Reviews For Family Portrait
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Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ok, I believe you:p
Can't wait for more^^

Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

I...*cringe* sowwy about that, but soon as I finished reading that, I was so pissed at him, lol. Doesn't he get the best sex ever with his husband? Why does he still need the women? Don't get it. Anyway, please do continue and I promise not to lose my cool again, hehe.

Author's Response: It's ok. I didnt know what to put so i was Tom would cheat for the last time. he does get the best sex ever...especially when Bill's pregnant...lol...Tom is still a normal guy and is sometimes attracthed to women....he loves Bill but hes a boob man sometime....lol....anyways i'm glad you like this and its ok to get tempermental sometimes. that makes good reviews! Thanks!

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

*headdesk*
Why do you keep doing that?
It's mean!

Author's Response: I had too! It's apart of the story...it will get better...

Reviewer: kells Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg omg she is such a whore lol j/k omg but umm loved da chapter! you rock

Author's Response: Thanks gurl!

Reviewer: sacred Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

Tom!!!!!!!!! Wtf?

Bill doesn't deserve that!

Poor Billa.

Aww the kids are so cute.

-Sacred

Author's Response: It wont happen again. Promise! The kids will be a handful later on. Thanks!

Reviewer: THROX Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

Who was Kelly again...What the hell is wrong with Tom he is married..... with KIDS for God sakes.....

Author's Response: Kelly is a recording artist that Tom and the G's are working with. Tom is just...Tom....thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TokioHotelEstonia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love this story! :D

Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 11:36 am Title: Chapter 2

oh Tom!
for christ's sake!

Author's Response: I know right! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 2

Tom and his... Ughhh...
I kinda hate you for that (just a little). LOL Being unfaithful.. Sheeesh!! And Bill's pregnant for goodness sake! Bad Tomi! *tsk, tsk* Just hope nothing worse could happen...@___@

Will they meet Bill's family too? Or.. Not really?

Author's Response: I had to do this. It's the last time he will every do it. The worse will happen down the line. Unexpected to all. Bill family will start to come up in the next chapter within flashbacks. Those are important. Thanks for reviewing and I'm sorry you kinda hate ms......LOL

Reviewer: shylyte329 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2

Tom is an idiooooot!! I need to smack some sense into him.
DD:

Other than the fact that I'm now going to castrate Tom, that was a great chapter!
:D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: billa_lewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 09:38 am Title: Chapter 2

HOLY SHIT BATMAN!!!!!!!! is tom cheating on bill?
oh hell no...... doesnt he now hes married to the worlds hottest man on the planet?
that no one is even close to as sexy as bill?
gosh i want to beat tom with a giant ball of common sense until he sees the error of his ways
giany ball of it i say!!!!! anyway i cant wait till you post the next chapter........ *goes to sit in a corner till the next chapter comes up*

Author's Response: He will...trust me....thanks for your review!

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 09:29 am Title: Chapter 2

oh no.... NOT MORE CHEATING!!!

Author's Response: This was the last time! I had to put it in here for dramatics. thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: billa_lewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1

oh my gosh!!!! another? wow bill is like baby making central....in the real world guys cant get pregnant but in your world guys cant stop.... lol... anyway i am tottally in love with this sequal.....its all my expectations and so much more great job.

Author's Response: I know! This will be his last kid...unless i do another sequel! We'll see about that. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 09:02 am Title: Chapter 2

ARGH, THOMAS!!!!

Author's Response: i know but it will get better! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kimi483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 07:24 am Title: Chapter 2

:O Tom! WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO WITH YOU?! xD good chapter! :)

Author's Response: things will get better between bill and tom...Tom will get better.

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 06:52 am Title: Chapter 2

He cheated again? In his own house with his kids in there? So this tom now basically has no redeeming qualities at all? Got it. So disappointing.

Author's Response: No! i mean he did do that but he hasd reedeming qualities. they show after that. im sorry your disappointed but everything will get better. thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 05:37 am Title: Chapter 2

OH my god TOM!!!! FUCKING SNOWBALL IN HELL ANF EVERYTHING THAT'S GOOD WITH GUMMIBEARS DON'T DO IT!!!!! FUCKING LIVING HELL!!! WHAT ABOUT BILL AND YOUR KIDS?????!!!!!

Author's Response: im sorry! Tom wont cheat again.

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 2

Fix it!!!!! Bill better not find out by walking in on them! Tom sooo needs to grow a backbone when it comes to his libido!

Author's Response: No no. he finds out another way...lol...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: xxxstaciexxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/09 12:23 am Title: Chapter 1

amzinq beginging
i love it so much

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: smickra Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! I didn't even have to wait that long!
I saw tha banner, looked at the names and though "wait, I know those names. Oh, yay a sequel!"
*does the sequel dance*

Author's Response: Lol! I glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing, and watch out for ch. 2 coming soon.

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