Date: 02/12/13 01:00 am Title: Rule
What a sad story, heartbreaking story...
Date: 07/08/12 08:11 pm Title: Rule
Aw, that was sad. I kind of wish Bill had gone crazy and killed Mathes at the end, to pay him back. But, I totally get Bill just not being able to move forward once Tom was gone, and their ashes ending together was very poignant.
Date: 02/05/11 02:48 pm Title: Rule
O_o
Well, itīs nice. Their death is epic. xD
Date: 12/30/10 01:53 am Title: Rule
This was a really cool fic! Actually, it's the first vamp one I've read, and even though the ending was sad, it was 10000000000000000000000 billion times better than the ending of Twilight. :D
Date: 05/24/10 11:32 pm Title: Rule
oh. my. god. this is so so so upsetting. i dont even know, so dark and dangerous and terrifying and sad. !!
Date: 10/14/09 03:27 am Title: Rule
The only three words that I've had repeating over and over in my head is oh my god for going on the last five minutes now...... wow... very sad... very powerful, that Bill would subject himself to such a death to be with Tom... and what happens to the man who allowed it to happen? Shit... I'm off to find the box of tissue my daughter stole.....
Date: 09/23/09 10:10 am Title: Rule
waaah so sad!!!! sniff T^T sniff
2 thumbs up man! love the angst
Date: 08/30/09 12:30 pm Title: Rule
Awh that's sad and sweet!
Date: 08/30/09 12:20 pm Title: Control
Awh Bushido really does like Bill. I wonder how long that will last. Will Tom be angry when he finds Bill. It's not exactly his choice but he's still going along with it.
Date: 08/30/09 12:07 pm Title: Command
"I am, it's the others I worry for." Bushido moves toward him and Bill flinches as the mattress dips at his side. "Seems I can't let him loose without him ripping something off of someone."
There's a strange measure of pride in his voice - lol
Can't wait to see what Tom gets up to!
Date: 08/30/09 12:02 pm Title: Possess
*grins* I love that Bill is used by Anis/Bushido lovely just lovely! So well written!
Date: 08/30/09 11:50 am Title: Gone
awh both hurt on the inside awh so sad!
Date: 08/30/09 11:46 am Title: Rend
awh they split up the twins that's no fun!
Date: 08/30/09 11:37 am Title: Concession
He claps his hand on his shoulder, and Bushido feels the crushing movement of time, as if pressed against two grinding stones. He sinks to his knees and when he's finally able to open his eyes, he's kneeling before the locked gate of the manor, the bright moonlight above him. - ok that's freaking cool!
*giggles* ask for the twins!
Date: 08/30/09 11:24 am Title: Encroach
Meetings are boring no matter what they are about lol
The twct was freaking hot!
Date: 08/29/09 10:43 am Title: Prologue
ooohhh lovely sorry I missed this one before!
Date: 08/25/09 10:24 am Title: Command
Ooooo. Intense!!' :D
Date: 07/17/09 01:09 am Title: Rule
Well that was depressing. Went too fast too, and never got Tom's perspective again. He just bursts into the room, and 2 lines later he's dead. I was expecting there to at least be more of a fight since this is what the story has been leading up to. I was all "yay, Tomi's come to rescue him!...oh wait he just died. nevermind." And yeah, depressing ending.
Date: 07/13/09 05:09 pm Title: Rule
Wow. I have to be honest and say that this ending has totally blind sided me. I actually had to go back and read it again because I couldn't understand what was happening- way too quick!
It seems like you've rushed about 5 chapters into this single one here to tie up the story and it's tbh, disappointing, especially since the first couple of chapters were so good. It feels incredibly rushed to me.