Date: 04/18/09 07:55 am Title: Chapter 11
Really amazing! Can't wait till next time;D !
Date: 04/13/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this chapter
hope is coming more soon
Date: 04/10/09 02:49 am Title: Chapter 10
OMG that scene in the cementery seriously made me cry!! Tom was SO cute telling Bill's mom that he was going to look after her son!! *dies*
I'm literally dying to know how's Bill going to react with the news about Tom having another son!!
Please ...please...don't make him mad!! *begs*
You better update this soon, girl!! *0*
btw...I must say that I usually don't like OC, but Serenity is just damned cute!! :P
I think I've told you this like a million times before but...I LOVE YOU!! *0*
I feel bad for getting you all entertained with the other fic because this is like seriously GREAT!! *blushes*
Author's Response: I love wirting 'FOREVER'. I have plenty chapters for this writen out allready so im not worried about this one that much. Thanks for the review darling!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/09/09 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Very touching chapter.
Date: 04/09/09 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
yy another cahapter ;D
Date: 04/09/09 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg awww dis is abnother amazain chapter! i jus hope bill wont be very mad at the fact that tom got another baby dat would really suck but im assumin he will i jus hope they will be able to work things out! ohh by the way i really really hate his grandma...but update soon!
Date: 04/09/09 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
Tom has another child:o
Will Bill find out?
I've been waiting for this to be posted;)
Date: 04/09/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
aw i love this! update more soon!
Date: 04/09/09 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
yay you finally updated=DDD
that was really sad=(
wow another kid????damn bill is gonna be mad!!!!=/tom just doesn't know how to keep his "thing" still huh??!!
thanks for the chapter, i hope we get more soon???=D
Date: 04/09/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bill... I can't believe Tom has another kid that man hore....lmao..Jk Love the way Bill went to see his mom.I know its hard for him, I went through it too....Beautiful chapter can't wait for more... Lots of love here.
Date: 04/09/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
awww...billa...glad tom is there with you!
wtf tom?another son? how is bill going to react? oh god..
love this!
and love the new banner!
thanks!
Date: 04/09/09 04:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating! I really do love this story and I couldn't wait for another chapter.
On that note, Whoa girly you dropped a bomb on this story! For some reason I knew that there was something more with that girl that really wanted to talk to Tom, but I wasn't expecting this and that's a good thing; you really surprised me.
I'm extremely curious about why the grandmother hates Bill...or why Bill hates his grandmother just as much. I'm also wondering where that uncle is. Is he Hope's husband or another uncle.
The end of the chapter was sweet which was something that the story needed considering the drama that's about to start. I really do hope that Bill is able to carry the baby full term like he wants even though its been difficult.
On a last note, I wonder what would Bill feel finding out that Tom has another son with some other person and a woman at that, when he's already insecure about the fact that Tom cheated on him with a woman?
Again, I really do love this story to pieces, and though you had a writers block I'm glad that you updated and that it really wasn't that long.
I'm also looking forward to reading your collaborative story as well.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! I so love you and you long reviews! Bills uncle is the one that.....you know....and he isnt aunt faith or hope's husband. just his mothers brother. we will find out next chapter about Bill's familiy for Hope's pov....Bill's going to act like anyone acts when they find out about another child. i am in the process of writing the next chapter, and please do read the story called FOREVER. Thank you so much for staying on this crazy ride and look out for the next chapter.rnXXXX
Date: 04/06/09 01:23 am Title: Chapter 9
What's going on girly? Please update soon.
I just re-read some of the last few chapters so I'm ready for more. It's sad that their relationship is on the rocks but sometimes that's how it is. It's just going to take more effort for their relationship to function.
I also hope that bill pregnancy goes ok and that his ex doesn't cause too much disturbance into the relationship but its bound to happen. I would like to learn more about Bill's aunt and his uncle as well.
Either way, please update soon, you're one of my favorite authors on this site so I'll be patiently waiting...
Date: 03/30/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 9
:D I've been away for a week and I'm so happy to be back home where I have internet so I can read this^^ Oh, and have I ever mentioned how much I like the name of the twins? :P *cough*especiallyone*cough*
Can't wait for more:D
Date: 03/25/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
"I saw him visibly relaxed. We snuggled into each other, and closed our eyes. I felt, and heard Tom’s breathing even out, but I couldn’t sleep.
I knew something big was coming."
THAT IS WHAT SHE SAID xDD
Lmao I LOVE yer story dude.
It's amazing. But what I find kinda weird is that Bill and a bunch of other dudes keep getting knocked up O_o
Idk, but it's starting to happen alot now lol
Date: 03/24/09 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh woah im scared
but wow bill no bitchness 0.0
anyways great chapter
Date: 03/24/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
finally they aren't mad anymore!!!!
i still don't like that girl in the hotel=S
i want tom to stop being like that to bill, i want him to be more sweet to him=DD
thanks for the update.
Date: 03/24/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
WHOOOO omg update i love the long chapters and the writing is fantastic. lol