Date: 06/19/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
Thanks so much for undating, I was waiting for this patiently. I really do follow this story like it's my shadow so I love when you update.
I'm still kinda shocked about what happened, but that's how life really is sometimes.
I liked the flashbacks, especially the one with Bill, I really wanted to know what happened to his mother. Maybe Bill and Tom should have a serious heart to heart. That is the only way their marriage will survive. Bill have some issues and so does Tom.
Is Tom going to cheat? It looks like he wants to. I think that he doesn't realize that he's sobotaging his own marriage. Like he said, he didn't want to be married in the first place he feels forced.
Keep up the good writing and updating.
Date: 06/19/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
That was about time!
Please don't put in any more cheating...please...
Great and long chapter;D I've been waiting for this for ages now!
Date: 06/19/09 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Okay, one thing first; Ren is just soooo cute! I have to take pain killer pills whenever i have my period because i get dizzy and i feel nauseous and feel like fainting, plus it hurts so bad that i'm just whishing to die... Well, anyway(You can use that if you want, i don't care;D) Ren is soooo sweet, did i tell that already? Well she is! I just whished she would have told Tom instead of Gordon and Simone... Well, Simone is okay, but Tom had the rights to know... lol.
Tom, you better get your guts together and get the hell back to Bill and DO NOT get any new feelings for ANYONE! Ya hear me? *knock on skull* Hellooooo?! *screams*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! rnrnI have to agree with you because I too feel like passing out and just plain dying when the cramps get overboard. As for Tom, he found out, but think about it....what little girl who just got her period would go and tell her father. Its more of a lady thing....which (eventhough) Bill isnt a lady, in Ren's mind he's like another mom to her. In future chapters I'm going to let Tom go bra shopping with her....that will be fun...lol....rnrnTom wont do anything....Ren will tell Bill in a heart beat...rnrnThanks agin for your review! I love seeing them!rnrn:)
Date: 05/09/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 12
how sad! goodness lots of drama! i am enjoying learning more about bill's past though. keep up the good work, i look forward to more. :)
Date: 05/06/09 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
:O
That was mean..so so mean!
Bad girl!
But I'm sure you have a good reason for it:/
I've been waiting for this chapter, and it didn't disappoint me^^
Date: 05/06/09 05:32 am Title: Chapter 12
oh god! THe first part was so sweet but the last part... oh my god! She's dead? Oh my god! SO sad!
Oooh, thank you for writing this hunnie!
Date: 05/06/09 03:30 am Title: Chapter 12
First of all...you surprise me! I am from Mexico and I still have no idea where Rosarito is!
Also...OMFG poor Ren!! I mean...the girl must be traumatized after al that!! I would be!! I hope they find the bastard!!
And...Aww...Bill's mom was just AWESOME!!
I love this...I really really do!! You reallt let me hanging with the final part!! *starts panicking*
I feel something bad coming from all this!!
Date: 05/06/09 03:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Why?! Why did I missed this chapter!? And you didn't tell me!! *goes to the corner and cries*
It was really good!! MOre!!
*goes to read the next chapter*
Date: 05/06/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 12
This is so unexpected and sad!!! I was ubberly surprised in the last scene. It was just starting the get lighter but then something dramatic happened.
You always surprise me, but I'm not sure how I feel about this. I'm mixed in feeling sad and indifferent. I never really decided if I liked Lorraine but I didn't hate her exactly.
There is just some much drama in this story, literally everyone have something dramatic going on. I thought that the revelation about Tom's secret son was enough to surprise, but then you pull another stunt.
This is not a bad thing you are doing, actually it is making more hooked on your story!
Aside from that, I'v really loving this story, sorry I didn't review last time, but I'll make a point to reviewing this story especially since I'm enjoying it so much.
Date: 05/05/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
awww this is so sad
im crying as i type litterly tears are down my cheek
probably it's also cause im listeing to this sonq http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rL5mF3VxIwc
aww thank you that my name was included here :D
im a big fan of your work :D
Date: 05/05/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
This was really good and all till about half way through. Then it doesnt seem realistic. I know that it most likely needs to happen for your plot but if maybe it could be written a bit different then maybe that would help but right now it doesnt seem like it fits. I am sorry to be so blunt. Other than that I really like it. I keep wondering when Tom is going to tell Bill about the other kid and what christian and Serinity will do. I can see Christian totaly blowing up about it. That is what I see happening.
Author's Response: I know...i know....i need something dramatic and i didnt know how to write it. I have to write the funeral part and i dont know how to do that either but i'm going to play around with it. Do you have any ideas? i'm all ears...lol...Tom is going to break it too him after Bill finds the picture. i looking for a way for Bill to blow up about it? Thanks for review!
Date: 05/05/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear. That's not good. I'm so glad you finally updated!
Author's Response: Thank You! I wasnt too sure on the death scene but i tried my best..lol...anyways i was waiting for you review and I wanted to thank you for review all the time since B.D.! Thanks!
Date: 05/05/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
whoa..... oh mein gottt...... THIS IS AMAZING!!! UPDATE!
btw, thanks for the mention above?
Author's Response: Not a problem. Thanks for reviewing all the time! I'm going to review soon!
Date: 05/05/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
So said. Like Tom said in this story no kid should go through that..Love the chapter can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I know....it's really sad. I'm glad you liked it! I will bs posting again soon if I get all my regulars to review! LOL. Thanks for always reviewing!
Date: 04/19/09 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
I just started reading A Beautiful Disaster about a week ago and was SO glad to see there was a sequel. Now that I'm caught up I will comment more! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 04/19/09 01:19 am Title: Chapter 11
ugh bill's grandmother and aunt whatever her name is no offence i dnt remember are really big dicks there pissing me off -_-'
Author's Response: aunt Faith...lol...they are assholes...lol..thanks for reviewingrn
Date: 04/18/09 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
Go aunt Hope!!!!! You tell them... I can't wait to see Bill's reaction to what Tom did for him so sweet.... Love it can't wait for more.
Date: 04/18/09 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 11
:D
*dancing around in a happy little circle*
Date: 04/18/09 10:48 am Title: Chapter 11
aw i love it! update more soon