Date: 03/11/09 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay, they're back together. I'm happy about that. Tom finally realized what an idiot he was being, but it was nice of Jorg to try and fix it. I'm curious to learn how the vacation will go now that they also have to go see a marriage therapist. Either way, I think that this marriage is still on the rocks.
As for your questions. I don't think that cheating should be a reason why they separate, but I don't have a suggestion either. And I love long chapters. I would also like to learn a little bit more about Bill and Tom's past.
Author's Response: The marriage is still on the rocks. The vacation will be insane. I might not separate them. I don't know anymore. What do you want to know about their past. I kinda have bill's past planned out. Need helps on Tom's. Have any ideas? Thanks!
Date: 03/11/09 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
i dont think they should cheat again on each other... it would be to much... but i think they should get closer BECAUSE of a problem... you know like because of pregnancy problem... or a kid get in an accident .. something like that. however... your chapters are NOT too long i love your fiction the way it is... its perfect ;) this was my first comment and i promise their will be more ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I think I'm going to bring them closer together now but have a few set backs along the way.
Date: 03/11/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
No Bill and Tom shouldn't seperate, They love each other. Please don't make them separate. And no these chappies not too long at all. this fic is awesome though. Oh and is there a chance where the twins actually spanking their kids? I wanna read it. Please?? *Does Bill's pout*
Author's Response: I never thought of that? I will put that in a upcoming chapter. Thanks!
Date: 03/11/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
1: They shouldn't be seperated again! It was too hard!
Bill deserves a real wedding like Michelle!
2. NOOOOO! Not at all! I loooove the lenght!
Author's Response: He will get a real wedding! Promise you! Thanxs!
Date: 03/11/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
I don't want them to separate!!! Please!!!
I also don't think the chapters are long at all...they are the right length.
Author's Response: I don't I will seperate them again. They will just gave set backs. Thanks!
Date: 03/09/09 01:34 am Title: Chapter 6
more more more. god i want to kill Tyler what a ass
Date: 03/08/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh Wow, so the doctor never told Bill he was getting the abortions!?! And his mother know about the rapes but she was just taking him to the doctor so he could be "treated" for being "sick" instead!?!
Seriously, I can't for the next few chapters. You've got me at the edge of my seat now waiting....I would love forever if you update like soon :)
Author's Response: Yup thats where it's going! Plus Bill wouldnt tell her either. i'm planning to update tomorrow if my beta sent back the chapters.
Date: 03/08/09 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG! Tyler so sonof a bitch, you motherfucker, you!!!! ARGH! I hate you!
Tom, get your records on and go back to Bill already! You still love him and he still loves you!!!
Bill, for fucks sake, DON'T and I mean DON'T go back to Tyler even if he plays a trick on you!
Date: 03/08/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh snap! Oh snap! I think I've figured it out!!! Now I really want to read it.
This story is intensive I love it!
Author's Response: If were on the same page then yup!!!!!!!! Now basically the doctor doctor it away. Abortions and only his mother knew and not his father. Any guess there? I so want to tell you everything but can't. Thanks for reviewing?
Date: 03/08/09 12:34 am Title: Chapter 6
Bill was pregnant from the age of 14- 16!?! I don't understand. Was he even with Tyler at that time? Wasn't it just after his mother's death that he met Tyler and then he held off having sex with him until he was 18 or something. What was going on exactly? Bill has way too many secrets to understand.
Seriously, this is shocking almost. I mean what is the real reason that Bill didn't talk to his father all those years?
I want more....please!
Author's Response: As we know bill could get pregnant way before he knew he could. I don't want to ruin it why bill was pregnant between 14-16. It comes up when bill maternal side of the family comes into the picture. With is coming up soon. Really soon. If you go back to chapter where Tom hits Bill and he has the flashback to where he remembers his UNLCE hitting him and getting ON TOP OF HIM AND UNBUCKLING HIS BELT gives off a clue. Can you fiqure it out now what happened to Bill? Let me know if you solved the clue because i'm interested :)! If you still need more info let me know and I'll to you. You will be the first to know.....with limited details. Can't spoil the story yet. Thanks for reviewing!!!!
Date: 03/07/09 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, when are the filler chapters going to end? You might be able to guess what I want to happen. Although, as far as I know, I hate Tyler, I want Bill to get together with anyone but Tom right now. Just once, just briefly. They will get back together in the end, but for right now, Bill needs to show Tom that he should never be taken for granted. And just exactly what happens when you cheat on the person you love. I appreciate revenge. Maybe Bushido should come back into the picture? Although, Tyler seems like the obvious choice at this point...
Author's Response: Filler chapters end when my beta sends me the story back which I hope is soon. Bushido comes. Sooner than you think with some surprises if his own. Tyler will get with bill and hurt him and that's when tom comes to the rescue. Thanks for reviewing!rn
Date: 03/07/09 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
WOOOW DIS CHAPTER WAS REALLY SOMETHIN I NEVER THOUGHT BILL WAS PREGO BEFORE TOM CAME INTO HIS LIFE... BUT DANG TYLER IS JUS PLAYIN FAMES OHHH DATS A BIG NO NO!
Date: 03/07/09 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hate Tyler what an ass..Sends his sex tape to his friends.... Love the chapter though. Hopefully Bill will hear the music to his song & him & Tom can make it sound so beautiful... Love it don't stop the typing...
Date: 03/07/09 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
i officially hate tyler... KILL THE BASTARD!!
great story!
Date: 03/07/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 6
I don't really like Tyler, but then again, I don't think we're supposed to:p
Great chapter though, as always;D
Date: 03/07/09 10:13 am Title: Chapter 6
i kinda like the chapter but i have a question, bill doesn't remember losing his other kids right????
and i love the idea of the song, tomi is such a cutie pie=DD
and thanks for posting this chapter before monday,you're such a good author=DDthough i don't remember if i was one of that 8 reviewers????
Author's Response: You were! LOL. Your the only one so far that's caught that. LOL. He's doesn't remember because...i'll put in a email to tell you. Don't really want to ruin it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/07/09 07:44 am Title: Chapter 6
Can we rip Tyler's testies off and fry em, throw them to the dogs while we make him watch?
And, oh...1000 Meere. You killed me. I'm feeling that one in my gut.
Date: 03/07/09 04:43 am Title: Chapter 6
Ah Nooooooo, please let someone beat the living shizz out of Tyler. i would pay cookies for that. Loving this still great read and a great write hoping for more soon
Date: 03/07/09 04:34 am Title: Chapter 6
TYLER DIE >D RAWR!
and... I never want the split to happen I never did. .>.<
Date: 03/05/09 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmm the previous chapter- bill's thoughts- remind me of a within temptation song...forgiven...
"you gave up the fight
ou left me behind
all it's done
it's forgiven"
(or something like that)