Date: 10/20/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
O.o ... Okay, now that was THe weirdest story I've ever read. But in a good way, of course ^^ however, can you please tell me what was the Tomtom thing Bill was talking to? And what was actually happening? :/ Anyway, congrats for making a story that got me to read it at least eleven times and still be totally confused ^^
Author's Response: Haha, okay, well I guess it wouldn't make sense to most people. I should have thought about that haha. TomTom is a GPS system. It's a little machine that gives you directions. There is a brand in the US called TomTom. In the commercial people are always saying "TomTom, do this." And so in the story, Bill is arguing with a TomTom, and so the TomTom tells Bill that they must take a turn that doesn't exist so they get in a car accident. I hope that helps.
Date: 06/13/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's funny how it ended... Quite sad.. But funny!
Date: 05/30/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
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I think I just died a little bit *plop*
Date: 02/27/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
*gasp*NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Date: 02/16/09 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahahha ... well... that was interesting o_o...
XDD thank you for writing. I enjoyed reading it. :)
Author's Response: No problem. I love writing and normally I write better than that, but it was a different kind of story. Not my usual.
Date: 02/16/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wtf.......... erm, love ya...
Author's Response: I told you it was weird.
Date: 02/16/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
goodness, I adored it (:
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought I'd try my hand at something short and not so sweet.
Date: 02/16/09 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMAO I LOVE IT AND YOU!
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU TOO HOR. rnrnHAI
Date: 02/16/09 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was really good even tho i didnt get half of it XD
At the start i thought Bill was screwing some chick in the backseat or something but no :)
what was the small object that Bill was holding?
Author's Response: Bill was holding the TomTom the whole time, trying to fix it.
Date: 02/16/09 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god you're evil! But this made me laugh though!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know I am evil. I had the idea when something similar minus the death happened haha