Date: 01/29/13 10:52 am Title: My Hands are Cold
I've found it rather interesting darling, good job ^^
Date: 01/28/11 04:19 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
I liked this, definitely, I just hated the song references. Probably because I don't think The Killers' "Human" to be a particularily good or meaningful song, but that just me.
Anywho, so I liked the detail you put into the fic, very vivid. Especially when Bill is touching himself, it feels a bit like the reader has a birds eye view of it. :)
I like your diverse choice of words.
This is a well put together fic, beginning, middle and end.
Well done.
PS- I'm still laughing at the image of "the Gs all but threw themselves at Tom's abandoned drink, fighting stupidly over it." lmao. Brilliant image!
Date: 12/14/10 03:27 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
This was a perfectly lovely story. I enjoyed every word of it. It was very sweet. Danke.
Date: 02/12/09 06:52 am Title: My Hands are Cold
Eh ma gawwwd not enough seeeeecks...
I'm sorry but lol~ I am the BETA 8U But I didn't touch it as much as I touched the author. :u
Author's Response: WELL HOW 'BOUT YOU WRITE SOMETHING BETTER. PUNK.rnrnI'm sorry I love you touch me moar~ you make me want to write, bb.
Date: 02/11/09 10:36 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
This was incredible
Date: 02/11/09 07:35 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
your grammar and very good, vivid imagery surprises me. i never know anyone who can write like this. it's was sexy and easy to read. i hope u write more stories soon :D
Date: 02/11/09 04:59 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
How can you be intimidated when you write something as amazing as that?! Seriously, you're up there with the best of the authors on here already, don't worry about that! That was actually amazing, the amount of detail you included in it, and the emotions that were shown.
I love it when Tom is the one to realise first, and then Bill follows suit, and I liked that you didn't make them actually fuck, because that would have reduced the lovey-ness in it; it was really, really sweet. I hope you have/will have more stuff to post for us in the near future!
Author's Response: *blushes*rnrn*melts*rnrn*dies*rnrnYour compliment was what kept me happy while I went to the dentist today; I hope you're proud of yourself. I'm so glad you liked the emotions and the detail, since I was kind of worried about the amount of detail I was putting in, but to hear that it's appreciated is wonderful. And I especially love that you liked them not fucking, 'cause that was a conscious decision I made to keep it 'lovey', as you say.rnrnGah. I love you. xD I've not got anything else prepared at the moment, but there'll be more coming from me for this fandom, certainly.
Date: 02/11/09 01:39 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
The song choice/metaphor was a little iffy for me. I wasn't sure if I liked it. But the bits with Gusatv & George were funny, and the rest was sexy.
Date: 02/11/09 12:39 pm Title: My Hands are Cold
that was great! so good for your first in the fandom!
Date: 02/11/09 10:40 am Title: My Hands are Cold
I thought it was wonderful. Good job! :D
Date: 02/11/09 09:02 am Title: My Hands are Cold
i liked it. you can really be proud of yourself, this is definetly really good. now when ever i see your writing i swear i'll be reading it straight away. and loving it. =) it was really good, the atmosphere and the feeling you descriped with such a carefull way made clear that they really lvoe each other. i liked it a lot!!! ... please write some more...?
Date: 02/11/09 08:50 am Title: My Hands are Cold
This was so beautiful! I love how poetic everything was and how the pace was slow but constant. Just an awesome story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm rather happy you commented on the pace, I was worried I was taking everything a bit too slow... but I'm glad to hear that it worked out well.
Date: 02/11/09 07:37 am Title: My Hands are Cold
This was sweet ^^ And yes, Bill is definitely both dancer and a human. If not alien as well x) I mean, something like him is just so out of this world xD *__*
Author's Response: Haha, I must agree, there's certainly something otherworldly about Bill. Thankyou for the review!
Date: 02/11/09 07:13 am Title: My Hands are Cold
AWE!!! I Love it! and I love the killers!
Author's Response: Thank you! And ahaha, The Killers are awesome, aren't they? xD
Date: 02/11/09 06:54 am Title: My Hands are Cold
I I uhm I ... Uhm I ... WOW!! 0_0
That was fucking insanely well written and .. DAYYYYYUUUMMM - So damn hawt!! I loved it!!
Author's Response: Eeeeeeee. As soon as I read this I had to take a moment to flail happily like a moron and then another moment to calm down. I'm so glad you loved it, and thankyou for the compliments. *hugtackles*