Date: 10/17/09 10:14 am Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
hey please u have to upload the next capii
i really ove the fic... please do it
Author's Response: i think i have the ext chapter halfway through, so I'll try to finish it now. as in NOW. while i have an hour free
Date: 08/27/09 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1: The bits and pieces of our broken hearts.....
Write write write!
Lol what can motivate you!!!!
Author's Response: lol. hahaha i am. i've actually been working on the next chapter for this so YAY you reviewing motivated me xD
Date: 08/27/09 01:43 am Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
Once again Super Samy came to the rescue Woot!Woot! okay no pressure but what happens next hah
Author's Response: lol. hahahah. wow i'm surprised people still read this xD er, i have the next chapter half written, i just have to get motivated to write xD
Date: 08/17/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
LOVE IT! please continue!!!
Author's Response: thank you,a nd i will, eventually ^_^
Date: 07/25/09 02:40 am Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
This chapter was updated when I was gone at camp, and and and.. I MISSED THIS STORY! :D Anywho, i lalaloveeee it. Love this story.. i was like WOO, GO TOM. And then Bill came along, tsk tsk (;
Lool, beep amazing.
x
Author's Response: awwwww. i'm sorry you couldn't read it for a while. and yea. shit's happening, but HOPEFULLY i'll have an update soon. like tomorrowish xD
Date: 07/17/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
*grins* "Hey boo." lol. Bill's losing it. He's finally figured out that Tom's not his anymore. I loved this chapter. Update soon?
Author's Response: xD hush with your hating on my samyness xD and yea. bill's insane xD and yea. sometime this weekend i guess xD i have the beginning of the chapter started anyways lol
Date: 07/17/09 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
Loveit. :D
Author's Response: awww YAY. I'm glad that you love it ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 04:05 am Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
omg hhahahaha. as funny as this chapter is to me, its also kind of emotional... with tom taking charge a little bit more. ]: i hope samy doesnt break toms heart either! gahhh that'd be such a twist though! [:
Author's Response: lol. i'm glad that you could find it funny and emotional. ^_^ i always try my best to work those two elements into one single part, yanno? and yea, Tom's going to start making more changes, and we'll get to see more into his life with Samy pretty soon ^^
Date: 07/15/09 03:58 am Title: Chapter 5: Reveal, to me...
lmfao WHAT! he totally pwned bill for a moment there lol! great chapter. shows toms moving on. oh yes! [[:
Author's Response: hhahaha. yea, he totes did. Tom's getting stronger and more self assured and i'm happy ^_^
Date: 07/15/09 03:52 am Title: Chapter 4: Unlock these secrets in me, is anybody listening...
wow. i was curious to see how this fic would turn out having samy in it. oh wow. this was just all too much for me. *dies* im amazed at the tough bill, too. hes mostly the submissive type in fics and tom vice versa, but its the exact opposite. great job! [[:
Author's Response: *grinsI well, i'm glad that you like it all, and eya, i had to stuff samy in there somehow xD and yay for Bitch!Bill as I call him. I've written enough fics where he's submissive, so i figured it was time for him to grow some balls xD
Date: 07/11/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
Bill needs to get himself checked into an institution, 'cause he's crazy or possessed or something like that.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA. yea...he's kinda crazy, but he'll be fine. eventually. xD
Date: 07/11/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
No matter what bad shit he does to Tom, I think I will always sympathize with Bill. Not just in this story, in all EvilBill stories. XD It's just how I'm built. XD
ANYWAY, what's up with Bill randomly bringing up Tom's hair? He's just like, "RAWR, hair." and Tom's like, "STFU, bitch." XD
Author's Response: hahahahahaha, it's ok. my friend Kait is like that with Tom xD
and yea...i explained that already >.> xD
Date: 07/11/09 10:53 am Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
Bill needs the shit beat out of him, but I'm glad that there's finally more stories with Tom being the more submissive one. Oh and great story btw!
Author's Response: hahaha. yea, Bill does. he's totally insane, but somehow it doesn't bother me in the least xD (mostly because i'd smack the shit outta him if he ever treated me like that) xD
and yea, this is my first submissive Tom, and I'm happy to be able to write something other than (Bill was scared of the way Tom seemed to just use him for sex. yanno?)
and aww, danke fur calling my story great ^_^
Date: 07/10/09 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
Yes another chapter! and oooh he has his new hair will he leave it out? * Brain shuts down at the thought of free hair Tom*
Thank you for the update and I think a breakdown IS what he needs...want to see more of the breakdown. xD
Author's Response: hahaha. yep, another chapter ^^ i'm glad that you liked it xD and er, as far as I know in teh story, his braids'll remain like that for the rest of the chapters. and yay! someone who likes my breakdown. well Bill's breakdown xD
Date: 07/10/09 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
O.O wow never would expect Bill would break when Tom stood up to him! I liked it!! Can't wait to see what's next! Getting really good.
Author's Response: haha. well i DO try to go with the most unexpected but plausible reactions, and I think that bill's lived inside of his warped little mind for so long, that Tom standing up to him left Bill a little more than insane lol. but thanks for reading and reviewing love ^^
Date: 07/10/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 6: In sorrow I speak your name. And my voice mirrors, mirrors my torment..
-cheers as loud as possible for Tom- YEAH!!!! He stood up to him!!! I'm so proud of him!!!!
Author's Response: i'm glad that you liked that Tom stood up to Bill love. ^^ thanks for reading and reviewing ^^
Date: 07/03/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reveal, to me...
Tomi should have smacked the shit out of that little brat Bill; hehehe.
Thank you for the update, count down to the next one begins now. :]]
Author's Response: hahaha. he should have! he probably will in the future xD hopefully xD and i promise, i'll update soon ^^ i have to just finish the chapter and get up looked over ^^
Date: 06/27/09 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reveal, to me...
*dances like the insane person she is.. pauses... squeals*
eeeeeeeeee! yay for tomi growing a pair!!
i do love what youve done with the characters. tomi goin from wimpering boy to hitting his "master"
i still hate bill tho.. lil selfish and cruel bastard.
im ver curuios to see if and how he redeems himself and i really wanna know what happened with samy and tom that helped tom take such control.
keep it goin wifey! you know this is my favorite story right? pb being a close second of course lol
hearts ya! im me later missy i miss you.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the fact that Tomi found his detatchable balls xD and eh. bill, redeeming himself. dunno how that's gonna happen xD
Date: 06/26/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 5: Reveal, to me...
Mannnn, I felt the angst and tension. And woo Tom actually stood up for himself and punched Bill. But I think Bill realized in that last line that he had thoroughly fucked up. I loved this!
Author's Response: *nod nod* bill fucked up, tom grew some balls and all is well in the world of shelly xD
Date: 06/26/09 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 4: Unlock these secrets in me, is anybody listening...
*smirks* tehehehehe. So that shit was hot and finally someone stood up Bill. *blushing and grins* Man...Shelly that was insane.
Author's Response: hahahahaha. *smirks* I'm glad that you liked my awesomeness girl xD