Date: 10/05/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...this is seriously intense. I love what you did here, how Tom doesn't actually die and then Bill does, and never really finds out if Tom was really there or not...I wrote a fic where Tom dies, but that's because Bill was really dead...I really love what you did with this, it's truly a great story. Of course I don't want either of them to die, but I love how you were able to make this so emotional.
Date: 10/05/09 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...this is seriously intense. I love what you did here, how Tom doesn't actually die and then Bill does, and never really finds out if Tom was really there or not...I wrote a fic where Tom dies, but that's because Bill was really dead...I really love what you did with this, it's truly a great story. Of course I don't want either of them to die, but I love how you were able to make this so emotional.
Author's Response: I know. It made me sad when Bill had to die... And I still haven't decided whether Tom really didn't die or not. I made it so the reader could sort of choose their own.
Date: 02/14/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so not cool, this was just miserable.
Date: 02/13/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought it was funny how Tom was all swearing and shit. It reminded me of myself, cause I would use such language in a situtation like that, and I was happy, cuz Bill had hi Tomi back....And then you killed him.... I deflated and cried.... Great story by the way. Just can you write happier stuff next time. lol
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm working on happier things at the moment. I just wrote it as it came to me, and changing everything and putting a happy ending just didn't fit...
Date: 02/13/09 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
-sits in stunned slience-
that was...amazing.
like really, I loved it.
I can't believe Bill died.
-cries-
Laurie xox
Author's Response: Yeah, I was pretty amazed at myself for killing him, too. He's my favourite.
Date: 02/13/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
btw..It made me cry too... :*(
Author's Response: Aww! It made me tear while I was writing it. I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/13/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohmeingott...
I cant believe it, this story is so sad, but I love it so much :)
Tom not loving Bill just broke my heart.. :(
But wonderful story!! xD
Date: 02/13/09 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
NOOOO>..WHAT THE FUCK? He...died.....nooo.
god i cried for this fic...it didn't help that i was playing Spring Nicht while reading...awesome job
Author's Response: Ohmigawd, you really cried!? That makes me so happy! That's probably a crappy thing to say, but that's been one of my major goals as a writer, to get the reader to cry. Thank you so much for reading! =)