Date: 03/03/09 09:23 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!
I think that they should stay single until they reunie!!!!!!!!!!! *scrunch up face and cries!* Oh my god!
Date: 03/03/09 08:44 am Title: Chapter 4
casually date others... then they realize that they need each other!
*sniff* i rly hope they get together soon!
Date: 03/03/09 08:39 am Title: Chapter 4
The should stay single!
Date: 03/03/09 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Poll: Yes. They should. Or at least Bill should, but Tom should only have casual nothings. Bill should date and when Tom sees him, haha! Jealousy...
I really really hate you. Poor Bill! Tom is a horrible person! Great chapter, but I hate you!
Date: 03/03/09 08:03 am Title: Chapter 4
No casual dating, come on! That will only take them further apart and I wouldn't be able to handle it. Too much happening already. Bah!
Date: 03/03/09 05:28 am Title: Chapter 4
If I refuse to answer the poll, does that make me a bitch? -__-
*cries* I want my boys to get back together, god!
But, I do get where Bill's coming from and I am truly trying to understand Tom, but he makes it very hard. :-(
When you have children, that's your first and only priority, but on the other hand, you can't just stay in a marriage that's not working out anymore either. The end result will always be the same. Still...wish they could give it one last try before calling it quits for good.
Date: 03/03/09 05:05 am Title: Chapter 4
OHOHOHOH I dont want them to get seperated. This is good i love it. O maybe they could get divorced then Tom plans a proper wedding coz he was thinking about it. Like Homer did for Marge in the Simpsons!!!!!
Date: 03/03/09 03:56 am Title: Chapter 4
That Tyler thing right now is quite odd
I guess he realizes what he lost cheating on Bill
Date: 03/03/09 03:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Whow! I can't believe that Tom just pulled a Chris Brown. This story is so much like real life. I like how you even include the children's point of view and realistic arguments between married couples. I don't really like that Tom just up and left Bill, but in reality too many couples stay together thinking that it's best for the children. Sometimes those relationships should have never happended in the first place.
After the fight between Bill and Tom, I thought that the media would get a hold of it and spread rumors, much like the Chris Brown and Rihanna situation. I wish you had wrote about the repercussions of the incident the following day with Bill at work. That would have been interesting.
Either way you're doing an amazing job! I absolutely love this story.
Date: 03/03/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Stay Single, it's just wrong not to mention Bill is pregnant! I don't think Bill should go through with the separation, he should just hide the papers until he is able to talk some sense into Tom's thick macho head!
*glaresevil*
Date: 03/03/09 01:58 am Title: Chapter 4
I honestly think they should stay single because they need time to look at themselves. Bill hadn't been broken up with Tyler long before he got with Tom. They need time to heal. I can't believe Tom hit Bill but if someone threw a glass vase at me and I got cut I would have slapped him to. LOVE IT!
Date: 02/27/09 07:38 am Title: Chapter 3
ZOMG...I can't believe how bipolar their relationship is. Lol. I love it, so much conflict.
Ummm, I'm not sure how it should happen. Maybe a separation, and then they go their own ways and then the children want to see their dads and so they grudgingly meet up alot and then the flames reignite? I have noooo idea, but I reckon whatever you're going to write will be kick ass. XDD Update soon!
Date: 02/26/09 01:17 am Title: Chapter 3
I really do love your story but I have a serious question. I know you get a lot of reviews so if you don't answer i won't be offended. Why does it always have to be Tom that messes up first? It's like he is never capable of not cheating. I always thought Bill would be the cheater I guess because he plays the innocent role so well. Well anyway I do think that they should seperate or maybe even divorce but they need to come back together. I don't think you should have Bill date someone else though unless your going to jump ahead some months. I think Bill needs time to heal not a new man yet. Thats just my opinion though. :)
Author's Response: I don't know why I make Tom cheat. Maybe im trying to keep up his playboy persona he has in real life. I haven't developed the back stories yet. I'm working on Bill's background as in showing his family. I do need to be apart for a while. I'm trying out some things to see if they would fit in the story.rnI wouldn't make Bill have anyone else. Tom either. People will be pissed at me. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/25/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
If Tom and Bill get a seperation or divorce, I think Bill should move on and show Tom what it feels like. Yes, I do believe in revenge, why do you ask?
Great chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response: I like your way of thinking. I'm going to use your idea! But they will get back together...Thanks for then sugesstion, and reviewing!!!!!!
Date: 02/25/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Dis has got to be ma fav chapter so far omg tom is such a ladies man so you gotta give him dat it aint he's fault he like ladies too but umm bill should knoe dat ones a cheater always a cheater he shouldn't be too surprised he knew dis would happen sooner or later but update soon plz!!!!! You rock!
Date: 02/24/09 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is beyond amazing. Christian's POV completey wrecked me, just too cute! Update sooner rather than later please :)
Date: 02/24/09 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
No separation or divorce!!!!
I think Bill needs to confront this skank Kelly! Tom should probably just...I dunno either get his eyes taken out or his dick cut off...maybe to extreme....counseling is always a method you haven't mentioned before.
Date: 02/24/09 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
bitch! clif hanger! anyways i loved it.. as usual.
have you seen the trailers for the new movie "obsession" watch them cuz it would make the story more interesting if kelly was like.. a stalker... idk just watch them beyonce is in the trailer
Date: 02/24/09 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
O_O tom is in for it!! I can't wait for an update!!!!!