Date: 07/12/09 11:23 am Title: Rule
this made me cry, so hard. for bill, for tom... it's so good. thanks so much for writing this, you guys really are amazing. :)
Date: 07/07/09 04:39 am Title: Rule
That must have killed you to write. Absolutely stunning.
Date: 07/06/09 12:50 am Title: Rule
Jesus christ that was depressing...
Date: 07/05/09 12:40 am Title: Rule
It's not the gruesomeness of the ending that bothered me, but the suddeness of it. It's like you got tired of writing it and just want it over with. You really conveyed Bill's grief well though!
Date: 07/04/09 04:35 pm Title: Rule
Amazing ending... though I should have seen the death part coming.
but it's still lovely.
(:
Date: 07/04/09 04:04 pm Title: Rule
O_O
*shocked*
Er I deleted the previous review (didn't see the finished:yes status of the fic lol)
That was so sad...And some action we got there!thank you for everything!That was my first vamp!fic in the TH fiction.And You totally wrote it with so much more believable way than the other vamp!fic I've already read anywhere.Thank you so much guys!
Date: 07/04/09 12:32 pm Title: Rule
You guys actually went there, didn't you? Wow.
Date: 07/04/09 11:44 am Title: Rule
um, wow. toootally not what i was expecting. it was beautiful and tragic, but cought me totally off guard. nicely done ma lady... *sniffles* poor tomi...
Date: 07/04/09 06:25 am Title: Rule
I could never have predicted this ending. :(
I wasn't expecting a happy ending, but I had hoped that they could've reunited proper or Tom had a peace of mind before he died. Nevertheless, I loved the story.
Date: 07/04/09 03:02 am Title: Rule
woah. totally didn't see this ending happening, but then again, i don't remember seeing this ending not happening.
however that's besides the point. i really enjoyed this story as a whole (i'm not usually a fan of supernatural fics) so thank you very much for writing something so interesting and amazing ^^
Date: 06/19/09 01:18 am Title: Control
Oooooooh. It's just too good. But perfect for a birthday present (if I'm allowed to think by Chayenne you meant me...*blushes* thanks )It's no secret that I'm in love with this story and I don't care that Bill was supposed to be Tom's mate, because I can see him warming up to Bu (okay, that may be a huge exaggeration, but something is definitely happening there...). This story is so sensual, so full of vivid imagery. The little boy first shocked me, but then I just let myself be carried away by the story. They are vampires, not harmless,cuddly toys, and they love feeding on innocents. I'm glad you reminded us. All in all, this story tickles me just the right way. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Yes, we meant you. ;)
Date: 06/16/09 10:16 pm Title: Control
Okay, the kid thing is squicky, but hey, vamp fic! I, erm, still kinda want a threesome... I'll go hide in my corner now.
Date: 06/16/09 05:56 pm Title: Control
YES YOU UPDATED!!!! omg for the longest time I thought this fic was dead! Please you two have to finish this story it's too good to go unfinished
Date: 06/16/09 05:29 pm Title: Control
Is this going to end like Romeo and Juliet? ._____.
Date: 06/16/09 05:03 pm Title: Control
awww i hate bushido in this one. hes all 'blah blah blah have a dead baby, blah blah, im the shit' and makes bill fall for him. Run tomi run!
Date: 06/16/09 03:16 pm Title: Control
O___O
I loved that gory and creepy feeding!Oh my, plus it was a child.It add another strange effect to it wow!
Yay! Go Tom!(thought, Billshido is sooo cute!)
Date: 06/16/09 02:50 pm Title: Control
*claps hands excitedly* I'm so glad that you've updated most of your stories. I feel as if I got my TH fix for the week. I must say that the mood & tone you set for each one of your stories just draws the reader in.
Date: 06/16/09 09:29 am Title: Control
Omggggg how did I forget about this fic. Its retarded how good this is.
Date: 06/13/09 08:53 pm Title: Command
I am soooo happy to see this updated. I'm generally iffy about Billshido, but this is converting me. Damn you!