Date: 09/29/11 01:45 pm Title: The Things We Want
awwwwwwwwww. i`m ashamed to admit that that`s all i got. but i mean... awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww))
wait, no, one more thing. this part-
Georg would produce some sort of taunt or jeer, intended to rile his competitor, to which the drummer would only respond with a short grunt of, “gonna beat you,” or, “gonna win.” -
was kinda really hilarious. and also endearing. unflinching determination in the face of defeat. it`s so gustav-y. and again with the awwww) also it provided much needed comic relief, coz if i had to use only 1 word to describe these series, it would be INTENSE.
Author's Response: Intense. Hm, good word. I like it. Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for sending a review my way!
Date: 05/14/11 10:47 am Title: The Things We Want
u should add more to this!
Author's Response: Probably. But it's so old I don't even really care for it much anymore. Glad you enjoyed it though, Thanks!rn
Date: 10/19/10 01:40 am Title: The Things We Want
ooh likey
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 10/09/10 10:48 pm Title: The Things We Want
Just want you to know that I've read this whole series and love it.
Also, the banner of this one and for 'Make It Good' are bigger than the normal size. Unless you did that on purpose.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading them all, it's nice to hear that someone's actually done that.rnrnYeah I know about the banners. It's not on purpose, but I'm too lazy to go back and fix them unless the mods force me to.rn
Date: 05/07/10 05:20 pm Title: The Things We Want
I really like how Bill is the more dominant one. Usually it's Tom, but I love the switch!
Author's Response: I know right? It's fun to imagine how bossy and dominant Bill could be. And it just seems like that's how would be if he were a vampire.
Date: 03/23/10 10:18 am Title: The Things We Want
continue the story!!!its really good..like it a lot
Author's Response: It's just a one shot. Glad you liked it.
Date: 03/09/10 07:09 pm Title: The Things We Want
omg!!! this oneshot was awesome. XD
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/10/09 04:25 am Title: The Things We Want
;-; This one was really sad. Poor Tom.
Why was Bill being so mean to him?!
I guess it's Tom's fault a little for not just admitting it, but Bill didn't have to hurt him. :[
It was a very well written fic anyway. :]
Great job.
Author's Response: It was mean for Bill to bite him like that wasn't it? I guess he was just really hungry. This was basically just showing that things had been tense between the twins for awhile, coming to a head in this story. Thanks for your review!
Date: 10/30/09 01:16 pm Title: The Things We Want
Awh it's very sweet! I really enjoyed the tension. I'm very impressed each one of these Vampire!Bill's is different from the other ones. I like the angst in this one. The level of conflict within Tom. Lovely I'm really impressed with the omni presence but still being able to convey inner thoughts. *grins* well done.
Oh and Samy only has one "m" in it.
Author's Response: Thanks for all of your insightful comments. I really enjoyed them. The differences in the vampire Bills is why it's a series and not a story. I felt the character was too inconsistent. Thanks for the tip on Samy's name (that spelling bothers me).
Date: 05/05/09 11:15 pm Title: The Things We Want
Oh wow, that was a little heartbreaking to read. I don't like to see anyone have a break down, but you did write it gracefully.
And you write really well. I guess it's really your word choice that makes your stuff stand out to me, words like "radiate," "lingering," and "choked" give a little extra something to an already otherwise great story and the overall effect is nice to read.
Great job. :]
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're so nice. And it's great how you said what you liked best.
Date: 04/30/09 11:59 pm Title: The Things We Want
Ooh, I can't wait to read more. More please!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. This is just a one shot, but it's part of a series called "pomme de sang," if you want to read more.
Date: 03/12/09 10:41 am Title: The Things We Want
needs more! but is really good as is
Author's Response: Danke.
Date: 02/23/09 03:24 pm Title: The Things We Want
When are you going to update soon?
Author's Response: These are all just one shots for my "pomme de sang" series. I specifically changed it to a series because I'm shit for updating. But I've got two new ones out: possessive, and laying claim part one.
Date: 02/19/09 04:08 pm Title: The Things We Want
Aww poor Tomi *doesn't really think so cuz Billa is so... Meoww in that story of yours* I just loved the end so much! ;)
A good one again! Thx u!
Author's Response: Yes, Bill is a sexy beast. Tom can just deal with it.
Date: 02/15/09 11:06 pm Title: The Things We Want
I like Bill as a vampire. This is good.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's part of a series I'm writing.
Date: 02/15/09 09:41 pm Title: The Things We Want
Yeees! I've been waiting for the third chapter for some time... but I'm happy as well for the one shots... gonna love it the same way... XD
Author's Response: Well.... this is nothing new. I just reposted it as an individual story so I could put it into a series.
Date: 02/15/09 09:13 pm Title: The Things We Want
one of my favorite stories!!! soooo veeeery much awesome! XD
Author's Response: Really? one of your favs?! I'm so glad.
Date: 02/15/09 07:56 pm Title: The Things We Want
I am SO glad you decided to add to this series! I don't read many twin vampire fics, but this one is really different. I love that Tom doesn't want to be attracted to Bill, but can't help it.
This part was my favorite, I think: “You wish you didn’t want it.” Bill inhaled his brother’s scent and listened to his heartbeat; it had risen dramatically in the last few seconds. He kissed Tom’s temple and felt him shiver. “You wish you didn’t want things that make you so embarrassed.” This story is so different and sexy. I hope you continue to add to it. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad it stands out. Thank you!
Date: 02/15/09 05:41 pm Title: The Things We Want
more more more ! bitte!
Author's Response: This was origionally ch. 2 in a story, but after like, three MONTHS of no updating, I decided that it had to part of a series: Pomme De Sang. Thanks for the review!