Date: 06/30/09 04:16 am Title: Chapter 14
Wow, how many times did Tom cheat? I thought that it was only actually once during the marriage, but then he was always seeing other people also?
I don't really have any suggestions, I think I already like how you're writing the story.
I love the drama.
I do think that Bill should talk to Tom about the cheating, but Tom should also talk to Bill about how he feels too.
I don't think that Bill is being a hopeless case at all, he's being realistic. Tom is still cheating on him on and off, and making him feel like he is to blame for everything, so it's realistic to think that they've fallen out of love with eachother.
Date: 06/30/09 04:08 am Title: Chapter 14
Amazing chapter, I feel so bad that it's come to them getting a divorce.
Ren is adorable and observant for a 9 yr old.
I can't wait to see what happens when Tom gets back.
Date: 06/30/09 01:12 am Title: Chapter 14
awww i cried again lol
wow but honestly you make this so emotional and vivid in other words you have true talent on writing and showing every detail
Date: 06/29/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
Finally Bill has decided to take charge, and Tom should be ashamed of himself!
Date: 06/29/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh come in, I don't want them to divorce!!! Bill is being a hopeless case due to his pregnancy. I think he should do it either through song or poem. I love the story and I still reread Beautiful Disaster to this day.
Date: 06/29/09 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
*gasp* nooo!! Tom and Bill can't break up!! T_T
i have no idea how Bill should express his feelings...maybe a huge blow out fight where things don't look like they can get better?
And both of them are being hopeless, that's what makes this story so goood!! :) update soon n.n
Date: 06/29/09 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, I can see how stupid they get even more..@__@ They should do marriage counseling. Baaahhh..>__< They obviously don't know how to listen and let their emotions get too them and their stubbornness. I want to smack them both in the head they're both acting like idiots!!>__
Date: 06/29/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
oh no...here we go again...
duh tom you have to fix it!
and bill you can't kiss bushido! and in front of your children! and then you make me feel sorry for you when you're crying!
don't let them get a divorce..nooo..they are made for each other.
*car accident?hmm*
Author's Response: I know...here we go again.rnrnTom will fix this.....trust me! Lol!rnAt first Bill was suppose to push him away but my love for Bilshido came out and I made Bill respond to it...bad me...lol!rnrnIm coming to terms with Bill playing the hopeless card and i didnt even know it. I have a lot of work to do with the story. 'Beautiful Disaster was easy to write. Ill try harder. Oh well thanks for reviewing! They make my dad!
Date: 06/29/09 11:06 am Title: Chapter 14
I really love your story but I mean Bill doesn't have the right to do what he does. Hanging out with the man you had and affair with is completely disrespectful. Letting in the house with your children and then letting them see you kiss him is uncalled for. Also, Ren sounds like a damn brat because if she knows that Tom cheated on Bill doesn't she also know that Bill cheated on Tom. Bill plays the helpless act way to freaking much really he does.
Author's Response: Your'e soooo right!!! Oh my gosh. I never really notice that I was making Bill play the helpless card and that Ren was turning in to a brat. It never crossed my mind about the disrespectfulness in letting Bushido visit the house. I wanted them to be friends so to speak. I knew the kissing thing was a bit much.rnrnDamn. Now I have to rethink how i'm going to write the characters/chapters now. Thanks for pointing these things out to me before I got too deep into the next chapter. I'm really stuck now! Lol! rn
Date: 06/29/09 10:10 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh lord I haven't a clue what to tell you all I can say is I love this chapter story all together...I hope you update more often.
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried really hard to show emotion. This was a hard chapter to write sort of and the next one will be too. Thanks for the review and I'm planning on it if I can get the chapters written and beta'd in time!rnrn=)
Date: 06/29/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 14
thank you so much for this chapter. it cheered me up to see something from you... i just found out that my boyfriend has been cheating on me, so i was hella depressed
Author's Response: Oh no! I hope you feel better! I'm glad I could help cheer up! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/29/09 09:10 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh god, i get so sad when i read this... I think that Bill should run to Tom's arms, kiss him deeply and the slap him, teling him how stupid he is and such, i could use that... lol, thank you!
Author's Response: He might! Lol! It sounds like a good idea to do that. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/21/09 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
awww i cried
at the funrel part :.)
great chapter thou
Date: 06/19/09 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh my gosh, UPDATE BRIT!!! I missed this story SOOO much!
Date: 06/19/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
You updated, You updated! But...WTF with that Anne! I want her out OUT OUT!! Tom and Bill should be together always! *pulls out a gun* If that Anne dares to try to tear the apart I don't know what I would be able to do!! *threatens Anne*
Update soon, PLEASEEEEE!! And you know I will be there for ANYTHING you need! :D I'm always glad to help you because I love you!! *0*
Author's Response: Hi friend!rnrnI know you would be there. I'm waiting to finish the next chapter so we can start fresh if you want too. I have so much I want to write! Tom isn't going to get with her. I'll let you on a little serect. rnrnBill will think he did cause of the paprazzi pictures he will see in the next chapter. Hahahahahahaha! rnrnThanks for the update darling. Can wait to hear from you soon!
Date: 06/19/09 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wait what? She's 9 and got her period? That can't be right ...
Author's Response: Oh it can happen! I checked into it and couldn't believe it myself. So I had to put it in the story. I was wondering when someone was going to question it. Lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/19/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh no. I hope this isn't going to go where I think it's going. Bill cheated once. How many times did Tom cheat? And then didn't tell Bill he had a son for a MONTH? I really don't understand why Bill keeps forgiving him. I mean, I know he loves him, but you'd think after a while, Bill would figure out that wasn't going to change.
Thanks for the shoutout!! I'm glad to review your AMAZING CHAPTERS.
Date: 06/19/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
*squeals* I just thought about this story like...two hours ago or something and then dang, a update! *_* Ooh, this is so great! ^^
Date: 06/19/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG Tom seems to run into his old gf's fast.. I see. Its a great story can't wait for more.
Date: 06/19/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for updating=D
There sure is a lot of drama going on in this story huh? When i thought Tom's long lost son was a big problem, but no forfget i ever said that,here comes this other-Anne chick to ruin Tom and Bill's relatioinship yet again=/
It kinda makes me mad that they can't be happy and together for at least a little amount of time 'cause there's always something threatening to break their family apart!!but i guess that's life right?
You know one of the main reasons why i love this story so much is the daily problems they go through. At first, i didn't like it cos i thought there were was to much drama involved but then i thought to myself, they're basically having the same trouble an average family does in the real world.
This story shows that marriage isn't always easy, the couple have to go through a lot of things to become the perfect family people often fantasize about.
It's not just like they're gonna marry and live a happily ever after type of life, there's a lot of hard things they have to overcome. And many fics here in THF don't show the trouble Tom and Bill might go through if they decide to form a family together, but you do=D
Sorry i stopped reviewing but the drama kinda scared me away,i alosmt forgot that the drama was why your story attracted me in the first place, but now i'm back and ready to read through all the drama you throw at usXD
oh yeah one more thing, why does the banner look like that???you want me to send it to you again???
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I was wondering when I was going to get one from you! I'm so sorry that I scared you way. I also thought that it had a lot drama but I like it. Lol. I try to make it seem like a real family from taking expericene from my family and other families. Except the killing part. Tom isn't going to do anything. Trust me. I have it planed out. As for you banner I had to resize it cause it was too big. You can send it again I you like. I love your long long long reviews. It keeps me motivated! Thanks for the review! Hope you'll stick around!rnrn:)