither can I! XD

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 04:06 am Title: Your Mom

xD that Geico part really got me to laugh itwas funny, 

Author's Response: I was hoping someone would think it's funny, so thank you!

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 07:03 pm Title: Plastic and Air

interesting... me likey!

Author's Response: Why, thank you!

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 09:25 am Title: Plastic and Air

This is a fresh look at them... I like it! I hope Tom doesn't freak out when Bill tells him! If Bill tells him... Argh, please update soon. :) *tracked

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 03:11 am Title: Plastic and Air

eh, im itchy about the bill/andreas thing, but if u feel it will make the story exciting, then go for it. just make sure there're more tom/bill time though =^.^=. and ooooooo bill almost told tom!!! omg!!!

the chapter is awesome!!!!

Author's Response: I am too, but things will for sure be more exciting!rnThank you!!

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 03:00 am Title: Plastic and Air

I LOVE YOU. Damn, if it wasn't three AM, I'd write an EPIC review.

Meh. I'll do it later. I will.

:) GREAT chapter! (And the nickname. Haha!)

Author's Response: -dies- I love you too! Thank you, thank you, thank you so much!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 10:10 pm Title: Waltz Please

ooh thatz awesome..how old is she??? update sooon plz thx=]

Author's Response: Marion? Some where around 70 I think...rnThank you!!

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 02:14 pm Title: Waltz Please

oh my.....I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
you should DEFINITELY keep updating it. i would love that!!!

update!

Author's Response: You love it?! -dies- That is amazing!!rnI'll try my hardest to get a chpater out!

Reviewer: Misa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 03:46 am Title: Waltz Please

I believe this story is not getting the attention it deserves.
It's simple, but cute.
Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Woah, really? That means a lot to me.rnThank you so much!

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 12:54 am Title: Waltz Please

ummmm, bill should wear " Bunny ears. Fishnets. Topless. Lacy panties". lol. the chapter wasn't too bad. and ur story could go without many descriptions, cuz ur dialogue are really descriptive and sets the tone.

Author's Response: I'm trying to think of how to fit that into the story, actually.rnThat really helped! I didn't think about it like that...

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/09 12:25 am Title: Waltz Please

cool!

update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks!rnI'll try!

Reviewer: BillsFreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/09 08:57 pm Title: A Tall Building! And a Boat!

I think it's a shame you wrote you weren't sure about this (or the thing you wrote in the summary). I think it's a nice twist to the cross-dressing issue (if you can call it that). So at least I don't think you should quit it :)



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not gonna quit. I just need some time to really think about this story.

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/09 09:45 pm Title: A Tall Building! And a Boat!

is it a ship or a yacht o__o? cuz it looked amazing and shiplike XD. anyways, im anticipating the moment when tom figure out andrea is actually bill, a boy. hahahhahahahaha. update soon!!!

Author's Response: Um... When I went to photobucket I typed in 'yacht' so I'm guessing it's a yacht... Just make it whatever you want!rnI've been debating when to do that, and I don't want to drag this out to long so... I guess we'll see!rnThank you!

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/09 07:10 pm Title: A Tall Building! And a Boat!

aw I love it! update soon!

Author's Response: Gosh, that was quick! Thank you!rnI've already got 316 words of the next chapter!

Reviewer: BabyPlease Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 07:09 pm Title: Water Bra

more please!
i love it!

Author's Response: I'm actually working on the third one right now! Thank you!!

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