Date: 07/22/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
u should have one of their kids kidnapped by someone in Bill's family or past
Author's Response: I been thinking about that but i would have to think of which child and who would be the kidnapper and stuff? Any suggestions? rn=)
Date: 07/21/09 04:28 am Title: Chapter 15
FINALLY THEY STOPPED CHEATING!!!!! gosh, I was really getting sick of it too... thank you brittany!
I think the upcoming chapters should mostly focus on chris and Tom... you know, dad and son bonding... the difficulties and the successes. we don't really see much of that
sorry this review is so late. i'm about 8600 miles from california and internet is really expensive.
Author's Response: There is a few conflicts and bonding between Chris and Tom. I hope their good!
Date: 07/17/09 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wow this was a long chapter. Let's see first I'm glad that Saki intervened with the separation and made Bill think hard about it but then I'm not sure it was such a good idea. I mean Tom basically said that he knew he was hurting Bill each time he cheated but he did it anyway because he just couldn't help it. It's just a sad excuse. But in reality (of the story of course;)Bill couldn't handle raising all of his children by himself without at least another man in the house. I was kinda hoping the separation did happen just to see if Bushido would try to be with Bill and see what Tom would do.
As for your poll I think you've started some kind of a conflict with Tom/Bill with Chris. Tom is afraid of Chris becoming like Bill. What does Bill think about it? When Bill was growing up he had a hard time with his father not accepting him as he is as well.
Lastly, please don't have the car crash resulting in any deaths, it'll be too hard.
And lastly (again) I want to know what happens a Bill's aunt house, hope it's interesting.
Date: 07/16/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am glad they were able to work things out and that Tom will finally be faithful, I was reading this chapter and the whole time I'm thinking please don't mess thing up again with Bill, but you chapter end notes calmed me down since you mentioned that there won't be any more cheating. I'm curious to see how the week is going to go for Tom with Chris. I'm also excited to see how this car crash is going to go down.
Date: 07/16/09 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
They should stay single until they settle their differences by talking like adults not children.
Its very good so far keep it up :)
Date: 07/16/09 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 15
hmm first of all i really liked this chapter..i'm so glad they didn't get the divorce!
as for the conflicts maybe tom could loose his patience with chris now that they are alone and bill would be upset...just an idea
looking forward for moore
Date: 07/16/09 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am so conffused who will be in the car acciedent. Is Bill going to be alright no more of Tom cheating PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/16/09 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 15
Tom! Tomtomtomtomtomtomtomtom!
How do I want it to happen? Good question...Tom's driving somewhere and then something crashes into him and he gets hurt:D:D I'm not really picky, surprise me^^ :p
Again, great chapter and I'm so happy that Tom and Bill are getting along again. I was really fearing that you'd seperate them in this one
Date: 07/16/09 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
No more tears!! yay!!
I'm sorry I haven't written anything but I'm in the closure of the summer school and arranging some things for Finland but next week I WILL write until we finish all we have started!
Now...I have to say that I can relate Bill...cheatings are SO bad and really difficult to get over to. Actually my parents separation/discussion was because of that and my mom was very affected for that. She just couldn't forgive him and I know what it feels to know that your dad cheated on your mom.
I actually wouldn't be able to forgive someone for cheating but I'm glad Bill did it...and also I think that Tom should win Bill all over again, like giving him flowers and such...
And as for conflicts...maybe Tom knows that Bushido came to see Bill? Even if they didn't do anything...but kiss (and that's why I want him dead!)
Ok, now I have to get back to work on my project!
I LOVE you SO fucking much and you know that!
Date: 07/16/09 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well...I'm very glad there will be no more cheating. I would think Bill (at least) would be very insecure about Tom's cheating, regardless of the fact that he forgave him...But other than that, I got nothing.
I love this chapter. I really do. So so much. And I'm so glad the cheating is over and that they FINALLY talked about it!
Date: 07/16/09 11:34 am Title: Chapter 15
Who to be involved? *squeak* I mean, Bill almost lost Christian already so maybe not him. But if you put Tom and/or some of the kids there, preggyBill may not take the stress lightly either. O_O Damn, I don't want ANYONE to be in a car accident. I don't know should Bill even be driving anymore, he's already 6 months along and by the time the accident would come, even more than that. Eep O.o You decide, I don't want to say like "Let's crush someone!" -_-
Date: 07/16/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh my god. I can't believe I totally missed this chapter. It must have been updated while I was at camp...Seeing as you already wrote the next chapter...well. The poll thing is pointless, but I think you know my views on the matter.
