Date: 07/27/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
hehe i want cupcakes! haha
oh my god....its only been what...2 chapters, and i already love this!!!
please continue writing!!!
i really want to know what happened to poor Bill.
Author's Response: Wow...I haven't touched/thought about this since half a year ago!rnrnBut your review deserves a dozen batches of cupcakes for making me smile ♥ rnI'll get to this as soon as possible! :Drnrnrn
Date: 02/17/09 02:48 am Title: Chapter 2
So what's wrong with Billa? ;_; And Tom's past is a blur too. But the ending made me Awww! lolz And I want a cupcake!!! -takes cupcake and starts chowing down-
Author's Response: yup, pretty mind boggling, but the next 1-2 chaps'll reveal more. I'll hopefully have some twincest frosting waiting for those cupcakes, later (; thankyou<3
Date: 02/16/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww I'm really confused as to exactly what's up with Bill but I'm really curious... I can't wait to read more! This is exciting as hell!! Keep up the fabulous work and thanks for the cupcakes! XD
Author's Response: All in due time :] thank you and you're welcome! :D
Date: 02/16/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
o.o that was really hectic! even though you didnt think it was good i liked it :) i'm happy that you made them open up to each other:) i cant wait until the next chapter is posted, to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: rather rushed, yeah. heh. thank you (: I could get this done in homeroom maybe, tomorrow. we'll see ;]
Date: 02/16/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 2
GIVE ME DEM CUPCAKES! =DDDD
I'm soo confused about what happened to Bill.
please write more soon!
I'm like, really curious.
this is interesting.
Author's Response: *grunts, lifting cupcake as big as your head* ahh, there you are (: I'll get to this as soon as possible, thanks!
Date: 02/16/09 02:53 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god, Please update soon. The suspense is killing me here. I really wanna know what happen next. So please update like soon. *Gives you Hugz* Update soon and I'll give you cookie, cake and ice cream *Does Bill's pout* Pretty please.
Author's Response: haha, I will! started chapter 3 today; it's kinda confusing, the way I wanna go with it. But I'll get to it as soon as possible(:
Date: 02/12/09 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1.
Whoa, I love your writing style. You're quite good. I wonder what this game will compose of. :)
Author's Response: aww, thanks :) I guess we'll see, haha. I'm hoping to continue this on Valentine's day - very good inspiration if I want an juicy variety of games ;]
Date: 02/11/09 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1.
Oh my god please contiune, Oh and some suggestions for this fic, um maybe spanking and smut?? I would love that, maybe you could do it for me *Does Bill's pout* Oh and this is an awesome fic by the way. I loves it.
Author's Response: LOL. I respect smut writers so much; if the boys' games decide to take that turn, I'll see just how far it'll go (; thank you!
Date: 02/11/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1.
for a first time poster i thought that you did pretty good, you should be proud! you did miss some words here and there and some parts could have been made clearer but that isnt so bad, i cant say anything too bad since there's nothing awful about the story :] good work! and p.s., don't we all wish that we owned the boys? xD - Amber :)
Author's Response: aww, thank you (:rnrnyeah, I have problems with either specifics or being vague, haha. I'll be sure to work on it ;] rnrnthat's like...the international dream to own the boys. one day, it will be accomplished!
Author's Response: aww, thank you (:rnrnyeah, I have problems with either specifics or being vague, haha. I'll be sure to work on it ;] rnrnthat's like...the international dream to own the boys. one day, it will be accomplished!
Date: 02/10/09 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1.
I'm very surprised that this is your first.
you have nothing to be nervous about
keep writing and don't worry, it's really good.
Your writing style isn't too heavy and it's I guess...pleasant?
"I'm in" was a great way to end it, too.
keeping us hooked without being that cliffhanger that everone despises.
oh, and no mistakes, I think. you seem pretty experienced.
Author's Response: you can't imagine how relieved I was that I got at least one review, haha.rnrnthank you :]