Date: 01/09/10 11:57 pm Title: Hospitalized
I will SO be waiting for an upate on this!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/11/09 07:18 pm Title: Hospitalized
oh no!! what a cliffie, hope you get back to updating soon. :)
Date: 04/12/09 07:29 am Title: Hospitalized
Don't go mad people I'll update when I think of something.
Date: 02/18/09 10:43 pm Title: Hospitalized
:O omg omg noo he doesnt remember who Bill is!!! thats horrid.
Cant wait for more!
Date: 02/18/09 07:26 pm Title: Hospitalized
Oh no! He's forgotten his twin brother?! That's terrible!
Date: 02/18/09 07:07 pm Title: Hospitalized
HE LOST HIS MEMORY? WHAT? noooooooooo
Dont do this to Billa! But good job with the writing! Cant wait for more! I hope they will loooooooooove
Date: 02/18/09 05:31 pm Title: Hospitalized
WHY!! Why did you left it there!!?? Are you trying to ruin me??!!
This was good! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I am not trying to ruin anyone ;]] I just adore such endings ;]] Thank you all for reading, update soon.
Date: 02/18/09 05:03 pm Title: Hospitalized
i like your story so far!!!!
but i can't believe tom lost his memory??that is just not good=(((
i hope he gets it back or something!!!
and hey i don't hink you're evil=DDD*hugs*
Date: 02/18/09 04:44 pm Title: Hospitalized
Awwwwwwwe. So sweet together. :)
Date: 02/18/09 04:37 pm Title: Hospitalized
yay for new update! um, i think its spelt disinfectants and then u missed an "e" in weakened and a "t" in tasty xP but thats sweet you made Bill so devoted to staying with Tom :) i liked that a lot!
Date: 02/18/09 04:00 pm Title: Hospitalized
NO WAY? D:
Date: 02/18/09 03:17 pm Title: Hospitalized
oh no
Author's Response: erm? that's for Tom losing him memory? Such a short review ;]]]
Date: 02/18/09 02:51 pm Title: Hospitalized
Oh my god!!!!!! *shrieks* You, missy, are evil. That is just... how could you?! Gah. Nevertheless, it's a good update. This sentence however, [...]made him nosy, doesn't really make sense. Made him nosy? Perhaps you meant dizzy? Also, it's spelled emotionless, that is, without the a you put in.
Anyway, update soon again, and you'd better give Tom is memory back!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the "a" and I meant nosy. Like before you throw up?rnrnEvil LMAO why do you people keep saying that? I'll see about the memory *laughs*
Date: 02/18/09 12:54 am Title: Too much time together!!!
OMG ur evil! but still i'll wait till u update XD
Author's Response: ME? Evil... oh why? ;[ LMAO I shall update soon I promise.
Date: 02/16/09 03:01 pm Title: Too much time together!!!
OH No!!! Please write more!! OMFG!! I just have a thing for Jealous twins!! *squeals*
but please, let Tom be ok!! *begs*
and please!! Update soon!! *begs*
Date: 02/16/09 11:08 am Title: Too much time together!!!
Yay! Jealous!Tomi! More please! :)
Date: 02/16/09 10:11 am Title: Too much time together!!!
No it doesn't suck.
To be honest, the writing isn't professional, like there's spelling mistakes 'guitar lessong from Georg','Liek not where I live'. But overall I think it's a good start.
Author's Response: Thank you all for reading! And I LOVE your comments! Melancholia, honey of course I did! I adore jealous Tomi.
Date: 02/15/09 06:50 pm Title: Too much time together!!!
OMFG!! 0__0 How did I know something bad would happen to him for being so rash.
Please be okay, please be okay, please be okay. :) I love this so far. :D
Date: 02/15/09 03:14 pm Title: Too much time together!!!
Aw, I didn't know you'd responded to this challange! Nice! Update quickly though. Glad you're back (in black). :)
Date: 02/15/09 03:00 pm Title: Too much time together!!!
I like it already! Its cute! Please continue