Date: 07/16/09 10:18 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG!! A Car Accident?!?! Goodness>___< You're being a meanie!! Haha..
Thank you for the Marriage counseling thing. Too much anger fogs your reasoning. Bill really needed to clear his mind. He was making big steps without looking. Thank God that part's over. And Tomi better get a hold of his.. Horny-ness. Hmph.
Why a Car accident?!?! I hope that won't be something toooooo serious. Please don't kill anybody. Bill had undergone too much pressure already - and he has a kid on the way!!@__@
I can't think of any other HUGE conflict at the moment. Maybe when the kids grow up - you know, hormones and stuff - now THAT's problematic..-__- And what happened to Bill's Ex-boyfriend? I thought he was gonna do something - take Bill back to him?
Hmm... But seriously, I don't think I'd want big dramas anymore - and most especially at the moment. The fandom is already going through a lot and the boys had been into a lot already that it's just depressing..-_____- Can't believe such hate exists that you'd hurt someone for irrational, stupid reasons. Hope Gustav gets well soon and it doesn't affect hi, too much.-__- Among the four of them he has already gone through a lot of trouble...T^T
I'm very much thankful for the update though...^^
Date: 07/16/09 03:46 am Title: Chapter 15
I love it! Thank you for making Nat point out to Bill his disrepectful behavior. One thing though,is Tom going to find out about Bill kissing Bu? I really think you should have Christian tell him. Kids always give parents away. I also think that you should have them continue to go to counseling, they still need it bad lol. I always love when you update because you always give us so much. Finally thanks for the acknowledgement for my reviews!
Date: 07/16/09 02:51 am Title: Chapter 15
This was amazing! Everything is good... For now;D haha;D Hmmm... Bill should get stomach pains and call Tom and blah blah blah;D Maybe they have to get home earlier because of that? That could be cool! I loved it!
Date: 07/11/09 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 14
Maybe Tom could somehow get Bill to go to another counsling session or maybe Bills dad, and then the counsler could tell Bill to write a diary and then when they go back a third time then he has to read it to Tom, to show his true feelings. Just a suggestion. I like this and how Serenity told Tom how she was feeling and how she knew what was going on. I loved it. Great job.
Date: 07/09/09 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG! I don't know...I feel...confused!! I mean...I hate that Tom cheated on Bill and I hate that Bill cheated on Tom AND with Bushido!! I think they're not falling out of love...I think they're just keeping too much things from each other...that they should communicate.
A marriage with children is pretty hard but I think they can handle. They just need to reconnect and find themselves again as a couple.
Please! Please let them be together! I cannot see Bill wit anyone alse andyou know it! Make me happy!
*begs*
Date: 07/01/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!! I think Tom sooo needed that kick in the face from Ren! Even though it was a little out of line for a 9 yr old. Bill and Tom need to talk without Bill being such a bitch about everything, he just needs to stop running from everything and suck it up! Bushido needs to just back the fuck up! They still could be friends but Tom and Bill need to straighten things out first.
I started reading the series a little late, but I love IT!!!Update soonish? PLZ?
Date: 07/01/09 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 14
I was just about to write "car accident" when I saw what you wrotexD
Thank you:D
I don't think I like how Bill is behaving right now, how he's taking everything, but oh well...I guess you're doing it for a reason.
I'm just ask one more time, please don't divorce them..
Date: 07/01/09 01:17 am Title: Chapter 14
i do think its kind of going at the same point again... helpless bill... bushido... tom and other women... i think its good that serenity said what she said to tom but really the way he is acting doesnt show st all that he loves bill... leaving his pregnant husband alone with 3 kids without ANY news for two weeks what kind of heartless person can do that not a loving husband for sure
there isnt anough happy moments anymore and tom really isnt trying to make it work when your daughter of 9 years old open your eyes on your problems there is a fucking huge problem
what i think its stop making them cheat on eachother i think they had enough and try to make it work slowly but you know for me right now they look like an helpless couple who isnt even trying to make it work but getting it worse... but you know thats only my opinion