Date: 03/05/09 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
yay tyler is back in action!
awwwe i love how simone is being a sweetheart to bill=DD
i also want to know more of tomis life????what's he doing and how hes coping without bill????
Author's Response: Next chapter my friend. Promise. Oh yeah I need ideas for the kids. Like when they seperate how are they going to act. Also like changes for them generally. I can handle emotionally. Like for example maddie being seperated from grace. Yah know. Thanks
Date: 03/05/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
I know they're not seperated yet, and I don't want them to be either...I'm just being over dramatic:p
And not sex but...just action...anything really. Like a car crash^^..yeah, yeah, I know, I've said it before:)
Date: 03/05/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
...
Mean you making them get a divorce...
I think there's should be some action here soon(a)
But as always, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one;D
Author's Response: Action as in fight or sex?
Date: 03/05/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'll really hate the persons they date if they do that, so I say "stay single"
I'm not even going to list all the things I wanna do to them for seperating in the first place...
Good chapter though^^
Author's Response: Ms. Maddie they are not seperated. Tom just left for a while. Just bscause he got the papers dosent mean there seperated.....not yet. Thanks for reviewing and ur request for tom to get hurt will happen soon. I have. Log planned!
Date: 03/05/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Hey, I love the chapter. Why is Andreas so mad at Bill for? I don't really understand why? I just wish Tom & Bill work things out because its sad to see the kids in the middle of everything. Love the chapter though.
Author's Response: He's mad at bill because he doesn't want him with with Tyler. If you look back in beautiful disaster when bill tell tom about Tyler cheating on him you will see that bill got hurt and andreas was there to comfort him. Andreas protects him. It will be explained next chapter. Tyler is up to something. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 03/05/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't really know if it's a good or a bad 'Oh god'... Both, because I'm sad that they are seperating, but kinda glad that Bill have Simone, still!
Author's Response: I'm going go have to seperate them cause the need to think of what they have is real. Trust me.... They will get back together. This isn't the seperation. Tom just left. Not officially. Don't worry. :)
Date: 03/05/09 10:14 am Title: Chapter 1
^__^
WOOT. The G-Force Strikes Back! ~cues music~
Date: 03/05/09 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Can someone just slap Tom? Cause he really needs a slapping at this point, seriously.
Author's Response: sounds good to me...next chapter georg or gusti might...thanks!
Date: 03/05/09 09:41 am Title: Chapter 5
omg i think bill should give tyler another chance but not give his all in da relationship until he knows dat tyler really did change.
Author's Response: later on in the story when they do get the seperation
Date: 03/05/09 08:51 am Title: Chapter 5
awI LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 03/05/09 08:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh god! That's all I can say right now!
Author's Response: is that a good oh god or bad one? lol
Date: 03/05/09 07:59 am Title: Chapter 5
Simone is incredible
I don' know if B& T are going back 2gether again and that' why I luv ur story so much..
U can imagine
Author's Response: she is...isnt she. we have to work on tom's grandma...lol...they will...i hope
Date: 03/05/09 06:35 am Title: Chapter 5
I really wanna know what Tom's thinking half the time, seriously. Because I look at his family and he couldn't have it better and I still don't get it.
But that won't make me stop reading this wonderful story!!!
Author's Response: its only going to get worse before it gets better...tom is tom...lol...i might do a filler on toms pov with the children
Date: 03/04/09 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
NO DATING! and no separation!!!!!
Date: 03/03/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG OMG.. idk they should stay single and miserable
Date: 03/03/09 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
WOOOOWERS I THINK BILL MIGHT HAVE FEELINS FOR TYLER OMG OMG AWWW POOR TOM HES MISERABLE WITHOUT BILL BUT DATS WAT HE GETS FOR HITTIN BILL BUT GOOD CHAPTER LOVES IT!
Date: 03/03/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh lord!
yay tyler is back, now bill has somebody to make tom jealous with=DDD
i'm not mad that you made them separated, i think it was a very smart idea from you, i mean their "relationship" wans't the beast, tom was a completly asshole*SORRY FOR ALL YOU TOM LOVERS BUT HE WAS A DICK TO BILL*and yes i do remember bill cheating on tom!!!
i think once they separate bill should date tyler. i really don't know about tom though-.-"
and please stop bill being so dependent on tom, he should forget about him for a while BUT DON'T THINK I'M SAYING YOU SHOULD MAKE HIM FORGET ABOUT TOM COMPLETELY,YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN???!!
i love how chris is so close to bill *grins like an idiot*i just love it=DDD
i strongly believe bill should "see" somebody else!!!!!
and i have some ideas, here's my e0mail: sadangel10@hotmail.com
Oopsie, my comment sure is long huh???teehee
Date: 03/03/09 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Good job so far. I have really gotten into this. I love it. I think they should date other people because then they can see that they really miss eachother and then that nobody compares to the other. Say Bill goes on a date or coffee with some guy. Hey would then think "hey I went here with Tom. Oh I miss him so much." Or something along thoses lines. That or Tom does something and then thinks "Dang gotta stop swearing. Bill doesnt like me to swear around the kids. Wait Bills not here anymore. Man I miss him" Or something like that.
Date: 03/03/09 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ummm, to be honest with you. I think if they seperate it won't be the same for them to date anyone only because they have kids especially if they were meant to be for life.
Date: 03/03/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
they shouldn't separate, after everything they have been through it just makes me sad, such a beautiful couple can't just break up. and I think that should stay single and not date other people. Anyways i love your story. props to you for such a well written story.